The Price of Immortality: the Game of Love and Destiny

It's good, but Qingmei is too bad😭

It's good-looking, super good-looking, but it should look like this. There aren't many posts. If you like to read posts, there's no need to finish reading them. The first part is okay, the logic is barely self-consistent, but later on the protagonist begins to collapse after awakening the memory of the past life. First, he upgrades rapidly, and in less than ten chapters, he goes from practicing Qi to transforming into a god. Later, he even forcibly reduces his intelligence. When the protagonist transforms into a god, the heroine sees that the protagonist has two souls, one male and one female. Later, someone said that the protagonist may have been taken away. I just believed it. I didn't believe in the protagonist at all. I couldn't even remember that I had seen the protagonist Yuanshen. And the protagonist was even more important. He asked an outsider to set up a formation for him without even looking at it. The transformation of the spirit can be sneak attacked by Yuanying. Without any backhand, he would talk about revenge and then transform into a clown. Mad made me laugh to death [smile]

The writing is okay, the plot line is clear (it should have an outline), but the pace is a bit fast, resulting in not much ink devoted to the characters and world view (I hope the author can improve it), the foreshadowing of the book is okay. Okay, after talking about the strengths and weaknesses of this book, it's time to talk about my impressions of the plot. First of all, after reading the updated article, I feel a bit depressed and desperate, mainly from two aspects. One is the behavior of the characters, Bai Yuan, the senior sister, etc., Especially the senior sister is a very gentle but courageous person (this character is well established, I like it), and according to the article, it can be speculated that the senior sister was eaten by Bai Yuan later (no wow) (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)), it can be seen that this is a cultivator who steps on others and uses other people's energy to build my ascension (why not in reality?). The second is Xia's life. In fact, Xia is very pitiful and pathetic. The master's devoted teachings are just to seek the path to immortality, and the devotion of the person he likes is just forced by the real time. Even who he likes is determined and planned by others. (I thought I had found the love of my life, but it was doomed a long time ago), but the only senior sister and junior sister who were true to me ended up sending them on their way. It is regrettable. Xia has lived in the world of others all his life. Xia is not a yandere at first, but she is forced to become one by the things and people here. From Xia's perspective, the world is dark, so dark that she can no longer see the sun...

I can only say that yandere is like this

To be honest, it looks okay now. Finally, it's not the three senses that follow the five senses. It's a bit like an immortal. Love is nothing, I only chase eternal life.

I had a dream before, and it was very similar to this book. I was from God's perspective at the time, and the protagonist had a system, but the ending of the dream was not good. Ending: The protagonist is imprisoned forever.

It's okay in the early stage, but the later recovery of memory is a bit confusing and confusing. There are some small pitfalls, but they don't matter. Some of the pitfalls are quite forced, but somewhat reasonable. What I want to see is chasing my wife and being buried alive.

Is it a woman disguising herself as a man?

The author can put beep cards in this book [face covering]

I originally thought it was a yandere line, but it turned out to be an eternal line. The author is a character.

Damn it, the female version of Daai Xianzun

So the double heroine becomes a single heroine?

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, okay, okay. Very exciting.

So beautiful🥵🥵I love it now

Have you already written happy?

This bishop can only say that it is truly outrageous.

Support, how should I put it, the writing is a bit weak, but this kind of writing is a bit demanding, so you can read it.

Will Mo'er be resurrected later?

Yes, I think personally

Big cheers for the author

It's really good🤗

Will the heroine still be Xia?

It's really good

I think it's very interesting why the rating is so low [eating melon]

May I ask whether the author is followed by he or be?

Just kidding me, fast forward to forced love

Don't tell me that I'm looking forward to the follow-up now

I'm curious how the author will handle the emotional line in the future? Do Xiao Ju and Xiao Ning still have a chance to achieve success? [Sending Hearts]