He was a little boy in the fields, and was taken in as a servant by cultivators. From then on, he began to embark on his own path of cultivation. Unexpectedly, the cultivator actually wanted to seize the body, and was accidentally hit by him and managed to escape.
Reader comments
My evaluation is that the character of the protagonist is a bit poor and the protagonist can be said to be a child of luck. It makes people uncomfortable to watch. I can only say that people can become immortals in this way. What is the meaning of immortals? There is no outstanding point in the character. The only one who is indifferent is to reduce the word count.
The writing of the book is very loose. After I went home and met the general, how come my brother-in-law changed from brother-in-law to brother-in-law?
It's impossible to take possession of one's body just once more
Keep up the good work
You have already obtained the Foundation Building inheritance, so you can go home and see what you can do. If you want to build a family, what nonsense are you talking about in the world?
Not bad, really good, come on, author!
Not bad. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Are you cultivating immortality? It is impossible to succeed with men and women.
The writing is very good [like it]. I hope the author will be more serious in some aspects, not too fast, and the sentences will be smoother. Thank you! I really like the storyline, keep it up! ! !
Keep up the good work!
There are many modern words, this one sounds uncomfortable.
The author is a logic genius!
Lively and interesting!
Well written, keep it up!
The plot is very exciting, and there is a need to follow it. I hope the follow-up will be more exciting.
My evaluation is that the character of the protagonist is a bit poor and the protagonist can be said to be a child of luck. It makes people uncomfortable to watch. I can only say that people can become immortals in this way. What is the meaning of immortals? There is no outstanding point in the character. The only one who is indifferent is to reduce the word count.
The writing of the book is very loose. After I went home and met the general, how come my brother-in-law changed from brother-in-law to brother-in-law?
It's impossible to take possession of one's body just once more
Keep up the good work
You have already obtained the Foundation Building inheritance, so you can go home and see what you can do. If you want to build a family, what nonsense are you talking about in the world?
Not bad, really good, come on, author!
Not bad. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Are you cultivating immortality? It is impossible to succeed with men and women.
The writing is very good [like it]. I hope the author will be more serious in some aspects, not too fast, and the sentences will be smoother. Thank you! I really like the storyline, keep it up! ! !
Keep up the good work!
There are many modern words, this one sounds uncomfortable.
The author is a logic genius!
Lively and interesting!
Well written, keep it up!
The plot is very exciting, and there is a need to follow it. I hope the follow-up will be more exciting.