Take EGO to Fight in the Ark

The author's original intention was very good, but... Maybe it's because it's the first book. There are some common questions that novice writers encounter. For example, the character's personality is not well grasped, and trust is gained too quickly. Although it is said that you can watch it after discarding your brain, it is a bit too demanding. Yeah, but it's okay. After practicing it, I believe this book will get better and better as I write it. Come on, author

In fact, your pace seems to be a bit fast at the moment. The rest of the Ark article can be written in two or three chapters, but you can finish it in one chapter. So you can polish it a little, so that the amount of information in one sentence is not so much, so that people can have a buffer time for their thoughts. The rest is fine, at least it can be seen that you have really played 084 and Arknights

Very good ark moon chronology

I think it was well written, but it took a while to update. It would be better if it could be updated faster.

Personally I think it looks good

I feel like Mei Fei's original ending will be fine