Ipartment: I'm Not Afraid of Being Hacked When I'm Collecting Entries

The character of the protagonist and the system are not like those of today's era. In the early years, the system still had such a setting. Novice systems like to quarrel with the host. This is no longer popular, and the system is rarely written to be intelligent. There is also the character of the protagonist, which gives people a very childish feeling, thinking too much, and a bit like a loser. It is very similar to the previous novels, and it is overly obscene. Also, since the author positioned the story as a harem story with multiple female protagonists, he put a poisonous point at the beginning. Hu Yifei asked him to pick up Zhan Bo, but he was unwilling to do so. Anyone who has watched the plot knows that Lin Wanyu got into his crotch at the beginning. Although he died in the end, I can only say that the performance of the protagonist is in the eye of the beholder. This is the shortcoming that I saw at the beginning. The author of the Golden Three Chapters did not grasp it very well, which will lead to the failure to attract people. This is the era of fast food articles. But I still have to say, come on, author [laughs]

It's really ok, it just requires a little more interaction with the system, but it's acceptable. It's not like other protagonists who are wandering on the edge, and there is no feeling of being forced to join others. In addition, it is recommended that Yumo, Nuolan, and Xinling can lay the groundwork in advance.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn and lowered my head deeply. Silently turned off the phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator and took out a bottle of 1982 Collector's edition of Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly When I went to the window, the scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood Same, heavy, very heavy, gradually, it becomes gray outside It's raining lightly in the sky. I don't know why my vision is blurry. Is it because I shed tears or is it raining heavily? It may be both, my My mood became more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. Opened the window and shouted out the window: Just fuck more Who does Zhang look down upon? The author and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to do this Rest, wake up and update. Young people should not be ignorant and wasteful Ziwei juice! Author, who are you? The Guinness record is every minute The clock strikes out 807 letters, and each Chinese character requires six letters. Calculate, you can type about 134 words per minute, because you are not holder, so let's calculate it as 100 words per minute According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and then It takes 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, and one hour Exercise, take two hours to get inspired, then peel off for another hour If you are in a daze, you should have nine hours to type. You should type. There are 435,780 words, and based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 217 chapters. But why do you only post so much content every day? Be honest. Tell me, is this a deduction? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. The author quickly got up and coded!

I really love reading this book, but I feel like the author is a bit out of touch with the original plot and I can't read it anymore. I suggest you read the comics of Love Apartment for inspiration.

There are a lot of plots in the early stage that are unacceptable, but it gets much better in the middle and later stages. The later plots do have the flavor of a love apartment. (Of course, I read this book after I gave it up and ran out of books. Some of the plots are a bit poisonous. Please consider this at your own discretion.)

Okay, has the author thought of incorporating some other urban film and television dramas, such as Hu Yifei's assistant school, which can have a smile on the city, and then there are also, Go where the wind blows, Golden Years, high school can add Xiao Huanxi, Boy Pi and so on.

Some plot aspects still need to be improved, but overall it is still good, and the main female characters are all included.

The story is okay, but it has the feel of a unit drama. Some plots are a bit fragmented. There are many female protagonists, but only the main female characters are included. Overall, it is not bad.

This book is still very good, the atmosphere is very relaxed, and it fits the characteristics of a sitcom. If there were not multiple female protagonists, I guess the score would not be low.

It's very beautiful. This book suits my taste very much.

Some of the previous chapters do not continue to the next chapter.

It's pretty good. It suits my taste anyway.

The writing is quite good. This is the only one I have read, the only one that is purely about love apartments, and it contains everything.

Except for the protagonist Xianyu, everyone else is very good and quite funny. It gives me a sense of déjà vu as if Crayon Shin-chan had entered the scene [facepalm]

Very beautiful, it feels like entering that world again

It's quite fun, funny but not a silly plot. I like it.

Please don't be a eunuch.

Do the heroines have Yu Mo and Nuo Lan?

Come on, come on, come on, come on

It's pretty good. It wasn't written according to that kind of heroic writing from the beginning.

Although. . . But. . . Um. . . Overall it's not bad. Can see!

Not bad, not bad, very much to my liking. Good looking. It would be better if the system had less nonsense.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, a bit funny

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes

It's okay, it's okay

There are too many inner dramas in the system;

Very good, I personally think it's very good

A happy novel

Really beautiful, highly recommended