Quick Travel: Marginal Female Supporting Actor Enters the Play

The plot and characters are very novel, but the ending is too implicit or open, and it is not a complete and detailed description. It makes me feel a little confused and itchy. But the style also looks unique [face covering] The descriptions of both the protagonist and the supporting characters are quite vivid. Unlike Tool Man, the White Snake in the first world is quite surprising. Encourage the new author. This style of writing doesn't look like a noob. In fact, the story is really special. I wrote the OC as I wanted. I've read so many stories about fast travel, but I've never seen anything similar in character design. You have finished chasing The Third World. Is this your first time writing a novel? The writing is really good, unlike what you can see on Tomato,,, the novel is logical, beautiful and has a sense of fog, and the emotional drama between people is also written very delicately. Please keep writing. I also like the character of the heroine. She is relatively indifferent and sober. She has brains and will not do anything embarrassing to readers - I have to mention the plots of some novels I read. Although it's fun to read novels with pictures, this kind of thoughtful and logical writing still makes me feel more comfortable.

Summary: When I found out that my husband was raising a snake demon, I was angry and left him, not wanting to wrong myself. I had a dream that predicted that my future husband would spoil his concubine and destroy his wife. I found a male ghost mistress before him. Since I had foreseen my death, in order not to be framed, I could only use my dodge and strength to learn how to escape from everything. Silly and sweet, I dismissed the prediction that the relationship with Zhuma would break up, but Zhuma took this prophecy very seriously and worried about gains and losses. In order to make my family live well, I had no money, so I had to take on the burden of finding the heartthrob prince. After I found the prince, he seemed to have fallen in love with me? This novel has emotions, which is rare and refreshing, and is not a mere anecdote. The heroine has a good outlook on life and has a great character. The story about Silly Baitian warms the hearts of those who read it. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, and that's what I like.

It looks good, and it gives me the feeling of reading articles in JJ, a bit like the original Yilin, that hazy feeling. There is rarely a particularly certain ending, and the heroine's character is also super good. She must put herself first in everything, a lively and cheerful female goose who loves herself and is self-reliant. After reading Corpse Warmth, I haven't seen a novel with this style of writing in 🍅 for a long time. Most of the novels on 🍅 are about strong love, hate and strong emotions. The author's writing in big letters makes me feel like I've returned to my original nature. It's so beautiful. I said that I feel like my plot is not well written, but I think it's very good. Each story has more than ten chapters and doesn't need too many plot lines. One or two things are enough. It's annoying to read a novel that drags out one thing for dozens of chapters. It's only past seven o'clock! Incredible! Such a beautiful novel! I can rate it above 9.5! Considering that some people don't like this kind of bland writing style, it must be at least 9 points or above. Oh, yes, when I started reading it, I saw someone in the comments saying that they doubted female competition. After I finished reading, I personally feel that it is not female competition. Although each story chapter is not long, each female character is well described, her actions are logical, and her brain is very clear. It seems that there is no deliberate stumbling block for the female protagonist for the sake of men (of course there is an exception for women), and there are many male competitions. I love watching this kind of thing, hehehe [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] Anyway, it's a very interesting novel. I love you so much [Blow a kiss]

It's super good-looking, and I feel like the heroine is subtly charming the hero. There are currently two planes, and there is no female competition. I feel that the heroine has a high sense of intelligence. The disadvantage is that the end of the plane stops at a place that makes people want to stop (it stopped halfway through the fun), but the author said that there will be more to be added, and there should be a follow-up. I will wait patiently. [Sending Hearts] Good luck to the author. I still feel sorry for you. Don't rest when you are tired. Use eye drops if your eyes hurt. Don't sleep. Also, there are twenty-four hours in a day. Twenty-five hours of writing is enough. They want you to rest because they don't want you to succeed. I am different. I don't want you to live just to eat (not) [Love]

It's quite good-looking, the plot and writing are pretty good, even a few minor flaws are acceptable. Writing about characters' psychological activities is relatively obscure, which I like very much, but sometimes it may be too obscure and readers can't react to it for a while. Maybe it's the problem some people in the comment area have mentioned.

The third article is like a god. I really like this kind of youth pain literature. The sticky feeling in the humid and dim evening is so sad and addictive. [Admiration] Especially when there is a person who is very upset in my heart. The more I think about it in the middle of the night, the more my heartache becomes, and then I gradually feel relieved. I feel angry and resentful for the characters in the book. There was nothing she could do. It was really heartbreaking when her best friend and grandma chose someone else, and it was heart-breaking pain to bring this to her [crying]. And when she reversed the outcome of her own death, she felt so calm and brave [crying] She must have been very scared after envisioning it in her heart so many times, not knowing when death would come. In the ending, she picked up the throbbing of youth, and the male protagonist really felt very reliable, so he would definitely choose the female protagonist. It feels like the rain is still pouring outside the window, but it's not that hard anymore [Sending Hearts]

In fact, I somewhat understand the author's words In fact, I think the first story is well told. In fact, you can glean the personality traits of each character from some details. This setting is quite novel and has an unconventional beauty. Including at the end, the hero's brother reminded the heroine that her hairpin fell down, and then the heroine said "it will be righted", which is very meaningful, let us imagine the story after that. Sisters who want to watch a different story can read it. If you just want to have fun reading it, this book may not be suitable. It's a good piece of work! Support the author!

It's a very novel book. In fact, I don't think it's a quick travel book, but it looks like a collection of stories. Every time I watch the dialogue, I feel like I'm watching a singing opera. The writing is pretty good, but it's too hazy and there's too much white space, giving people the feeling of having no beginning and no end, as if they've read and not seen at all. The heroine's character is very self-centered. She is very good and sober. The extra story about shemale love gave me one surprise after another [laughing] You must read the crime novel. The author's writing style really dominates the literature of youth pain. It's so cool. It's just like this, a period full of ambiguity, sensitivity and youth. The open ending is a surprise, but I actually really want to read hehhh [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Friends who are considering reading this book can read my review: I have finished reading the first story. There are probably a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Compared with the unclear narrative that everyone said, I think the author's writing is very personal. If you don't watch the extras, the ending will be open-ended. You can think about it according to your own preferences in the future. If you pursue the result, there are extras, which is also very good to watch. Each story is not very long, so it is a good way to pass the time. The most important thing is that the author's writing style is good. There is not a lot of gorgeous rhetoric, but it is enough to move people's hearts. To sum up, the writing is okay, the heroine has a distinct personality, and it's best to be able to accept OE viewing. So I'll give it five stars first, and I'll add the rest of the story after I finish reading it…

I really like the teacher's writing style. The light brushstrokes don't make people feel boring. My brother can straighten the hair, not just the hairpin, but the sister-in-law's figure in his heart that he can't touch, like fishing for the moon in the water.

I think the author's writing is very good, very meaningful, just like in a dream, and the ending is also oe. Rather than saying that the author has finished writing, it is better to say that the author's blank space has deep meaning. If you can't understand it, you may not understand the feeling. I think the author's wife wrote it very well, especially the conversation between Yu Duzao and Lu Ying'er. I feel so good. It's like I am having a conversation with my good friend. Can I put aside familiar people just to be polite? I really hope I'm the first choice here with you. Madam, you must keep writing. I'm really looking forward to the world ahead. I really came across my favorite writing style in Tomato. If you can't understand it, go read something else. I don't think there's any need to scold the author for not writing well or a bad ending. Maybe everyone has a different feeling. The author writes very well. Everyone has their own characteristics and is also very delicate. If you don't understand it, just read something else. This is really not a bad ending. Please don't scold her. I really want to read on and see her finish this book.

Big, I think your writing is very good, the character design is very good, she is a very special character, it is very easy to fall in love with her; the story line is not bad; the weakening of fast travel is actually accepted by me, only the story of "Skyfall" Bamboo Horse, I feel that the way the heroine's character handles things is very different from the previous one, just now At first, I couldn't accept the change in character, but I was still willing to follow the writing style of Da Da Da Da. When it comes to writing style, Da Da Da Da Da's writing style is very special. I like it😍😍😍; Finally, please🥹 Da Da Da Da Da, please tell me your number woo woo XX Yes, yes, the one thing that's not so good is that the ending ends a bit abruptly (every small world has a little bit of that 😢)

Short, stopped abruptly, but very fragrant, with a pure heartthrob flavor. The original heroine is not guilty (but the author said that the "past life" was just the heroine's dream and not real, so it's hard to say whether it counts as the original heroine) but was burned to death in the crematorium. The original male protagonist was abandoned. It's cool! There is no crematorium in the world of Tiansheng. I have always been like a bamboo horse. I can't get it.

I read a lot of reviews saying it was confusing. I can only say that when I watched it, both worlds' extra chapters were available, and I caught up. Hahahaha. After reading the story, you will feel a little confused (maybe?). After reading the extra, you will feel that with their character setting, the plot and ending are quite reasonable, and it is still worth watching. Although there are monsters in the world view, the ending is still realistic. In the female protagonist Judging from the angle, it should be the OE ending. You will know the angles of the male protagonists after watching it ✌🏻 (This review is only for the first world). Personally, I still like this plot structure, but the world is too short, and the plot rhythm is a bit fast (but it is also in line with "quick time travel" hahaha)

The writing is indeed very good and delicate, and each character is very three-dimensional. If the author had defined the novel, the score might have been higher. I feel that this article is neither a quick-travel series nor a collection of short stories. Although it can be barely defined as a collection of stories, the name of the heroine in each story is the same, which seems to give each story another connection. In addition, the extra chapters between each story are a bit far apart (but it's acceptable because the author will remind you). I also read a fast-travel novel before, but the sense of separation between each story in that book was too strong, which caused me to abandon the novel directly. This book didn't give me a strong sense of fragmentation. Maybe it's because I've read a book with a strong sense of fragmentation before, or maybe it's because the author reminded me at the end of the story of how many extra pages there are, which gave me a sense of interactivity. Overall, I don't dislike it. In short, good luck to the author and look forward to more good articles. After I posted the review, I returned to the bookshelf and suddenly remembered that I was attracted by the title of this book. As a result, this article was different from what I imagined (because the content of the book was so different from the style given by the title that I even forgot the name of the book after reading the first story). Perhaps because the title of this book raised my expectations too high, I felt a vague sense of disappointment when reading this article? Hmm (not sure)? But it's true [face covering]

Cold Teacher Rice, I have to say that your writing is really good. I have been immersed in the world of novels for many years. When I say that your writing is good, it does not mean your writing style is good. It means that you can really write and put it into it. The different characters in each unit give people a different feeling, especially the unique humid and dark atmosphere of the Xiaoxian College Entrance Examination. The sentence at the end of "Long Time No See" really impressed me. Entering the ending of a literary novel about youth pain, and the mystery of never knowing the ending until you see the end. I'm not very good at describing it, but it's really fascinating. Maybe you still have a lot of room for improvement, but I think you are already great. The only regret is that there is so little written in this book, and I don't know when I will see your next one again. I hope we will meet again on Tomato. Best wishes.

Let me talk about my thoughts first, that is, I feel that it is very similar to the kind of youth literature from ancient times, but it is not bloody, and it is based on women. Therefore, it is even more valuable and at the same time very seductive. I have read every article and I think they are all pretty good. The writing style is particularly good, with a green and plump taste. Wow wow wow, it seems that the person standing in front of me is an ideal person. So I really recommend recommend recommend recommend recommend. One of my favorite stories is about the snake demon, because she is sober and independent, and does not ask for a harmonious outcome. She is who she is from beginning to end. Sometimes I feel like she is looking at me, laughing at me, [covering her face] [covering her face] [covering her face]. Because I was thinking that I must choose one, but I didn't choose any one. Wow, I suddenly realized why I should choose someone who is obviously not a good person.

I just read A Small World. It's a bit of a sour story, and it will make you think a lot after reading it. So after reading it, I will read some details over and over again. The first small world heroine's best choice is not to choose anyone. The heroine also refutes every point with reason. But how can I put it, people always like happy endings, so it is inevitable that they will be a little sentimental. I don't know which worlds are be and which worlds are he. I hope someone with good intentions can tell me. My eye sockets are too shallow and my tear point is low. I can't stand the abuse [crying]

It's a very interesting article. After reading two articles, I think, well, the writing style is very special, and the relationship between the characters is very interesting and messy. It's really a mess, so drink it up quickly. It has a very different feeling from other fast-traveling online articles that can be described as mature, but it has the smell of a paper book.

It's very nice. I'm going to move it to the bookshelf, but I came back to give it a five-star review. The small world in the back is a bit bland and there is a big gap, but the front is really attractive. The heroine's character in the early stage is really good, very tough, and has the ability to protect herself. Although she is a little naive in the later stage, she is still very good. But there is a big gap compared with the previous ones, but I still highly recommend it, even if I give it good reviews for the first time, I recommend it to everyone. The writing style is super good, with a touch of sadness and a misty feeling, but the heroine is very powerful, she will not be hurt easily, and there is no such book like other books on this subject. The heroine suffered a lot of damage, but this one didn't get hurt at all. It was all the other supporting characters who got hurt. It's very friendly to me as a half-female protagonist, and the heroine's IQ is very online. It's a good open ending without an embarrassing ending. It's a very smooth ending. It's up to us to think about the ending. And he will give you some inspiration, and the ending will be very fulfilling, much more beautiful than most of the novels. It is a very good short story, with a fast pace but full characters. It is suitable for readers who hate procrastination. Well, this is how I feel anyway. It is very interesting and I highly recommend it to everyone. I hope the author can work hard and write better articles. I can write some long ones next time. I like it very much and can slow down. Everyone will give the author good comments [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

Now I realize that writing is really important. This book is very cute. It has both writing style and novel setting. The author seems to have a little sense of feminism. It is very comfortable to read and I like it🤗 I particularly like the character of the heroine. Although the last two short stories seem to have a different character because the heroine is an indigenous person, an author who loves the heroine will always make readers fall in love with her heroine. The heroine always has a family who loves her and very good female friends. The heroine always grows up healthy and strong. The heroine always gets what she wants and stays away from what she doesn't want. Everything is based on the heroine's wishes. I love it so much and am happy. It makes me angry after watching it🥰It's sweet and cute, and it's a very smooth and natural book.

For me, this book is good to read, but it has some shortcomings. Some units end suddenly, which catches people off guard. Then the image of the heroine will appear a little thin in the first few chapters of some units, but it will be better in the later chapters, especially the unit where the sky falls. The later chapters are really beautiful and I like it very much. The author's writing style is very good, and there is not too much elaboration. To me, it was just plain and simple. I was very happy to read it. I hope the author will have better and better works, come on

Very strange writing style. The first two chapters are similar to the style of Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio, with strange and absurd love and hatred, and a relationship with monsters. I didn't like the third chapter and skipped it for a long time. I didn't read it much. Every ending is mysterious, I quite like it. It's hard to explain but it means a long time.

It's really good to watch. After finishing one story, I can't wait to read the next one, but at the same time I want to wait until the story is finished before reading. It's like the feeling of enduring your appetite to eat the most delicious meal. The stories are really novel and interesting, and the direction of the story completely surprised me. I am a slow reader, and this book is even more so. I feel like I need to chew slowly to savor the delicacies. I didn't expect this book to fascinate me so much at first, and I really fell into it as I read it. I saw that the author said that he would change his name and write a new book in the future. I hope that we can meet each other by fate in the future. I am looking forward to the new book!

I watched the first Little World, and I felt that the author's conception was quite novel, but it was a bit hazy, and the ending was a bit hasty, making people confused and unable to clearly understand the author's intention. It is not recommended for those who are a bit demanding. If you are tired of reading, you can read it. At least the story direction is unexpected. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] And I think the author's writing is quite good, with detailed descriptions, so please give it a thumbs up [laughs]

Oh my god, this is a fairy. It has a sense of weirdness, is very profound and very high-spirited. I just don't know why the rating is not high⊙⊙I almost missed it I love it so much, but I hope the author will write more extras🥺. I'm a little bit frustrated.

The core of the little girl written by the author is very strong, supporting her thoughts. The little girl will not be too internally conflicted. She mainly focuses on her own thoughts. My sister is so cute. Dear, the author is also cute. Please update it soon.

I didn't expect that Tomato would have such an article. This style of writing is very similar to the magazines I would buy in junior high school and high school. People who read it feel sour in their hearts. I have watched three worlds so far, and I like the one about the college entrance examination the most. It really has a youthful feel. I really like the heroine Yu Duzao's character. She is sober and always knows what she wants. Even feelings will not bother her. I like that the ending of each world is open-ended, because I can't guess where Yu Duzao will end up, and it's just as full of surprises as the story progresses. I feel that this book does not have many emotional lines. It mainly focuses on the growth line of the heroine. It has a lot of inner analysis of the heroine. It is really interesting and I can learn a lot from it. Even if the first and second worlds are set in ancient times, female-centered thinking is also the first. I feel that the score of 7.0 Is low. In my heart, this book can at least have a score of 9.0 Or above. I have read novels for more than ten years and rarely comment on them. But this time I couldn't help but express my feelings after reading the third world.

I really like the large-scale writing, which has a hazy and empty beauty. Every time I read this novel, I always feel that I am watching these stories from a third-person perspective through the fog. The heroine seems to be like this, always looking at the people or things she experiences from a third-person perspective (not, just It feels like the heroine has been telling her not to get stuck in those feelings, allowing her to always have room to turn around), the heroine's "time" has been flowing forward, and she has always been true to herself. Watching the heroine's behavior and her thoughts in handling things, I seem to have been educated or enlightened. Some of the cps are really awesome! I really want to watch more extras! (Although I feel that some cps are unlikely to be together according to the heroine's character) but I love to watch [adoration] [adoration] [love] [love]

The five stars are for the juvenile delinquency chapter. It's really special and cinematic. It reminded me of Keigo Higashino's White Night Journey. All the story lines are not straightforward, and various details are connected in series. I can feel the emotions and connections between the characters from the grass-gray snake line. I only read the first chapter of other stories, so I won't comment much.