Transform into a Sickly Loli so That You Won't Be Bullied by the School Beauty

I've finished reading it. It's a good little story, and the plot unfolds very naturally. Maybe the author thinks his book is "mediocre", but it's not "boring". On the contrary, this simple plot unfolds very naturally, from the bumpy fate to Yu Nian and Wan Zhi finally getting married. It feels... Like a dragon well, with a bitter taste at the entrance and sweetness after all the hardships (a bit strange description, haha). The only fly in the ointment is the farewell before the ending, which is a bit abrupt. If there are a few chapters to supplement Wan Zhi's inner struggle and pain, it might be more natural (my humble opinion, light spray). Overall, this is a good book worth reading. I hope the author will write better and better [Blow kiss] Finally, please give me an electronic signature [sending my heart]

It's a very sweet book. The other title below the introduction may mean that there will be knives in the future, but the current plot is basically a daily novel with the fragrance of oranges. It is the story of the protagonist and her sister who is still in elementary school x the two sisters of the Luo family (both sisters are in elementary school). The protagonist and her sister are both in poor health. Maybe there will be knives in this area in the future? I hope all the girls can have a happy ending

It's quite good to watch, but I wish I could be more optimistic about the character development of the protagonist later on. It's a bit too low-self-esteem, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. Although I am also an invincible introvert who fears low self-esteem, I hope that the characters in the author's hands can be made more and more beautiful by the author. Good cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's good to read, but it's too short. If it doesn't take off with more than 500 chapters, it will be over before I finish reading it. I really can't let it go. I don't know if the height of the author is as short as the book. Do you think it is the author? I hope they can have a baby. It's not like the current technology isn't up to par, but they can only have girls. With the crystallization of love, it is even more beautiful. Can Congee and Xiaodeng publish a book? This is inappropriate Qingmei's pure love. Xiao Deng was very warm when he protected Congee for the first time. He has been in pure love since elementary school. The deputy CP is Wan Ning and the two of them. Qiuqiu, let's make a sequel! Why was the book sealed?

A very good story that feels very real (can't it really be the author's experience?). It seemed a bit too fast, it ended in the blink of an eye. Actually, I could have written more content in the middle. I really didn't want it to end so quickly. Then I feel that there is still something wrong with the knife. Although I know that the author wants us to be sweeter, I still feel that the knife is more realistic when it goes down. It is a bit strange and uncomfortable to force the round back later, but it is also very good. After all, life is hard enough, so it is also very good to read such sweet novels~ Finally, thank you for your companionship. The young author will also be happy every day. Bye~

Originally, when I saw the inexplicable knife, I was a little annoyed and wanted to give it a 4, but after reading the ending, I felt relieved. How can there be no clichés and coincidences in life? Although there are flaws, I do remember this three-year love.

How to put it, maybe because I have seen the reality too clearly, so I feel that all the knives in the article are not too sharp and are acceptable. The author's writing style is actually very good and can accurately express the emotions between Yu Ning and Ye Zhi. However, I feel that the knife near the end is very abrupt and makes people feel very sudden. To sum up, I think this book can be regarded as a sweet book in my eyes. (This is just my own evaluation, don't criticize me if you don't like it)

In fact, it is not as "mediocre" as soda said. At least this book left a very deep impression on me. It is a very, very successful novel. Hey, do you think you should open a few more if lines? For example, Yu Ning, under Luo Wanzhi's attack, acted as a sunny doll in the room, and when Luo Wanzhi came back, the sky collapsed and she became a sunny doll [sneaky laugh]

I finally finished watching it, and I felt warm all over my body. It was really heartwarming to see Yu Ning transform from a dark and damp little lolita into a lively and cute little sun. The story of mutual redemption between her and her senior sister was also very touching and heartwarming. There were foreshadowings in many places, but those unexpected plots were just reasonable. I feel that it is more delicate and "silky" than other films in describing emotions, without being too abrupt. Fortunately, the author is not very good at writing about knives, otherwise I would have cried. All in all, it is a novel that I personally feel very good about. The stories of Yu Ning and Luo Wanzhi are also impressive. In those moments, I suddenly fell in love with them, and I often laughed and cried because of them.

So cute, so cute, really cute. I haven't seen such a beautiful Lily for a long time. Emm~ I hope I don't have a knife [I'm about to cry]

There is no rebirth, no system, and no nonsense from wealthy families. It's all about sweet daily life, the loli is very soft, the senior is very flirtatious, awesome and cute [laughs], the suspected author uploaded the diary.

Finally finished reading it! The author writes so well! I have been liking this type of books recently, and I have read three of them in a row including this one (Shaoxi, Tao Cheng, and this one). Although there are very few books of this type and I can't read many of them, but as long as I can read them, I really like them. I am very happy. I went online just to read this book! I wish the author happy every day, keep up the good work! [Blowing kiss] ... Forgive me for being clumsy, my words may be a little incoherent [eating melon]

It's good to read, but I cried several times in one night, and the author's writing must be very good ٩(*´◒`*)۶. But we have a bit of a glass heart, and we cried when we were stabbed TT. Although the knife was uncomfortable, the sugar was also very sweet. I recommend everyone to read it. At the end, the badass author made me cry.

I stayed up late and read it all at once. Overall, it was pretty good. The novel is quite short and I didn't write a lot. But the character creation was okay and the plot wasn't too bad. If there's anything bad to say about it, as the author himself said, the knife for terminal illness is a bit cliché. In fact, when I read it, I kept looking forward to what kind of knife there would be in the end (doesn't it count? I like it, but since I'm looking at knives, I still like to torture it a little). Although I can guess that it's a terminal illness, it still lacked a little amazing feeling when I saw it. I was quite calm when I read it at the end. I didn't feel as uncomfortable as some of the knives in the middle, but it's quite normal. I want to HE and write a good ending, how can such a good thing happen. Since we have read free novels, we cannot expect the author to be omnipotent. I won't say it's ranked at the top, but I personally feel that this book is above average on Tomato.

It's relatively sweet in the beginning, but suddenly there's a sharp stab in the back. The ending is happy, but it's more like a bubble that makes people feel depressed. I still gave it a 5-star review, which left a deep impression in my heart [I almost cried]

I also finished reading it in one sitting tonight. It was very interesting and the writing style was very bland (which is an advantage). It gave me the same feeling as when I watched Fulilian before. Also, when I read the article, I was not struck by the sentence that the author's "Late Branch" will not come back, which is really off guard. Here I sincerely wish the author to meet someone who loves you and grow old together! ! ! |｡･㉨･)っ♡ I like you♪ @sweet and sour sparkling water

Nice cookies, worth trying Generally speaking, although the sparrow is small and has all the internal organs, although the length is very short, it has everything it should have, and there is no big poisonous point. The selling point of this article is that the main character is weak, and I happen to like this [making faces] Spoilers below The following are the drawbacks How should I put it? When the author wrote it, the length was too short. There were barely a few chapters, and I felt like I didn't get into it. Also, compared to the second Sword Girl, the Sword Girl is actually better. Although there is nothing new, it looks better than playing cards to highlight the unconventional rules [smile] And the most important point is that it is not stated clearly in the plot. It is assumed that the second female lead knows from the very beginning that she may not live long. Rather than closing yourself off from the beginning and not letting others feel sad for you, you actually think it would be better to cruelly hurt the heroine (and possibly the heroine Zisha) in the end? I don't understand, and aside from this issue, you didn't even tell your biological mother? I knew that my mother was suffering from depression, but since she left without saying anything, I was really not afraid of losing her. Okay, that's all. The full text is pretty good. I can give it a score of 9.2 Out of 10.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. Serious people must lose part of their brains. Sometimes this book may be illogical, but it is definitely a unique work among Tomatoes Now Lily. It is very fresh and elegant. I don't know why, but when I read it, I was reminded of the book "The Fish Who Wanted to Become an Eagle". The same plainness, but with a kind of sadness. The whole book is full of the heavy feeling of "things are different and people are not the same, everything is over. If you want to speak, tears will flow first." Of course, the author gave a "he" at the end, which is good. Of course, it would also be a good idea to give a "be". That kind of spiritual shock may really be the same as Yaokong. "Tragedy is destroying beautiful things for people to see."

After you left, I became you Originally, I felt uncomfortable after reading another book called "Knife", but when I read the sweet article, I planned to take it easy, but as I was eating the sweet candy, I suddenly ate a glass [face covering] The first 90 chapters or so are filled with sweet messages between the little lolita and her senior sister, basically just an ordinary life. The highlight is the process of the little lolita's family being eaten up and wiped clean by the senior sister's family step by step. It is indeed very interesting. In some places, in the words of book friends, it is like pointing a sword at Huang Daomei. It is also a very interesting place [laughter] The shortcomings are also obvious. The character portrayal is a bit deliberate, which is not a big problem for most authors. In addition, the back part is too deliberate, and the subsequent development can basically be guessed, and it does not have an unexpected effect. The ending is too hasty. The story that can be told in twenty or thirty chapters is condensed into a few chapters, and the ending is a bit hasty. Looking at this from another perspective, the sudden insertion of a knife at the end of the short story seems a bit unorthodox, but such a quick ending made a deliberate and somewhat clichéd plot deeply rooted in people's hearts. Anyway, I was really struck by this old knife. To sum it up: after you left, I followed your example, carefully guarded your most cherished things, and wrote my thoughts about you day by day. The foreshadowing of the sweet part in the early stage is suddenly born, and the emotions are extremely intense and the aftertaste is lingering. In my opinion, the ending is really rushed and cliche. Four stars.

From the valley to the mountainside, I experienced countless warmth and coldness. Then he fell from the mountainside to the abyss, and finally reached the vastness step by step. I have read many novels, and this is the only one that made me think deeply. What is love, what is friendship. This book is really beautiful, both in terms of plot and in every way, it is a kind of art. Bubbles, I'm following you!

It's a very good Lily novel, but the knife in the later period is a bit stiff. There has been a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and the emotions are gradually increasing. When the final knife comes, the emotions are not spread out. However, the overall look and feel is very good. The protagonist gradually becomes cheerful with the help of Luo Wanzhi, which is touching.

To be fair, the descriptions are too monotonous, and are basically descriptions of language, psychology, and demeanor. However, in terms of content, the interpretation of Yu Ning's inner struggle and life is indeed delicate and subtle, which is rare in the entire Tomato (at least in the books I have read). Structurally speaking, the pace is a bit slow, and there are some irrelevant and confusing plots, making it a bit tiring to watch. And the rationality of some plots needs to be evaluated. Overall, it was well written.

I hope this book can be read by more people, it brings spiritual comfort, it is also very close to the reality of life, and it is full of the ups and downs of life. I hope that soda can be happy and joyful every day. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It looks good. Personal opinion: I feel that although the separation of the two people is hinted at later, there is not much foreshadowing (it is different from hinting and foreshadowing), and there is too little spicy! ! ! ! Looks good, looks good, looks good, please give me one more chapter, they can do anything.

Very nice. The problems mentioned by the author in the final part are actually things that I have seen. The reversal is handled very hastily, but the love between the lines is really touching. Summary: Everyone needs a "late branch" in their life to teach us how to love others and love ourselves; but people's lives are rarely perfect, and most people's endings often do not have a "late branch". But what does it matter? For those of you who know how to love, you already lack nothing!

It's really beautiful. The author must be confident, just like Yu Ning in the book. The life pressure I wrote about in the early stage is very real. Watching the little Loli grow up is really like raising a daughter. And the part about terminal illness was really touching, and I almost dropped my pearls while watching it. Overall, it's a good book and deserves the five stars. The author must also work hard! ! ! Looking forward to the author's next book. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Overall, it's very good. Personally, I think the only shortcoming is the small knife. The foreshadowing is so sad, and the round shape is very simple. Of course, the characters are written in a very everyday and realistic way (I feel sorry for Xiao Ning), the atmosphere is very light, and the author is very cute (I want to co-write). In the end, the box sinking, I take it 🥢. . . .

Not bad, not bad. Except for the fact that the knife is not very sharp, everything else is good (probably because there is a little lack of foreshadowing), and the protagonist is also very immersive for me (it seems that this is not glorious...) Forgot to mention, this book is really sweet in my opinion. Some of the knives that are not knives can also make me feel involved, but I still want to say that there is not enough foreshadowing (maybe this kind of plot is not suitable for HE)

I have read it once before, and recently I planned to read it again when I was looking for a book. Halfway through, I suddenly remembered the ending. I ran away because I didn't want to be stabbed again, but the author's writing is really beautiful_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

It's a very interesting article. The relationship between Xiao Yu and Xiao Luo is natural, sincere and true. The daily life of Xiao Dao and Xiao Tian constitutes a sweet and salty perpetual motion. It makes people want to put it down. I read it in one sitting. (By the way, the rating is a bit low)