I Was a Dog in the Mortal Realm, So I Went to Heaven to Cultivate Immortality

This book is quite well written! It's really great. However, it would be better if some modifications could be made in terms of punctuation. I feel that there are some punctuation errors in it, and they appear relatively frequently.

It's hard to mess around in the human world now. Little Crow can bring you such a magical experience. It's very thoughtful. The early pace is very slow. Come on, author, I will always follow you.

This ball is so magical and powerful, but it is a pity that it can be broken. And this crow will also be destroyed by you, extracting so many treasures before it even reaches the sky.