The 749 Bureau Is Hiring: My Family Thinks I Work on the Railways

Emmm, what should I say? It was uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist was too damn controlling. The further I read, the more I couldn't stand it. I didn't know what happened next. I couldn't stand it anymore. I couldn't stand it until chapter 30. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became.

It looks good, but the main character looks a little irritated

The plot development is unreasonable. The protagonist team has different personalities, but their methods of dealing with things are almost the same, one word is reckless. As a result, other supporting characters have no sense of presence or role, and can only play a role in connecting the previous and the following. They appear briefly like NPCs and do not show their own style well. Too thin!

The performance of the protagonist's mother made me feel helpless as if I could not slap my face into the screen.

It's pretty good to watch, and I personally think the plot is good. Based on the author's current writing style, I estimate there are 1,000,000+ words. This is a rare good book. However, the tasks of writing the system are a bit small and feel dispensable.

Some parts are quite abstract, and the protagonist can't solve them on his own, and he doesn't make phone calls to scare people for fear of making people laugh.

It was originally a good subject matter, but it was a pity that there were too many scenes about his mother and it was too wordy.

So far, the pace seems to be pretty good. I hope I can keep up the good work and not give up.

Seven stars, poison, poison, poison

The protagonist's mother is really annoying