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The author's writing style is very good and the description is delicate. Here are some suggestions: First, we can add some conflict plots. Since it is on the fairy boat, we can write about the war with the Fengrao people. Besides, the protagonist is also Yunqi. Second, although the detailed descriptions are vivid and fascinating, the author often seems to overlook some aspects. For example, since there is only one female protagonist, Mu Chen, Tingyun's previous confession is completely unnecessary. Later, because the protagonist was drunk and became a brother-sister relationship, it would feel very strange. It could be written directly in one day. The relationship between Tian and Tian is closer, like brother and sister; and I think the main plot in Xingtie should be promoted. After all, the protagonist went to find Tingyun because of Huanwu at the beginning; and some foreshadowing, why did Jingyuan let Yanqing worship a rescued foreigner who had just embarked on his life as a disciple? If it is foreshadowing, I hope the author will handle it well. The above personal opinions are for reference only. I hope the author will become more popular as he writes more! [Laugh]

It's nice, meow, the knife is written very well, meow, it's despairing, meow, Xiaoyiyin-chan, keep on working hard, meow

It's quite interesting, but I would like to ask the author, Dada, whether this book has a single heroine or multiple heroines. If it is a single heroine, is it Tingyun or Muchen? I hope the author can answer it for me as soon as possible

The writing is so good that I even got a little involved in it. I hope the author will never stop writing. As long as he keeps writing, someone will come to check in with you every day [sending heartfelt wishes]