After Time Traveling, I Turned into a Fool

I think the biggest advantage of the novel is that it allows readers to have a God's perspective and see what each character does to the greatest extent possible. The plot development should not just be the perspective of the protagonist talking to the supporting characters. In short, there are too few descriptions of the supporting characters. Too many dialogues will be troublesome to read and the characters will not appear vivid enough. Use more narration to explain and describe the characters' emotions and actions. For the description of the environment, try not to be too complicated, just use metaphors, and the shorter the time description, the better. Come on, it will definitely become popular.

"I Turned into a Fool After Time Travel" is an imaginary historical novel full of funny and Machiavellian elements. Funny and Machiavellian can coexist! The protagonist Yan Bai travels to the world of martial arts after being hit by a car, but unexpectedly becomes a "fool". This setting itself is full of drama. In the book, Yan Bai's "pretending" behavior and various funny plots make people laugh. The novel unfolds in a humorous way. Although the male protagonist is in a difficult situation, he is not timid. Instead, he relies on his wisdom and courage to show off his talents in the imaginary world of machinations. It not only has hilarious daily routines, but also hides a wonderful plot of power. The author is very good at creating contrasts! Recommend

Too many daily details dilute the main line, and there are too many descriptions. There is entertainment, but the setting has potential. Come on, author