Golden Elixir*************

The writing is okay, the author looks like a villain Author, let me give you a good suggestion. You can learn how to write the novel "The Last Immortal Cultivator in the World" and write about the supporting characters' various things to please the protagonist, so that the rating will be higher. Or you can learn the pretentious style of the protagonist of Tomb of the Immortal Immortal.

It's quite cool, but cool writing can be improved in the later stages. Otherwise, it will be like the TV series "Dragon Walking the World". It's hard to come up with new ideas. For example, if you go to other small worlds and different worlds to come up with some new plots, cool writing must be cool.

Authors should write novels in line with the public. What is the situation of the public like us? What should we write about? We are all exploited by capitalists

It's very cool, I rarely see anything like this, I was invincible at the beginning.

Awesome, thank you to the author. Very powerful author

Do whatever you want hahaha

There are shortcomings, but still watchable

It's great after watching it

Just be funny, keep up the good work!

You can do whatever you want

It's a good book, I just hope it will always be enjoyable in the future.

It's pretty good-looking, nothing too brainless.

When diaosi has power, they act very cleverly. They want to do something but not anything special.

There are cows, but the protagonist is cowed by others [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It's not bad, there seems to be a mention of spiritual energy recovery in the middle, it has doubled by 4 times, and the protagonist should be overthrown soon. [Think]