Ultra: After the Male Ghost Burst into White Moonlight

The character of the male protagonist is very full, and he is a gentle scum. In addition, the author is really good at writing. Some places just hit my cute point. The only drawback is that the pace is a bit fast. In some places, it may be because there is not much exaggeration, so I did not have much emotional fluctuations while watching it. , And there are some places where the transition is sudden, but the pace is too fast. Some places could be written in detail, and the rendering is not in place, but the writing is not bad. Among all the Ultra fans I have read, but if I look at all the books I have read, it is almost four or three stars. To be honest, the author was a bit hasty in writing, just like... A draft, he laid out all the information and characters clearly. The timeline is a bit confusing, but you can still understand it if you look closely. The author seems to be spreading a very large net, and the flaws are not concealed. It is still a very good book for the fandom alone.

The protagonist is a gentle blue beauty, but a bit sadistic [crying], the author please don't be sadistic! ! Let the protagonist be well! ! [Cry][Cry]Don't let him get hurt again [Cry][Cry][Cry]

The writing is quite good, and the emotional descriptions are quite delicate. Ambiguity, pulling, being secretly in love without knowing it, even if you are straight-up, you still react like a straight man, and you have a very male-mom vibe. Those who love this mouthful will definitely like it very much. There are just some plots that jump around and scenes change inexplicably. Some of the dialogue is so hazy that it's hard to tell who is speaking and who is speaking to whom. There are guest characters, and the setting of the previous book was hesitant. The author would explain it if he had something to say, but now there is no explanation; the setting is also hidden in the text, I just know that it is awesome, very high-level, and inhuman.

Oh my god, it's so pretty😭 I turned Brother Zhun into a male ghost, Helseth, you have to be responsible🤓 (Can the author let Helseth and Zhun be together? Please😭)

I really like baby Hel The interaction between Baby Hel and the "Blood Lord" is great (blessed are those who eat narcissus) The interaction between 0009 and 0215 is also very fun. I really like Qian Yuan, this cute baby, but Qian Hui is a little bit confused (I checked her eyes, they are all my type) Always find a lot of plot in a lot of memes Kane is really funny. Let's play with Beria later. Baby Hel has no faith anyway! I feel like I can hit anything Baby Hel is super handsome and beautiful, a gentle male mother And when he started transforming into a human body, he still had leg rings! ! ! Weapons are even whips! ! ! (Xp party ecstasy) (I rarely write book reviews that long unless the book is really good or I like the author very much)

I really like Helseth. I can't refuse this kind of story where the protagonist is mistakenly thought to be beautiful, strong and miserable (he himself doesn't think so). There are also vests fighting each other, I like it.

It's nice to watch, and the logic is quite strong. The only shortcoming is that I feel that I have written a lot of characters, which makes people forget it after watching it every few days. [I'm almost crying] It's my problem, not the big problem. I like the others. I also hope that brother-in-law can get what he wants and be with his best friend. I must be satisfied [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Very good at cooking. . . Great, a true heartthrob of all, without any sub-CP, he looks really happy both physically and mentally I hope I can give everyone a male protagonist, or I can have separate endings. I feel like each one is particularly delicious.

No, I feel so good watching it🆘🆘🆘 So pretty. . . I feel Herseth is a good nanny (bushi) Helseth felt miserable in his last world, so he must be happy in this world.

No, I'm going to die. I have never encountered a book that suits me so well! ! ! Loyal dog, I love, love, love, love, love, "I am yours." It smells... It smells so good, so bold! ! ! ! Male ghost Zofie, I feel so good, so good, so good, so good! ! ! Hel is the ultimate succubus, "You are my apocalypse." It's so foul!

It will be updated steadily every day, with additional updates from time to time. The emotional plot is 50/50, keeping your blood pressure steady. The protagonist is beautiful, strong and miserable, and has a slight sense of subversion (PS: The protagonist is in love? But they are not the same person. There is an original CP, but the impact is not big? (I saw it, you said the book review will be updated 👁️ @ seal your move

The bag is beautiful, feel free to rush! I feel like the author has a talent for making the characters in it very cute. I really like System 0009, he is a super cute poisonous Wei The protagonist is a gentle but strong male mother Finally, I hope the author will release more updates! ! ! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

The overall look and feel is good along the way. The character is not OOC, but the protagonist has a high emotional intelligence, is very strong in martial arts (he is banned), has a clear love and hate, and dares to speak, do, and admit it. No matter what it is, it touches my heart. The article rewrites the characters, and then the plot. The overall style is light-hearted. Occasionally, one or two foreign writers come to visit, and the protagonists travel through parallel worlds to complete tasks. The descriptions of how many times he stabs you from time to time are simple and succinct, and the details are sensational and rough without being too bloody (it feels like it is to highlight that the protagonist is not invincible). The main plot is to be a villain and gain hatred, but in fact all the hatred is absorbed by the protagonist's vest. It is still a novel way to rely on the main body to gain favor and the vest to kill the main body. (The main character Kuku's favorability to catch everyone without even realizing it is really cool to me (*´ω｀*)) The author's writing is very good! In my opinion, the descriptions of many places are more beautiful than 80% of Tomato's fan fictions. They are neither obtrusive nor too heavy. They are simply ahead of the rest! I gave this a four-star review, and the one star less was because the author said that some Naruto jokes would be inserted into the article, and some of the plot would involve the setting of another book, but explanations would be provided accordingly. The memes are interesting ones, and Naruto doesn't appear very much. The key point is that it involves a lot of settings in another book, and there are only a few scrawled explanations! :-) I usually choose to listen to books when reading novels, but I really can't listen to this one. I'm confused and don't know where it's going. I can only read it word by word and then read it with the comments. I'm still confused when I read this elsewhere. Therefore, in my eyes, the only and most important shortcoming of this book is that the explanation is not clear, and there are no other flaws (there are too few protagonists who are extremely controlling but show great emotional intelligence in dealing with the situation. Of course, this kind of performance is quite suitable for a utopia like the Kingdom of Light. High praise ^_^) After reading this, the system tasks are completely gone, and the world view has been completely changed to the world view of "the masters of suffering" (I don't know the details). There are several new characters, and the system has also gone to fight in the world view of "the masters of suffering". Noah also cooperated with something in this worldview. He said he wanted to help Hull, but so far it seems that everything he did was to deceive others. The biggest victim of the villain mission is Beria. The others were all played by "Blood Lord", and only Beria was played by Hel himself. Originally, with some coaxing, we could still manage to be friendly with the Kane brothers (at least Hull wouldn't be so sad that a younger brother died) (they were hurting each other). Then this system is really confusing. It restricts Hull at one moment and then moves towards Hull at the other. I don't understand (specifically 0215) Summary: The plot is all biased (just like all Ultra members traveling through time). All is oriented, but other personalities determine that the main personality of cp is all. The author's writing style and the interaction between Ultra characters are very attractive to me, but I really can't accept the main plot. Others who are willing to join the trap should consider reading it, otherwise it will be really frustrating (TT)

One star is given to the author's inexplicable setting. An unknown term pops up in the writing, and the system comes up again and again. The author and the comment area have been talking about the Riddler, talking about the setting of the previous book. Why do I have to make up for the setting of the fanfic when reading this fanfic (#-.-)

The content is relaxing and healing, telling the warm daily life of the protagonist, his brothers and close friends. (Copied below) The tone is relaxed and humorous, and it is full of wit and wit. It is hard to put down when reading it. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read.

Easily cured, a high school student was promoted to grade 44 in one breath [Love] The loud and penetrating sound that transcends time, the phantom sun, solemnly depicts that lifelike and super beautiful sentence on the black curtain!!! It was really impressive at the time, so wonderful~

Fine. But sometimes I really can't understand it. I feel that the author's descriptions are not very specific in some places. As a result, the book is confusing for me, I can't relate to it, and I don't feel too many emotions. But there is still a lot that is understandable and interesting. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

What an amazing setting, but if you don't look at the original settings, you'll feel a bit dizzy😵‍💫. The previous jumps are too fast, does it feel like a comic storyboard? Bonds, best friends, feelings, male ghosts, brother-in-laws, vests, these elements add up so much that it's so satisfying [full] (it should be considered a vest🤔) The unconscious flirtation between the protagonists is also so satisfying [shy] Anyway, the author has written it well [admiration] [admiration]

Very nice to look at and very pleasing to the eye. But I feel like it's a little confusing when I look at it later, and I can't understand it. But it's really attractive to me, it looks good, I can't understand it, but it looks good. [Cover face]

It looks good, with Zuo Fei, Meng Bi Mao Mao and Zhuang Ge, it has a CP feel and has a single arrow direction!

It's really good. I've read about thirty chapters so far. I think the only thing is that it has too many links with the previous book. I don't really like to read too many linkages, although it does not affect the viewing. The early progress will be a bit fast, and you may be a little confused if you don't read it carefully. In addition, I quite like the character design of the protagonist. It's light and cute😋. It's almost like a succubus. I just like the white hair and the red eyes are very handsome😋

The writing is very good, the content is rich, and the emotions are very layered, but it's just too sharp! ! ! It's like looking for sugar in the glass shards! I really can't bear the knife, I can't stand it anymore, and I feel unhappy. [Crying] But the writing is very good.

It's nice to watch, but a little messy. The descriptions of Ao's side are not very good, so I refuse to serve them on the table. They are Zhunhe Zhen√, Tuo Zhuntuo√, Xuejia√, and Zanganzang√. The author writes in large words that pure love is delicious (｡••｡). The emotional scenes are excellent, and the fighting descriptions are also very good, but the settings are too confusing and the viewing experience is degraded. As soon as I pulled up the catalog, I found the right rice, so I kept digging into it, and finally got a special chapter, which was so well written, I dreamed of a teacher writing a book of pure love.

I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much. I hope the author will update 20,000 chapters a day, okay?

Very good article, it makes me add another rating

I didn't have high expectations, but I didn't expect it to be pretty good.

It's very interesting. I particularly like the feeling of being a group favorite. Can the author allow the protagonist and Zero to have more interactions? I want to see how they get along [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I'm talking about CP. It's good to read. I read the Naruto story before coming here. It's good to see. This article must be completely true to the main palace. Now Jakura is going to Oita

This is the real heartthrob, it is delicious and delicious. But in the end, it's a bit regretful. Brother-in-law can only wait for someone who doesn't know when he will come back, so I want to make a side story. So boss, when will the extra series be available?

Okay, the story about raising a cub is that I want to see the final battle of Super Galaxy Legend, Zero's first appearance, Belia VS Zero + the protagonist [crying]