Lu Mingfei and Platinum Players

Love to watch! It's different from the ones I've seen so far. It's great not to treat Ming Fei as a cover-up or as a fringe person. There are only a few Dragon Clan fans who can basically watch it. The plot direction of the original part is quite interesting. The writing is also good. I love watching V and Lu Mingfei bickering. Although Ming Fei was always thinking about Chen Wenwen in the early stage, V and I were silent together after watching it. But it will get better in the later stage, which is worth looking forward to. In fact, I feel that this book is more suitable for people without cp (whisper) Rather than watching a love story and a harem, I think it's more interesting to watch V and Ming Fei's friends interacting with each other. I'm so excited that I just want to watch the fighting and pretending to be x(

First of all, this book exceeded my own expectations. In fact, when I saw the introduction and the title of the novel, I was very resistant to reading it. It is recommended that the author consider changing to some more attractive titles and introductions (of course, this may only be for me personally) Secondly, as a second-generation dragon novel, this book has an interesting positioning of the protagonist (it actually replaced the Little Devil, but one theory is that it is even worse than the Little Devil.) Can it be said that it is a Plus version of Lu Mingfei's Little Devil? Then, the difficulty of second-generation dragon novels is to write the style of Jiangnan's youthful sorrow literature, and the author depicts it very well and integrates his own style (I think it is a funny and crazy complaint, similar to Gintama?) Into the storyline. It can be said that there are many meme elements written in it, but it does not appear cluttered. On the contrary, it enriches the image of the protagonist and makes the character more vivid and eye-catching. Finally, I hope that in the subsequent plot, the author can depict the highlights of each character, which will not only make readers happy, but also resonate with and think about the characters in the novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard, may this book become a hit, and write a different book about the Dragon Clan! ! ! This is my first time writing a review, so please forgive me if it offends me [Love]

Finally there is the real Lu Mingfei, instead of a time traveler using a shell of Lu Mingfei

It's very exciting. From what I've seen, the plot is about the protagonist helping Lu Mingfei as a second personality, taking over Lu Mingze's position, and then bringing in a small system. It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't have the ability to take over. It's almost embarrassing. The character creation of Lu Mingfei is very good, and the real bad guy is very good-looking. I want to slap him, but the subsequent growth is also okay. The protagonist is trying hard to stop Ming Fei from being a licker [laughing and crying]

Introducing variables, pointing out the cute contrast between the conspiracy theory that cannot be understood by Lu Mingfei's brain circuit and Lu Mingfei's own thoughts, the joyful cross talk and the step-by-step main line complement each other. This is the stage of unpredictable destiny that I am looking forward to! I realized—— If the author can maintain this level throughout the book and implement it smoothly, it will be worth the money even if I die! It's on fire!

Good news: 1. This book has a kid-friendly feel. Lu Mingfei's classic nonsense and V's bickering are very interesting. 2. The writing style has a Jiangnan flavor, characterized by literary youth and many long and difficult sentences. 3. Lu Mingfei has experienced changes in growth Bad news: 1. The content is complicated. I read 200,000 words and Cassel didn't even get to it. 2. The quality of plug-ins keeps dropping. 3. There are too many auxiliary parts of AI, and there are so many typos that I suspect it is voice typing. 4. The emotional change is Chen Wenwen and Nono, but there is no emotional change. Well, I have started to read books now, and I feel like there is something wrong with the logic.

It's actually well written. It's very dragon-like. An unreliable bad kid paired with another equally unreliable plug-in. But dragons are dragons, and not everyone likes this style.

Go Lu Mingfei made me re-experience the frustration of watching the Dragon Clan hate it.

Very nice fanfic This novel successfully portrays Lu Mingfei's bad boy character which is almost the same as the original novel, and there are also many jokes in it. A+! Even the ring masters in the city were moved to tears when they saw this work! Recommend!

I have read the latest chapter. Let me tell you, the original plot of this novel is really well written. Although I have not dabbled in many games and TV series, and I have never heard of the weapons and alchemy potions created by Lu Mingfei, there is no denying that this is really a good fan novel. The character of the original Dragon Clan character itself is not very OOC. Lu Mingfei faded a bit in the beginning, but he also felt that he has grown up later on, at least he is more confident than in the original work. Another point is that there was too little foreshadowing for the new original characters to appear later. Once they appeared, I couldn't figure out why they suddenly started fighting with Angers and the vice principal. And it wasn't Yuan Jisheng [forgetting how to write his name] who was fighting Angers, why did Angers suddenly turn into fighting with several female original characters, and his fighting power was on par with Angers. For such an awesome character, the author had no other foreshadowing. He only arranged for the little devil to say a few words in riddles, and only said that it might be caused by V, but he did not explain where they came from, and why he wanted to create a world where everyone is a dragon? After reading this volume, I thought I had missed a few chapters, and the most important point is, why is Eva's personality not in Norma? Has it been stolen? Who stole it? Why was Eva's personality put into the chip? It's like writing the solution and answer to a math problem, but the process is gone. The plot settings are very attractive, but the key plot transitions are not clearly written. I can only give four stars for this.

It is not limited to the original text, but has even undergone drastic changes to the plot. There are some new settings. Lu Mingfei has become less sentimental because of the protagonist, but it is still not clear-cut. The character description is very good, and character conflicts are very common in it. For example, in the conversation between the protagonist and Lu Mingfei, when hunting lobsters, the trio will not spare anyone's mouth. It is considered a fine novel. The setting of traveling through time and becoming Narusawa is quite novel, as he takes on the identity of a portable grandfather. Overall, it's worth reading. I've read about 50 chapters so far. Let's watch the plot develop later.

The author writes very well and is very rigorous. For many things, I have to give examples to explain the reasons, etc., Which gives me the feeling that I am not watching a second creation, but an original work [face covering]. The only drawback is that the author wrote it after reading several original works. For example, people who have only read one or two of the works will not be able to understand the meaning of many character examples that appear in the later works. Although the overall reading does not affect the reading, it is recommended that the author write more explanations and supplements to make it easier for people who have not read the whole movie to understand. I can't comment on the plot, I can only say that it suited my taste. The characters of the protagonist and some characters are still well restored, especially Lu Mingfei, who is almost exactly the same as the original. Those who are interested can read more. Give me full marks, the author will update more

The writing is so good, damn, I swallowed a whole Jiangnan alive. Regardless of the characterization, the language used to describe various environments is particularly good, and Lu Mingfei's character arc is also performed well. Why is it only 6 o'clock? Author, please update it quickly. As long as you update it, I can do whatever you want me to do! ! !

It's okay, but it feels like the details are generated using Deepseek, and some of the plots don't connect very well [face covering]

It's very good, but there are a lot of words in the description. I'm used to reading those short novels. This kind of traditional serious description is more suitable for reading slowly, but when the bad boy makes his debut riding a motorcycle, he is really handsome. The writing is really good, everyone is himself, not only for the sake of the plot, but also for the plot. Shao Zai also has the feeling of a newborn calf. He does it when he should do it, and is subtle where he should be subtle. There are not many twists and turns. They are all simple thoughts. Shao Zai is Shao Zai, and you can see it clearly even if you are not arrogant. All in all, it's very beautiful.

Needless to say, awesome. It truly captures the essence of fan fiction. He wrote something new. Different from previous Dragon Clan fandoms, he really wrote a good story in this book. Instead of simply following the original framework, the battle with Locomotive Lobster is very nice. Completely original plot. Very beautifully written.

It's good-looking, the protagonist is the real Lu Mingfei, and the time traveler (V) is equivalent to Lu Mingfei's grandfather👴🏻. Watching Lu Mingfei gradually become responsible under V's "lure", many tragedies have been avoided. This book is very beautiful! A must-read book for "Dragon" fans! [Blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, but the content is still a bit tiring.

After reading four chapters, I feel like I'm really impressed. It's so exciting, man [laughs] Quick update, can't sleep at night [Like]

When I was reading Dragon Clan, I fantasized about whether there could be a second personality to help Lu Mingfei make some right choices. V perfectly fits my fantasy. The author's writing style is very good, very similar to Jiang Nan. Lu Mingfei is also like He Zhizhang, which fits my impression of him [Like] [Like] [Like]

The writing is great and I'm looking forward to the follow-up with Lu Mingfei, who will be the messenger, substitute, and face to face with others, and then watch others' surprised looks, as if they are saying to Lu Mingfei, how can you say such a thing? Aren't you a loser? Just like during the interview

It's so funny. I really like V and Lu Mingfei's mutual quarrels. The score should be lower and more stable. I think everyone next door is suppressing the score. Dragon Tomato has no copyright. If the score is too high, it will be removed from the shelves. When it is finished, I will change the score back.

The writing style is as delicate as Jiangnan, and compared to the plot of Dragon Clan fandom, it is equivalent to a major overhaul, but it is surprisingly good. The characters are restored to a high degree, and Lu Mingfei's bad words are restored to the original work. If you want to write a new book, please don't write fan fiction. No matter how well written the fan fiction is, it is just an imitation. Most people can't remember the second mountain. I look forward to your follow-up and new works.

The writing style is quite good, and all kinds of jokes can be easily picked up, especially the youthfulness of Lu Mingfei is maintained, and Lu Mingfei is not written in a greasy and vulgar way, which is already better than most of the Dragon Clan fans.

This is the novel I want to read, and the AI used by the author is very skillful, not obtrusive, and has his own writing style Brother, the writing is really good. It's beautiful.

This is one of the few books I have read about the second creation of Dragons that I think is very good. The author used the plots and words from early games and some current games to substitute them into the text. This made me a little confused for a while, because I don't know much about certain games. However, based on my more than 10 years of reading novels, this is a rare second creation that I think is good.

It's really good. It's definitely a high-level Dragon Clan fan. Come on and write, I'll help you promote it [Cool]

It's good-looking. It's not Lu Mingfei's story. It's quite fun to be Lu Mingfei's golden-fingered grandfather. I hope there won't be any cp.

How can I put it this way? I don't really like original plots, but the character settings are pretty good. I always skip the original parts, but I can't skip them when I say bad things every day [laughter]

It's so beautiful 🤩[ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart] I will follow it. I hope it is finished. I feel that the author is very good at various descriptions and the descriptions are vivid and vivid. I feel that I can learn some words and sentences from this article to improve my description level. It is amazing