Ultra: the Light of Miracle Comes to Reality

Author, tell me honestly, is my deskmate Camilla? [Laughing evilly]

Flaws do not hide the advantages, it is enough for a novice to write to this level. But it is a pity that the pain point - spiritual apotheosis - is still not addressed. Without the embellishment of spiritual changes, this book looks like a cheating fairy tale. When the protagonist holds the magic stick in that situation, many problems will be inevitable. 1. Who am I? Whether he is a human or Ultraman completely determines the direction of the plot, and it is also Oven's most attractive contradiction. If the protagonist is an ordinary person in this apocalyptic situation, there will usually be an ambivalence: doubt, avoidance, why me? Am I worthy? Can I always win? If I lose, will there be new light later? Will mankind be directly destroyed? However, scenes of many people dying appear before my eyes. Will I die? I must be Ultraman! There is a point of spiritual growth here - overcoming the fear of death, the light of humanity begins to appear, and the perspective of considering the problem is to focus on human beings as a whole, and to enhance human strength, because even Ultraman will die, so he must leave a back-up, even if he fails, someone will stand up to fight against evil. 2. Reduce communication. Without knowing the magnitude of the crisis, you should prepare for the worst and try to avoid contact with other people. After all, there are so many enemies with terrible faces in the Ultraman series, so the fewer family members there are, the easier it is to protect them. Anyone who has seen Ultraman will not take any chances. This is the greatest safety guarantee for the lives of others. 3. Always keep your strength. In this state where the enemy's situation is unknown and there are no teammates, you don't know what form or extent the next crisis will come, or whether the enemy will take advantage of your illness to kill you. You can train, but you must first master the perception ability, and then fish for law enforcement. Fishing a few times will not only make you feel at ease and secure, but also explore enemy intelligence. 4. Stay vigilant and proactively explore contacts. It is difficult to hide the identity of Ultraman from the aliens, but if it is revealed, you can contact the aliens in the Ultraman series to understand the situation, and use the memory advantage of the Ultraman series to make insinuations, but be careful not to ever expose your own information. 5. The Ultra spirit, which is also the sublimation point of the protagonist of Ouwen, admits his own ordinaryness and bravely takes on everything to move towards tomorrow, respects life, considers the long-term - the reconciliation and connection between the earth and the universe, guides the exploration of the brilliance of human beings, realizes the dark side of human beings and still loves human beings, etc., And finally becomes an Ultraman who is in line with ideal cognition.

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I've heard about it, and basically no details have been lost. So far, it's very good, except for yours. How to say it? I think it's more intense in the air. I think some people may not like this place, but I definitely don't care. Although I personally seem to like the air a little bit. At present, the author's book is quite in line with my taste, but a small group of people may not recognize it so much [laughing evilly] The author asks you to write Ultraman novels for a lifetime. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The new form created by AI [face covering] Based on the ultimate proposition of Tiga's worldview "the eternal cycle of light and darkness", combined with the concept of "primordial giant" that was not used in Maruyama Hiroshi's original plan, the ultimate form that surpasses the shining type is set. This form breaks through the traditional evolutionary logic and takes "existence itself as the law" as the core of the design—— --- ### **Eternity Mode - Genesis End** **Positioning**: Embodiment of the laws of the universe (beyond the duality of light and darkness, resetting the law of cause and effect)

Well, but how to put it? This novel is quite good. Most of the growth of organizations is forced to grow. But how should I put it? This novel is quite good. It is about the growth of an organization, and most of it is forced to grow. Some episodes are very popular dramas, and some are very ordinary, which is also very good. It is even better when it comes to portraying the protagonist. Yes, I think as long as you know, there seems to be no change. This is called knowing and we are familiar with it. The other side of the world says to go to other design institutes. How should I say? After solving this, it will be more like walking out of the Novice Village. Yes, it is the Novice Village. What I said was that I originally wanted the protagonists to know different Ultraman, learn different things, and acquire some skills, such as Ultraman Geed, Ultraman Zeta, and the power-up props of these two. In this way, the protagonist can also obtain new forms or something? The last thing I want to say is, author, have you ever thought about letting readers travel to other worlds? Or something? And the author, please come on, thank you. I just want to ask, will the master blow to other worlds? Or take the heroine with you? ,

Plot: The plot is full of ups and downs, suspense and surprises. It can grab the reader's attention from the beginning and constantly push the story forward without any delays or redundancies. Characters: The characters are vividly and three-dimensionally created. Each character has a unique personality, motivation and growth process, as if they really exist, allowing readers to deeply empathize. Language: The text expression is smooth and natural, the wording is precise and appropriate, and full of appeal. Whether it is describing the environment or the inner world of the characters, it can make the readers feel immersed in the scene. Theme: The theme is profound and connotative. It can trigger readers' thinking about life, society, human nature, etc. It is not simply superficial. Structure: The structure is rigorous and reasonable, the beginning, middle and end echo each other, the transition is natural, the plots are organically combined, and there are no logical loopholes. It feels like other characters except the heroine and the alien don't have much presence. If it really doesn't work, mention the heroine more. Otherwise, you will have too few supporting characters and the plot will not work.

It's very engaging and won't make you want to abandon the article. There's nothing sinister about it. Basically, it's just like normal Ultraman. It was written from that point of view, but he was just an ordinary high school student at the beginning. How should I put it? It would have been great without I Don't Eat Beef [face covering] I just don't know why the rating is so low. I looked at the comments and it seemed like there were only a few dozen likes, so no one would read them. I thought, anyway, it's much better than those system posts about I Don't Eat Beef.

Not bad, in line with my understanding of urban arcana, the protagonist is also okay, and the plot is neither tight nor romantic. Fortunately, it's Old Man Jia, with excellent mechanics, controllable numerical values, and unlimited potential. The miracle will happen until the end.

Even if the identity of the protagonist is discovered by the official, be sure not to cooperate with the official, because you are not sure whether there will be people in the official such as Staff Officer Gondo or Commander Matsunaga who want to control the power of Ultraman. Asuka and Brother Zhun are a good example. Don't think too much of the official, because you are not sure There must be people in there who want to take Ultraman's power as their own, and then rule the world themselves, because human nature cannot stand the test. Also, don't make the protagonist a Madonna, otherwise he will have to endure the injustice he suffers from the people, and it is best to be righteous and evil like General Duanmu. Tiga's original world view is much better than other Ultra's.

Hmm, um, um, quite pretty Such a perfect novel, don't stop updating it I'll also give you some gifts. Although it's not much, it's still thoughtful

I still prefer the Dagu happy type. Who wouldn't like monsters with high defense and high output? If you want to be a Dharma King, your energy supply will not be enough. A speed Dharma King is not bad, it consumes too much energy. I prefer head-to-head confrontation. If I run out of energy, or if I have a black hand, I can use it as a backup for the second game.

Can the author give some details on the scene, such as the special photography method, add a little interaction with NPCs when Ultraman fights monsters, etc., To highlight the huge feeling, and describe the environment more, and put a picture of the monster's appearance to make it easy to identify

Everything else is good, but the overall tone is not very comfortable and quite depressing. It feels very uncomfortable to write about the mutual suspicion between the protagonist and the official. If the author shows the real nature of human nature first, then it will be very real when you read it.

Come on, write well. I'll come back when you come out with the extra story. What's going on? Why hasn't it been updated after a day? Raised to death?

Come on, come on, come on

Personally I think it's pretty good

It's pretty good so far. But after the cosmic barrier is broken, will there be others coming?

It looks okay so far. Once the dark type is unlocked later, you can use the light absorption ability to create powerful solar, moonlight aerial, and cosmic composite types.

This is a good book that I have read that corrects the three views [Chigua]

Now I have read the latest chapter, it is great, it is good to keep it up, the logic, the view of real human beings, the plot is also very relaxed, I really hope the author can continue writing, although I can't give the author any reward, which is really embarrassing, come on author,

Not bad, will there be another Ultraman in the future?

Nice! I just want to ask if the author plans to unlock the shining type when fighting Gatanjie, or unlocking the shining type when fighting the boss, the man in black [What][Thinking]

You can have Advisor Fujishu travel through time! In the finale of Tiga, didn't he go through the gate and then Camilla went to find Tiga? There is Tiga and Camilla here, so why didn't they come from the other side? @ Bacteriabulang Is that okay?

I think this kind of novel is quite good, but the villain is still quite good. Bruton was used to delete everyone's information about Ultraman. Otherwise, everyone in the real world would know about Ultraman, and the human body would not have to hide every day, otherwise the quasi-brother would be his fate.

It's very excellent, and one of the few authors who doesn't use the original plot and word count.

There is nothing poisonous at the moment

Come on, the writing is beautiful (´•ω•̥`)

Well written, good luck to the author!

You'll know after watching it. Children don't talk much.