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All the paving work has been completed, the day of strife has arrived, Shura Field! Start a new chapter for us! Ahem, just kidding, anyway, the preparation is over, and the next few days will be climaxes, but I have a question, do you want to see Beloberg or Xiadie? I probably have some ideas about these two places. Or if you want to see other people's, you can. Of course, Ti Bao, Hu Ke, and Bai Lu are not allowed. Although I have some ideas about these three people, I really dare to block them if I dare to write them. I can only keep an outline in my hand and slowly taste it myself. If I write it out, I will die. Your comments will be an important reference for me. Of course, if you agree in advance, I won't just do what you say. Sometimes, instead of writing rubbish plots to deal with it, I would rather come up with some excellent plots, so that I feel comfortable writing and everyone enjoys watching them.

Although the writing style is a bit green, the author still needs to continue to work hard. In the early stage, it can be seen that he is writing with a simple attitude. Later, it can be seen that he is working hard. The change of attitude will also be accompanied by the change of the article. I believe that as long as your mentality is still there, your book will definitely get better and better. Listen to suggestions in time. Revise the article carefully, answer questions sincerely, and do not update casually. Then I believe that sooner or later, you will become a person with excellent writing and good articles. So before that, I wish you in advance that the book will get better and better, and the writing will become better and better, and strive to become a qualified and excellent author as soon as possible. In the future, there must be a general framework and arrangement for how to write a book. From most of the current book reviews, it can be seen that you treated the book writing wrongly in the early stage, and the wrong arrangements led to a lot of mistakes, but it did not gradually improve until the next few times. I hope your attitude towards writing a book can be more correct. Remember to make an outline and text before writing. You should also practice writing and other aspects, learn relevant lessons at the same time, keep in mind every reader's evaluation and suggestions of your book, treat and write books with the mentality of a qualified author, and at the same time fix the writing style of each book, and confirm which book is suitable for which style. Don't make a decision to write when your brain is hot. The current shortcomings of this book are mainly It is caused by your wrong attitude towards writing a book in the early stage. If you have a correct attitude and take writing a book seriously, not only will all these low-level problems and shortcomings disappear, but at least 80% of them will not appear. If you don't know how to write, you can ask the same type of author or observe the same type of book. At the same time, another important point is not to be casual. Stop updating, otherwise I will not only be sorry for the book you have spent so much effort to write, but also the readers who insist on reading your book. At the same time, I hope you can learn relevant lessons and experiences, continue to grow, keep working hard, and write books with the right mentality. At the same time, I wish you a smoother and smoother road to writing books, and that your writing skills will become better and better!

After watching the first simulation, I felt that it was not very sophisticated and had many flaws. Many emotional descriptions and changes required some length of description or some clever foreshadowing to be reflected, but I did not have this experience in it. Instead, I felt quite embarrassed. Maybe you can fill in some daily chores, happy anecdotes, and some unforgettable bad things into the simulation, which will help improve the overall character creation. By the way, when it comes to shaping, in fact, from a feeling point of view, from the perspective of a reader who has not played Bengtie very much, the heroine's personality in the first simulation is not distinct. This is a very fatal flaw, the character's personality is not distinct. This will make readers other than players feel somewhat disconnected from the world you write, thereby reducing the urge to read on. This is how I was persuaded to give up. However, overall it is not a good story, but it is not bad either. I still hope that the author can polish it more and don't care about the so-called comments about whether it is watery or not. Good works require concise language, but equally, they also need some ordinary things to fill it. It doesn't matter if it's the finishing touch or the icing on the cake. Working hard to tell a story is what a writer should do, isn't it?

It's really worth watching. It's not stupid. It's just that our Aglaiya is a bit miserable. . . Pay tribute to the legendary cattle-resistant Wang Laoya [laughs] Recommended recommendation How to say it? If you watch the clips one by one, it's okay, but can the mechanism of sending them together be changed? So embarrassing. . . The character is a bit ooc, I hope I can get to the next simulation soon

Can the author please give the heroine Tibao a [flying kiss] please🥺

Aglaiya became the master of suffering, but it's very interesting and highly recommended. The author updates it twice a day and it's very fast @three periods. And Hajihao, you guy, please hurry up and update it.

The person I love loved me as early as when she was 18 years old. As for whose wife she is when she is 25 and 30, I wish him happiness. What I mean is that she will not grow old and gain weight, nor will she have the smell of fireworks. She will always be young and beautiful, wearing a small skirt, standing in my memory and waving. Chapter 25 It would be better to add this sentence

Aglaiya's plot can be ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

Ouch, Ya... Sister Yayi... It's better not to say such things... People say... They say this is... A... A phrase... What does it mean? It's like I'm really going to die... Don't scare me, how is that possible... I've been... Very lucky... Sister Mei... I... Don't want to die...

The writing is very good, I like it very much, especially the characters, and Aglaiya. The story is quite well written, as good as Beng Tie's yandere novels, maybe even a little better! ! !

I just started playing Beng Tie and I don't know the plot yet, but it looks pretty good. Please give the author a boost.

It is better than any Bengtie novel I have read so far. The author's writing style gave me a crisp feeling when listening to the novel, and there is no nonsense. By the way, please help me analyze whether I am too wrong. I finished Pilo and Onfa in two days, and I drew a total of 80 (including resident), 2 Jizi, Feixiao 0+0, Robin 0+0 and a duck [laughing]

Not bad, but Lao Yang, who had a strong taste of Sanbengzi, frowned. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author's intentions can be seen from the improvement of the author's writing style and writing content, but the scenes of meeting the heroines in different simulations still need to be improved.

It's good to watch, so please come to more of it, at least that's what I think. Author update. Still very stable. At least two a day. At least one. Sensually it feels good. It always makes people want to stop. After reading one chapter, I want to read the next one.

I watched it while listening to the song, and it happened to be a relatively sad song, so I had a feeling for the plot of Aglaya, but after it ended, I felt it was average. I may be picky personally, after all, I don't have a satisfactory simulation flow at the moment [face covering] It's still worth watching just watching Aglaya, I'll decide later, Long Aotian is definitely indispensable

Cheers to the author

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

It's good. I see that my relationship with Uncle Yang is not very good now. I hope Hajizuo you can improve your relationship with Uncle Yang [smile][smile][smile][crazy][crazy][crazy] @

It looks like a novel, but it's actually the author's experimental area😂 It's okay. The writing style needs to be improved.

Delicious, honestly. It's just as delicious as the potato and green pepper beef noodles in the Lanzhou Ramen downstairs at my house. I have been eating it for several years, and I order it every time and never get tired of it. This book is also delicious, very delicious. Come on, author, keep updating.

The three major hobbies of Bengtie fans: looking at beautiful women, issuing knives, and scaring Lao Yang

It looks good. When I was finishing the plot, I wanted to write a novel that would make Aglaia regret her whole life, let her torture her father, and make her have such a cold personality. A bad woman only feels good if she has to overcome her superiors.

Hmm...99%, You are qualified to be on my bookshelf

After we reunited, I felt emotionally uneasy. [Like] Not bad.

Ok, I saw Uncle Yang, and Yang Chaoyue was also confused.

Author, unleash your imagination! ! ! Pleasure me to your heart's content! ! ! ! ! !

I don't know what happened next, but I always feel that Aglaiya's image collapsed a bit in the end, so I probably didn't care about it at that time, and didn't think about it until later, or maybe I didn't think about it until after we saw each other again. In any case, Aglaiya's plot is not complete, so it's good that it can be written like this. I always feel that the official may add some information about Aglaiya's previous experience later. Just one more star for the author's bravery.

One of the few good simulation essays written by Tomato

I really like the plot between Lao Ya and Xia Die in the middle, but it's too short and there's no follow-up [crying]