Female Queen: from Orphanage to Elf Slave

There is a feeling that it is extended on the basis of female channel novels, and it is more biased towards female channels than male channels. If you can accept the poisonous points of female channels, it is still a pretty good novel [face covering] [OK]

Interesting, so interesting. Although the main plot didn't go very far, the if line was so fun. Until the appearance of fellow countryman "Ye" in the latest chapter, the story became so interesting, a pure clown🤡, it was so fun🤓

The content and writing (especially the emotional part of a world where women are superior to men) are very good! (Based on the current main text of more than 30 chapters, it can be given 5, but a lot of irrelevant extra chapters have been inserted during this period (resulting in a poor reading experience) (the number of words is insufficient). If there are enough chapters, extra chapters can be inserted (updating two books at the same time will greatly slow down the update progress). I can only say that if you have ideas in the future and maintain the quality of chapters and increase updates, this book will also be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the world of female heroes. It may also be a matter of personal preference (I really don't like extras)

It was such a burst of inspiration. I still remember the heroine the author wrote about a girl who got super powers and was forced to love the protagonist. I didn't expect the writing to be so good now. After reading it, I noticed that the author didn't believe it. The plot and rhythm are very good, and the content is very exciting and rich. However, some descriptions of the background scenes are a little rushed. The horizontal descriptions of the orphanage and the manor make the servants vividly written.

This is a female novel. It's just that the perspective is that of the male protagonist. But I have to admit that the author's ideas are very creative. The addition of if lines gives the novel more possibilities. It also enriches the plot. The emotional lines described by the author are very delicate. Of course the shortcomings are also obvious. The male protagonist's character is too weak. It makes people very uncomfortable to watch. Of course, the same goes for some of the author's deliberate words. Also, the separation between the if line and the main line is too serious. Of course, this is not a big deal for a female video article. The author can consider linking the if line characters with the main line characters. For example, "Jobless Reincarnation". Such linkages. For example, a character in a certain tragedy line uses some kind of power to influence the character in the main line to prevent the tragedy from happening. The above is purely a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it. Welcome to communicate.

The book is good to read, but at this speed, I don't know when I will be able to read 100,000 words and recommend it.

The first heroine I read with an IF line was the one called "I Lost Contact in the Heroine", which is really impressive. This one also has an IF line, which is okay, but the part about dealing with elf sacrifices is a bit stiff.

Mo Li from another world has always been the winner. Although he wears the shackles of his master around his neck, what he is wearing is the shackles of the elven Brahmin. How can he wear it if he is just a common man? Of course he cannot wear it. Isn't the proverb of Bina Maoyi called "If you want to wear a crown, you must bear its weight." Since his neck has been entrusted with the great responsibility of a Brahmin, it should no longer be the neck that is stained by leprosy. The neck of the beard leads the whole person to become fairer. Suddenly, he became a close minister of the prophet "The sky is full of joy", and naturally his surname was Taiban Zhao. Every time he thought about this, he couldn't help but feel victorious again. The so-called broken mat pillow and rotten soup soup were no different from the master's mat pillow and soup soup. All the troublesome thoughts were put aside, all thoughts suddenly became clear, and Mo Li was able to sleep well all night again.

I have read so many yandere books, and it is the first time I have seen this type of book. It is not found in other yandere books, and it is what I have always wanted to read. Author: How do you know the thoughts in my head [Thinking] Good review! It's a style that other yandere books don't have. The author has been very careful, the author is very active and interesting The article is easy to understand, concise, and the development of things is clear. If you like yandere, you can check it out, it's very nice, although there is less blood and torture, but it's not bad either [Love][Love]

Come on, come on, come on

I'm new to this channel. This book looks very interesting to me, and it doesn't look like it's free [like]

A very good book, let me rotate it 360 degrees, and give you 4 stars because I am afraid that you will stop reading [Adoration]

Hey hey hey, I want education and training

This is one of the few good-looking novels about women that I have read. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

My favorite is the yandere heroine, and the if line is also very NB There are many if lines with good reviews

The plot is very good, I want to teach and support [adoration][adoration][adoration]

To be abused or not to be abused, to be happy or not to be developed, to be developed or not, to be daily or not to be daily. There is a very young, self-impressed feeling. There aren't many poisonous points, and the plot is fairly smooth.

The plot is okay, come on [love]

It's pretty good, I just like watching torture [laughs evilly]

Enjoy it, give it a five-star rating

Come on, come on, come on!

It's okay, please support me

Author, I remember you! The IF line is invincible, I'm determined to pursue it!

Beautiful (♥∀♥) no need to say more

Not a bad way to kill time

It's pretty good among the novels about women.

[Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] Beautiful, a good book!

Hee hee hee Pan Wai doesn't have one🐮🐮🐮

There's that if line in the middle, Haomaru

The early writing is okay, I hope the author can work harder