Reincarnation**********

There is a reason why there are so few readers. In the first half of the book, the author has almost stepped on all the possible mistakes. Of course, some people may think this is not a mistake, but it is undeniable that the proportion of "spiritual mysophobia" readers on the Tomato platform is definitely high, and these people will definitely not be persuaded to leave after reading ten chapters of this book. If you want this book to improve, the previous plot must be changed, and a major change, or if you want to save trouble, delete all the previous chapters. Although the author has been talking about what the plot is foreshadowing in paragraphs and comments... But here is Tomato. Internet articles are greatly affected by the fast-foodization of entertainment, and Tomato is one of the platforms with the most serious fast-foodization. Basically no readers in Western Persimmon will care whether your plot is foreshadowing. They will only curse and run away when they see what they think is a "poisonous point".

Secretly give yourself a 5-star rating...

When we talk about elves, what do we think of, the "Lord of the Rings" written by the literary author Tolkien, the World Tree of ancient Nordic mythology, or the "Yggdrasil Game" of modern Chinese online articles? The elves in modern literature inherit elegance and nobility, and are also the daughters of trees and earth, the darlings of nature and life; they represent the fantasy species in fantasy works and are the embodiment of human beings' natural yearning for spirituality and beauty. Every fantasy online novel will describe other non-human intelligent species, among which elves can be said to be the representatives among representatives. Every description of them is a catharsis of fantasy. Some elves are noble and arrogant, some are miserable and violated by slaves, some are innocent and innocent thanks to the blessings of nature, and some are delicate and cautious despite all hardships. Elves often see slavery, trafficking, and violation, but at the same time they also see innocence, kindness, and steadfastness. The beauty of the world is here, as are the evils of the world. Elves are the embodiment of spirituality. Back to this book, this book is written by a new author, who is not very good at writing, and is a little green in plot treatment. It is not suitable for audiences who are looking for strong combat power and an upgraded and refreshing flow of writing. However, the author is good at character description and emotional processing, so it is suitable for readers who like TS transformation novels that have weak emotional attributes, experience and grow over time, and also have sticking elements. In addition, if you like "elves", "Western Fantasy", "Fantasy", "Transformation", "Tie Tie", "One Hundred and One Hundred" and other themes, this book is also a good choice. Finally, the relevant tags are given # elves # # fantasy # Another world road # morph #change single #change hundred #Poster # Orange Flavor # #SLOW ##

Why is no one reading such a beautiful book?

Brother, please, please change the poisonous points. It looks so uncomfortable. You will drive away many people. Currently, four stars is the limit. I will decide whether to change it later. Please listen to my advice. If you really can't change it, just pretend I didn't say it [face covering]

It's very interesting, but the foreshadowing is unnatural, and there are too few descriptions in some places. It just feels like there are two chapters missing from the first contact of all the characters. Don't be afraid of water, author! [Shy] Write more about daily life, give the protagonists more reasons to like each other, and add some highlights to their separation! It's great for a new author to write like this, five stars

It should be good, but the protagonist needs to be strong. If he is weak for too long in the early stage, his interest will become less and less. At least there will be more opportunities to use authority and the price will be lower. Being easily captured as a slave and putting his life in the hands of others will be a little bit discouraging.

Although I know I shouldn't, I still want to know the ending of Sanhuang... At first, I felt that the previous plot was quite boring, but after thinking about it seriously, I felt quite helpless. If there were no three yellows, Eve would starve to death, be caught by Xiao Hei and so on, so the three yellows are quite useful. At the same time, as a very weak god (no majesty, no strength, often bullied, illiterate), she needs a companion to give her the mental strength to persevere, rather than just hanging around for a day. As a "wise man", Sanhuang also needs such a companion. It can be said that two weak lives accompanied each other, and then this bond was suddenly diluted and abandoned. Currently, there is no such person in Sanhuang, and he may even become an enemy. This is my feeling about this episode of Sanhuang Regarding the main character, I felt it was actually pretty bad. First, emotionally speaking, she seems to be very passionate about every relationship, but in fact she is very indifferent to all emotions. When Sanhuang left, she was able to accept the adventure team's next relationship without even being sad. Without the perseverance to recover after being sad, it didn't reflect the protagonist's emotional growth, and she seemed very callous. Secondly, there is a big problem with strength. The setting given by the author is too strong, but it does not reflect much in terms of strength. The protagonist has currently experienced two major battles. However, these two battles were solved by opening keys, which shows that the protagonist has no strength, and also makes the keys very cheap, which does not reflect her growth in strength. In fact, there is no need to arrange all boss battles. It is enough to arrange some small monsters appropriately, and then add an elite monster to put the protagonist into adversity, and finally break out of the cocoon and become a butterfly and grow. Finally, when you get a big growth (such as gaining a kind of divine power), add a boss level. Furthermore, the protagonist is a bit stupid and will fall into every trap. Of course, the author may have wanted to write it this way (mistake). In fact, you can write about the resistance before the trap, but in the end the strength is not enough and he has to be abducted. Instead of letting someone else snatch you away in a bag in your dream. Overall, it's a good Western fantasy novel. You should go about your daily life, fight when you need to fight, be abducted when you need to be abducted, and then move on to the next chapter. The lively and lovely character of the protagonist is well portrayed. I prefer the optimistic spirit of the protagonist, or the open spirit (it's already like this anyway, it can't get any worse)

After reading it, it was pretty good, but when the heroine was kissed by more than one person, I didn't know why it felt a bit uncomfortable. Is the heroine a harvester for her first kiss? [Petrified] [Petrified] [Petrified] Dare I think it's just as scumbag as what the half-elf said in the latest chapters. And that Luna only appeared a few times, but someone who had no role at all kissed the heroine. I really mourned for the city lord's daughter. She didn't even eat meat. The heroine was robbed of her first kiss. The second time it was still not her, and she appeared earlier. The others are really good [love] [love] [love] The plot is relaxed and tense, with twists and turns, but in the new plot, Luna kisses me. I really feel it is unfair. I feel a little stomachache [grieved] [grieved] [grieved], no matter what, I hope the author will do better and better. Keep up the good work [angry] [angry] [angry]

It's sunny and breezy, and it feels comfortable to read. Compared with other novels, it doesn't feel very lively (?). I just can't tell the main plot yet. Is the title of the first volume too general? It gives people the feeling that it may still be in the first volume after 2m words.

Author, I think you can reduce some of the flashpoints, [smile] and create more storylines [smile]

I feel that the subject matter is very novel, but the shortcomings in the plot are obvious. Why did the protagonist get so miserable in the early stage? Whether you have a mysophobia or not, you will feel uncomfortable seeing it. The pace of the previous content is also a bit slow (the plot of Goblin is very long and I don't think it's a good read). The highlight of the five-star book is that the world view of this book is very good, and the character creation is also passable (please ask the author to take some tonic for abusing the protagonist). It has great potential. The author can give me more chapters [Blow kiss]

I have read the second volume now, and I feel that although this book is good, it still has many problems. In the first volume, the protagonist has been driven forward by the plot, and he is basically forced to go to a new map every time. Moreover, the golden finger at the beginning (to upgrade the talent) is useless. In the entire first volume, the golden finger basically only plays the role of attracting the heroine (natural affinity) and acting as a deus ex machina when the plot cannot progress. I hope that in the subsequent plots, the protagonist will be able to stand up and stop being stuck in the Black Iron Stage for half a year like in the first volume, having to resign himself to fate when things happen. Overall, this book is worth looking forward to. It is excellent in character creation and other aspects. We can look forward to what the first-hand author will write in the future [OK]

Nice looking, support the author! The plot of Goblin is too explosive, but it's too short and not enough to watch. I look forward to Huang Mao's appearance again [laughing] After reading it, I was a coward and didn't notice it. The story of a cute, weak, stupid loli slowly growing up in a world full of kindness and malice.

It's been a year. Have you really forgotten all the authors from the past?

It's good to read. It's the first time I've seen a novel about a game that pays homage to Yggdrasil. But when I watched it, I felt like I was watching a collapse, woo woo XX I couldn't do anything.

It varies from person to person. In the early stage, I only felt aggrieved but not very poisonous [face covering]

This book is very judgmental. I recommend casually flipping through the book without reading it. This way, after reading it, you may give a low star rating. This book is okay, but it is just okay. If you specialize in this subject, you can give it a try.

It's really good to read. I believe you wrote this novel because of your own hobbies. The only thing I hope is that you don't let others influence what you want to write.

The writing is very good, the plot is very interesting and the content is very rich. I hope the author can finish it. Come on [like] [send heartfelt]

This book is actually quite good. The protagonist is cute and silly, and the plot is quite interesting. It is a book with great potential.

It's a pity that I don't have many adjectives in my book reviews, so this book is very good. Although it may seem awkward at first and hard to watch, once you watch it later you will find that it is still very good-looking. [Upvote][Upvote] Come on, author!

No, dude [palms face] The Goblin plot in front is too explosive! [Cover face]

Five stars support the author You must not keep books, don't keep books to death (summarized from bloody lessons), even if you open the book and hang up for a few minutes, it will be fine

Where are my three yellows? Where are my three yellows? O(≧口≦)O The plot is a bit bloody, but it doesn't matter, it's a bit of a sweet little story [laughing evilly] What should I do if I'm short of books? I'll be fine after reading this.

I like it very much and support the author. I hope the author will keep making more updates [blowing kiss]

Okay, it's pretty good, but it's a bit sparse and not enough to watch [adoration][adoration]

For this subject matter, the writing is okay, but so far I can't see what the main plot is. It feels a bit like a daily novel.

Although I am a novice, I can feel that the author is writing with great care. It is already very good for a novice to write like this for the first time. It successfully attracted me. Although there are some small flaws, the overall impact is not great. Moreover, the author has some wonderful writings, which are really amazing. What's more, it's updated so quickly that it's not enough to watch, and I finished it in one day!

This is a magical book. The content is okay and not childish. I sincerely recommend everyone to read it. It is definitely not an assembly line novel.