Variety Film and Television: Itchy Heart

I just finished reading Alley Family. It's really good. The author's writing is very good, the plot is smooth, and the characters are not OOC. Overall, it's definitely among the top among the Alley Family fanfics I've read! There are only two things I don't like: ① Obviously, as mentioned earlier, I have to go to a school in Beijing, my grandparents are retiring in Beijing, and the heroine's baby and brother both have the potential to go to Peking University. However, they insist that the brother is not acclimatized, so everyone went to Fudan. Not that Fudan is not good, but there is still a certain gap between Qingbei and Qingbei. In the end, the brother went to Beijing to work. There is a sense of forcing the heroine to be downgraded for the sake of plot and bringing the protagonists together. ② The jobs of Zhuang Xiaoting and Lin Dongzhe have also been downgraded. Zhuang Xiaoting was demoted from Pudong New Area civil servant (reserve cadre, department) to Suzhou University counselor (preparing to further his studies to become a teacher), and Lin Dongzhe was also demoted from Shanghai Procter & Gamble to Guangzhou Procter & Gamble (it should be that Shanghai's development is better than Guangzhou's, right?). The combination of these two points gives me the feeling that after having the original character of the heroine, everyone's future will not be as bright as before [Thinking]

Ahhhhhhhhh the people in the alleys are really pretty\(//∇//)\, would you seriously consider writing about Lin Tao's Schrödinger's baby in Forensic Qin Ming? [Send heart][Send heart]

◎Soldier Assault World is pretty well written. Personally, I like the heroine's calmness and composure, as well as her focus on her career. Moreover, the author's writing style also focuses more on the heroine herself. Although there will also be plots that help Xu Sanduo, Shi Jin and others, most of them are written around the heroine's own development. ◎Because the heroine does not know the plot, there is no so-called rescue intention, so some fans will not write it. The protagonist must pay close attention to the stage of the plot development and avoid the regretful sense of déjà vu in time. Although Shi Jin, Wu Liuyi, Xu Sanduo, and Chengcai are still special to the heroine, this is because of the real friendship that the heroine has with these comrades in the 7th Steel Company and Lao A, rather than the identity of the protagonist group attached to them by the plot. In the Seventh Steel Company and in Old A, the heroine gradually found the feeling that she and her comrades were family members. This part of the description is also very happy. ◎The part where a woman disguises herself as a man and loses her horse is a bit frustrating, but it is understandable. After all, to uncover the truth, there must be some reasons and accidents. Just think of it as a cp for the extra romance line. Anyway, in my eyes, the heroine is still thriving in the army without hindrance.

The soldier volume is really well written, full of emotion, and the character creation is very consistent with the original drama. Although the woman is pretending to be a man, it is not inconsistent at all. Gao Cheng is thick and thin, and he looks like the best company commander. The plot also perfectly left Shi Jin and Wu Liuyi in the military camp, filling everyone's regrets.

It looks good, it looks good, Soldier Assault is one of the special ones I have read, the article is not embarrassing as a whole, and the parts that require detailed description are also in place, and there is no feeling of stuffing people into the assembly line. This is also the first time I see the main character firmly choose Gao Cheng, in short, it is great [Sending Hearts]

I really like the soldier assault unit. The heroine is very strong, and where she comes from has created her strong thoughts. The pure collision of this otherworldly indifference and the enthusiasm of the military makes me very excited [Send Heart] Although I came here for Yuan Lang's cp, I am more and more concerned about the heroine coming from another cruel world to this warm and healing world. During the period when the heroine is healed, the people around her are also deeply affected by the heroine and grow up. This setting is really warm and wow! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] I no longer only pay attention to Yuan Lang, but also pay more attention to the changes of the heroine. Some of the scenes and events used in writing these changes are really delicate! The writing is superb! I feel that the thoughts incorporated into it are natural. Not only have some regrets been changed, but the long-awaited cp is also very sweet! Considering the heroine's character, it really ended just right. I'll just let you think about the rest. Hahaha [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I searched the entire Internet for soldier assault fanfics and found this one. I was so happy [blowing kisses] that there are inevitably some imperfections, but overall it's really good! I just haven't finished updating it yet, and I feel itchy [staring] I wonder if there will be a story about Yan Lin's biological parents. I remember there was a deputy commander named Yan. The alley article is very good, but why not go to Beijing? There are grandparents in Beijing [face covering] ，，，，[] I vaguely see the dawn of the completion of the soldier part [Salute] My heart is itching, my heart is itching, I will read it again and again when it is finished [Send my heart] I would like to read other episodes, but apart from Alley and Soldiers, I have never watched any other dramas, so I can't relate [face covering]

The House in the Alley is really good to read. I just really want the author to publish a separate book and read about life after marriage.

"Alley People", original heroine, CP Lin Dongzhe. There is no deliberate blackmail in this book, and the relationship between the dealer and Huang Ling is normal. Both sides have a sense of proportion. Zhuang Tunan also grew up after being taught by the heroine. Overall, it's not aggressive and looks very comfortable.

I really like this article from Alley People, please give it a try

I only watched Soldier Assault World. The heroine was a member of the apocalyptic special forces in her previous life. After her death, she traveled to modern times and became Yan Lin, who was trafficked as a child and had to disguise herself as a man. When she grew up, she joined the army, from the 7th Steel Company to the Division Reconnaissance Battalion and then to Old A. She They are all the best. Near the end, they found their parents and regained their identities. The split CP Yuan Lang and Gao Cheng were very well written. Wu Liuyi entered the old A. Shi Jin, Bai Tiejun, Gan Xiaoning, and Ma Xiaoshuai all went to the division reconnaissance camp to be with Gao Cheng.

The male lead must be Gao Cheng, don't change him, it's been so wonderful since the beginning of our companionship.

I watched Ace Unit first, and then Yun Zhiyu, and I really found that the author is really good at it. Both articles are just right to the point. My heart is like a kitten scratching, I can't get up and down [staring], but I can't control my aunt's smile😆😆😆😆

It looks good, I like it very much. The Alley House looks good, I like it very much. The author will update soon! ! ! Looking forward to the next one

The writing is pretty good, but overall it's a bit sweet and sweet. There aren't many chapters in one unit, so it can be used as a bedtime story. Please give me more advice for the rest of my life. I have finished reading: Gu Wei - Wen Zhi (Sweet) Have finished watching Ace Troop: Gu Yiye - Zhu Yuan (sweet) Finished watching the filter: Yao Tingwan - Tang Qi (sweet) I have finished watching The Greatest Condor Shooter: Su Zhao - Guo Jing (Sweet) I have finished watching Love You: Yu Zhizhi - He Suye (Sweet)

It's very beautiful. You can write I miss you so much. Is Mo Qingcheng [blowing kiss] There is also the most recent worry-free ferry, Jiuxuanye

I quite like the first chapter about people in an alley.

Can the author write a page about Yun Zhiyu and Yuan Yu's younger brother? The writing is so good! I want to see Toyo's younger brother and the heroine doting on each other! ! !

It's good to watch, especially Soldier Assault, which is deeply emotional. The rating is low. It's really good to watch. Highly recommended.

I want to see the next stop is Happy CP Yuan Song

OK, I like it, I like to watch it, I will still watch it

The alleys are really beautiful! ! !

The alley is really sweet

Like 😍Soldier Assault I like it very much

Soldier assault is good

I only watched the first world and it was okay

The volume on Soldier Assault is very well written.

Super Invincible is so good to watch, Soldier Assault and Gao Cheng are really good to watch, I love watching it even more [crying]

It's super cool and the characters are non-ooc. The plot develops very coherently [Love]

The soldier assault unit looks good, but the update is a bit slow [Like]