Alternative Lord Farming Space Starting from Naruto

(Bottom center) White + Standard (-1 level) / 695 points, marked... Sense of substitution C, plug-in A, setting D, writing style C, rhythm D, imagination D, character design C, main plot C, logic C. Extra points: none Personal feelings: The setting is very novel, but the integration is not very good. There is a problem with the positioning of the protagonist, because the environment he is in is not very stable. The worldview of Naruto is incorrectly portrayed, and you regard it as the real world. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Three-star white·Standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Three-star gray+·Low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Three-star gray·Low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Three-star gray-•Qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ one-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ one-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and causing physical discomfort) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤ Major malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥ Extremely malicious (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words

The plot is okay, but the cards are disposable and the ability is to draw cards. Does the person who turns into the card still have this ability? Doesn't it feel like the protagonist doesn't know how to survive? I still want to provoke the third generation, and one day I will lure you away and kill the person you are calling.

Come on, the author is looking forward to it

Good,

You can take a look and see later whether the protagonist's development is suitable for adding to the bookshelf.

Let me see how long I have been reading this book. This book is really good.

Very well written, cheers

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

The subject matter is good, and Golden Finger will develop a lot in the future. The content is not evaluated. After all, the author of a free novel also needs some support.