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Apart from the relatively small quantity, the subject matter is novel and quite acceptable. But there is a big limitation. When Ye Luoli's world view was integrated, some took over the spotlight. And the plot content that is too sincere may not be truly meaningful. Taking Ye Luoli's story as the auxiliary line and the current world view as the main line. It will give people an alternative experience of beast-controlling literature. At the same time, you can use synthesis to upgrade the cards. In the rest of the worldview construction process, try to explain some background clearly. If it's a purely cool novel, then the power system can be whatever it is. If not, then the power system needs to be relatively consistent with common sense to a certain extent.

It's well written and the setting is interesting. I would like to give you a small suggestion. In fact, you don't need to write every sentence of the original play. Just write a few key points to summarize it, and write out the audience's reactions like a forum. If every sentence of the original drama was written, the workload would be too large and the plot would be known to the readers, so it would not be necessary. The focus should still be on the direction of the story in this world.

It's good to read, but the name really delayed the book. I read it countless times, but it was crossed out because of the name. It was the automatic recommendation after reading that kept me from missing this book. The main plot of this book is that the heroine travels to a different world with special energy (cards) and awakens special abilities (summons Ye Luoli's fairyland characters to fight as cards). The plot has little to do with Ye Luoli, and appears more as a melon or character background (recalling dreams). Moreover, the author's rants are really interesting. The ability to give Ye Luoli nicknames is excellent. The original plot is considered to be a comedy. The main plot is the traditional level-up monster fighting + academy flow, but with the addition of Ye Luoli's related elements, the plot develops because the familiar characters become more understandable and the conflicts are obvious. It is good to watch, and the world view setting of the different world is also very interesting. I hope there will be more and more updates.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, so pretty! ! ! ! Oi (slap belly) oi (twist) oi (crawl around) oi! ! ! ! ! (Look up to the sky and roar). . The author is holding a rose in his mouth (holding his forehead against the wall). Can you update ten thousand a day? (Hands over the rose)

Author, you are so slow to update. I had to read your novel when I got back from school, but you only updated one chapter. As a qualified cow horse, you have to learn to update a hundred times a day [snickering] [snickering] [smirking] I despise you [smirking] [snickering] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking] [smirking]

Ice Princess × Mrs. Wei, Shi Xi × Hua Ling, Meng Yi × Meng Shu, Tong Yi × Ai Zhen, Yin Chen × Qing Wu, Hao Ni Ai Ni [Adoration] The author's writing style and logic are also very good, it is a good-looking novel

It's very beautiful, the writing is good, and the plot is interesting. It's my favorite among Ye Luoli's books. The description of Ah Bing is very cute, the character is basically non-ooc, and the author is very obedient. It is perfect.

It looks good. In other worlds without Ye Luoli, the cards are Ye Luoli's character settings. Update soon.

The theme is very interesting. I hope there will be more fairies in the future, such as the Love Princess, the Light Fairy, Yin Chen, Luo Li, the Sea Princess, etc. Secretly, I am actually quite looking forward to Mandora, so that the other world can experience the horror of the mirror image („ಡωಡ„)

I feel that the subject matter is quite interesting. Come on, the author. There are so many people chasing Ye Luoli that she has become an eunuch. You must stick to it [Like]

Come on, author, don't let Bingbing get fucked by a fox.

Oops, this content is very novel. I've never seen it before. It's a bit funny if you like it. I hope the author will keep updating it. It's too little and I couldn't read it all in one go.

It's a very special theme. It's not just limited to telling Ye Luoli's story. The other half of the text is used to tell the heroine's side of things. It integrates movie viewing and card summoning. Please support it.

It's super good-looking, and the character's personality is not OOC (it basically matches the character's personality, and the protagonist also has his own thoughts). The content is also very novel. I have never seen other articles of this type. Generally speaking, the content is rich and the characters are well created. It is just too thin and not enough to read. I would like to mind if the author updates 100,000 words a day [shy]

It looks good, but the low rating may be because Prince Water didn't clean up his innocence. Super good-looking Super good-looking Super good-looking

I just like watching this. It's so cool, so cool, so cool. But the update is a bit slow. I recommend updating it ten times a day.

@ Gong Ni Qiucai I have a question for you, that is why does every fairy have to add a Ye Luoli magic in front of it when outputting magic? And why is the fairyland called Ye Luoli Wonderland? These two things are not from Luo Li's family.

Ah, baby, can't you really update Chapter 30 out of nowhere? Is it really impossible to take 10,000 steps back?

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, when will the author update? It's already February 26th. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Nice! So pretty! Lily is the most fragrant

I think the author's writing is super good, I must stick to it.

There are too many storylines in Ye Luoli, namely Yi Meng, which is a bit eye-catching.

It looks great. The author must not stop updating it! Please please🙏🙏🙏

Beautiful, beautiful, so pretty! ! ! ! This is the first time I see this type of Ye Luoli! ! They are all lilies, it's so cool——! ! ! ! The world would be meaningless without looking at lilies! ! ! !

It's a very novel subject matter, it looks good, it's a lot more refreshing, and it's just good-looking. (Forgive me for being uneducated) Damn it, update it quickly, it's not enough [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Author, look at it, Mrs. Wei and Ah Bing are a couple, and Shi hope and Hua Ling are a couple. When will I get a wife for Sister Zhawu, the kind that is easy to push down [shy][shy][shy]

Does the heroine have no CP? Unexpectedly. You can still play like this. Ice princess ks micro lady. Spirit Princess ks Time Princess.

How many fairies are there? Can I add silver dust? Can you summon Yin Chen, Wu Shen Ling, Yan Jue and Li Hui?

It's very interesting. As long as the protagonist's IQ is online, it's fine. But the other thing is that it's too little.

This is the most beautiful Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read, but the author seems to have updated it in 4 days. Author, please stick to it, or I will go crazy [crying] [crying]