HP: My Brother, the Savior!

It's so good. I almost gave up on the story when I read about 20 chapters. The early writing was too immature, it felt like a drama, and it was OOC. But things got much better in the later stages. First, the writing style was significantly improved, and then the characterization became much more detailed. I wanted to cry when I read the extra episode, even though I knew it was a fake death😿😿😿The early part can be said to be an incomparably cool story, it's so fun to watch. It is really rare to see a story about Slytherin and being trusted by Dumbledore throughout the whole process😸And it feels like the HP fanfic of the main character Slytherin seems to be basically taking advantage of everyone😿😿But in this book Mia is warm to everyone! Overall, I enjoyed reading this book! Hey, the author's other book is also good. I don't know why the rating is not high. Maybe it's because most of them only read the first part😿😿😿

Very nice HP fanfic! The ending of he really made me cry to death 😭😭 In the end, the "suspended death" heroine, Dumbledore, Harry and Sect appeared, which was really exciting and exciting! The heroine setting is also very good! The perfect ending of the story really fulfills the regretful ending of the original work😭😭 And the heroine's CP is also very good🥰😍

It's good-looking and very logical. The heroine has a great personality. She doesn't have the compassionate mentality of a time traveler at all (this mentality makes me feel that they are not in the same dimension). She is just very immersive. The heroine's feelings for everyone are based on getting along with each other, not because of watching the original book or the movie (if you only have feelings because of watching the original work, then this kind of feeling will never be equal). I love the author so much [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The main character is well described. Highly recommended. I really like Mia. Can the author write a side story for each cp? This feeling of uncertainty about CP is really bad! ! ! ! Write a side story! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really, really, really good to watch. This is the first HP movie I've finished reading. I really think it's well written. Mia is here to save the world. Mia's charisma is really strong. I sometimes think that Mia should be surrounded by love from all over the world. So when there are many men who like Mia, I wonder if the author should open a harem for Mia? This way there will be a lot of love for Mia. So I really like Sif, the Godfathers, and the episodes where Lily and James raise their children. I really want Mia and Harry to be surrounded by love. I think they should be very happy at this age and should not be used as servants in the Dursley family. Although everyone has difficulties with this matter, after all, Dunduoduo did not provide child support at the time, and it was very hard for the Dursleys to raise three children. But Mia and Harry, two such cute little noses, should be surrounded by lots and lots of love. If Lily knew that Harry was treated like this at the Dursleys, she wouldn't be happy either. Because I really like this book, I couldn't help but give me my first long review since I read the book. I'm not very good at writing reviews, so I can only say everything I think about it. Maybe some of the expressions are not very good. To be honest, after reading this book, I really felt a sense of inexplicable melancholy. It was like reading their entire life experiences. I knew them, but they didn't know me. But I also wish Mia to live happily in that world, long live the Harry Potter world!

It's very interesting. If you look at the comment section in certain places, you will laugh to death, and everyone is very funny.

Grass! It's really beautiful, and the author is so considerate! It actually made every cp have a grand wedding, and it also filled the gap in my heart that belongs to cp Zhan Li. Every cp gave birth to a daughter, which was great, except for Harry of course. Orthopedics is so perfect, and the author of Orthopedics Rise [Adoration] has been great for a long time. He wrote everyone so cute, Fork Padfoot is amazing, Lily is my mother, the author is so good at filling in the pits! The church, the godfathers, parents, Fred, and Albus are all still alive. It's great. Everyone has a perfect ending [Love][Love][Love] Very good👍Fortunately, I clicked on this book, otherwise I would die if I missed such a beautiful hp

A very perfect book. The writing style is mature, the characters are three-dimensional, and everyone is very vivid. It does not feel like the templates of the current novels are applied, and there is no forced torture plot of "forcing new words to express sorrow". This book can be regarded as a companion during the period of literary shortage ( I'm really tired of the routines of current novels). When reading, I can feel the author's hard work on the characters. After reading, it feels like hanging out with old friends. There is no excessive withdrawal reaction, but the aftertaste is endless. It really makes people feel that they really exist.

It's super beautiful, just like the book says "You can't meet people who are too amazing." Then this book is about not meeting people who are too amazing. This book is really beautiful and the characters of each person are very interesting. Moreover, he also has many cp follow-ups. Unlike other books, he can only write one, which satisfies the experts. There are just some punctuation marks that need to be changed.

After reading Chapter 70, the plot is not delayed and develops smoothly. When I watched it, I felt very immersed. The heroine felt like she was truly integrated into the world, and her emotions were expressed very naturally. I really like the little ambiguous clips.

The ending is very happy, I was very touched after watching it! All the characters who died in the original work are still there (except for the villain), including Sirius, Dumbledore, Snape, Lupin, etc. Lily and James were also resurrected, making up for the regrets. The characters are also very full, and there is more joy in the book. The cp writing is good, the pairing of Hermione and Krum ✓ [Blowing Kiss]

This is a very belated review. Dada is really well written. I have been following this book since the beginning and have posted many paragraphs of reviews. I have also witnessed that the author's writing style has changed from immature to mature. He also writes emotional lines very well. Mia is a little angel, a little angel like her mother Lily, who can shine by herself. In fact, I love every CP, but the ones that I find the best are Theodore and Mia (my Sago CPs), and the Blue Eucalyptus and the Sophora japonica. Their emotional lines are really the pair that I find the most fascinating! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author writes so well! ! ! ! Sometimes I will re-write it. The author is great and he will write more articles [Chigua]. I'm very much looking forward to watching it

Really, the heroine is strong and beautiful, a pure heroine type, and it really makes up for a lot of regrets in the original work [crying] There are quite a lot of suitors for the heroine, and each one of them is super easy to quarrel with if taken alone! ! ! Everyone should read this novel [shy]

The heroine is very powerful, but she is a bit Mary Sue. Her golden finger is open a lot, and some things are not so enjoyable if she gets them too easily. The plot basically follows the main line of the original work without much innovation. If you want to read Su Shuang's article, you can read it

Can the author give more information? It's so beautiful. Baby Mia is flirting without even realizing it! I really like it so much!

The story line of the whole article is very clear, and it is more consistent with the original work. The CP is also very good. In fact, I don't criticize Luo He. I like the original work very much, but on this point, it is very disturbing to read, so I still support the author's dismantling Luo He. The heroine is also a heroine with a very three-dimensional personality, because she is not only a perfect genius, but also has a sinister and funny side, so I think the author's character creation is simply nice. If you are looking for HP fanfiction, you can check it out, it's really high quality.

A very good heartthrob, and it is my personal favorite in the Snake Yard. The heroine is the kind of being who looks weak but actually kills a large group of people in an instant. Currently, the main text is about the emotional drama. Theodore will go first. I look forward to the author's update soon [Blow kiss]

I just finished this book, and then I found out that the finale was released today, haha, it was very easy to read. The whole article is written smoothly, and the heroine is Harry Potter's sister, who is very smart and cute. When I was assigned to Slytherin, I thought it was a cold villain script at first, but it turned out to be heart-warming. I have a sense of camaraderie with every character, and it's easy to relate to them. The heroine is really smart haha. The author really changed the unforgettable ending in the original work, and everyone survived, which is great. It was a bit sour to watch when the heroine faked her death, but it wasn't very long at all. The heroine is very strong, loved by the professors, and has nothing to feel aggrieved about. The author's writing is overall pretty good and worth reading. Please give me more extras, the merrier, any character is very interesting.

The author is great, this is a very good-looking novel. I am the kind of person who reads novels and rarely finishes them all. But I have really read all of this book!

Go, I think this book is really awesome. This is my second time writing a book review. Oh my god, I was so excited that I turned over this book in bed. When I read more than 100 chapters, I was actually ready to abandon it because I suddenly felt that it was not interesting anymore, just a little bit. The words seemed long-winded, but I changed my mind when I saw it later. Maybe I suddenly got bored in the middle, and then I looked for other books to read. It's not that I praise it over others. To be honest, after reading it again, I think this book left me with the deepest memory. But why book two? Because there's a book and it's about pro-image. Although it is good-looking, I prefer drama, so I think this book is better. Then there is his emotional line. I also think the description is very vivid. I have seen many parts where the author's description techniques are very delicate. OK, I've finished reading the main text. As for the main text, I might be confused when I read the final battle later. I think it's a bit long-winded (I personally don't think so, don't criticize me). Then, I didn't watch the following extras very much, because I think I probably don't like this kind of extras, because I have almost never watched the extras, and I think the extras, although well written, are a bit too talkative, so I can't stand it, but it's still very interesting. Highly recommended.

The goods have been received. The packaging looks good. It is a good purchase and I am quite satisfied. Very satisfied, all 5 points. Authors should update more, the requirements are not high, 50 chapters a day [laughing]

This book is very good! Time travel, original heroine, no CP in the main text and multiple branches, fan fiction, master generation and some parent generation, heart-throb, high talent, Su Shuang, happy ending. The setting is novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The heroine is lively and cheerful, well-behaved and cute, stubborn and defensive, smart and smart, calm and decisive, modest and studious, cautious, powerful, and good at empathizing with others. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

Well, I feel that the plot is quite normal. No major changes have been made, but it still satisfies the regrets. The emotional lines are also very eye-catching. I can't say that it is particularly delicate, but it is still very attractive. Because the most sincere feelings may not be very delicate, but they are definitely enough to touch people's hearts.

It's really beautiful. The heroine is very smart and respectful. Those who like heartthrobs are lucky♡＾▽＾♡

Oh my god! It's super pretty, but I like Xiaoduo better. I hope I can get in touch with it more in the future❛˓◞˂̵✧

It's so beautiful. I really want everyone to read it. I like the heroine's character very much. I've already finished the second read. I didn't post a review when I read it for the first time. I'm a very picky person and I've never really read a second read of any novel. But I even want to read this novel a third time. You guys should know how good it is.

I like it so much, I like Mia very much. This book gives a perfect ending to every regretful person in the movie. The twins are alive, Dumbledore is alive, Sirius, Lupine and Professor Snape are all alive. Mia's emotional line is also very difficult. I like her and Xiaolong the most, but the plot is still the main line. It really makes up for my regrets when watching the movie perfectly. Lily and James are back in the end, it's great! I really like this novel, it's really great

It's okay, but I hope the author's writing style can be better. The plot is a bit too fast. I hope it can be written slowly. There are no writing requirements. I just want to hit CP's rush [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Supplement (fire tongs Liu Ming from 25.2.7 I love my sister, and I also love Duoduo. After all, I had my first kiss with Duoduo (Midomiduo Saigao!!) (The big characters are neutral, and there is no personality preference, except for the braised egg pie, which is very good-looking. Even if they buy Ron, no one will buy Percy and the offspring Weasley. The 7v1 is amazing (there is no sandwich cake, but 1v1 is also delicious) Liu Ming! Damn Liu Ming! !

Mia is an angel girl [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Brave, kind, knowledgeable, pragmatic, and extremely protective. She is the group's favorite and heartthrob and everyone's leader, turning the tide in times of crisis. What little girl or boy can not like her [Love][Love][Love] No one died in the war with Voldemort, and James and Lily were also rescued by Mia through time magic. It was very complete [Like][Like][Like]