Harry Potter: My Brother, The Chosen One!

It's so good. I almost gave up on the story when I read about 20 chapters. The early writing was too immature, it felt like a drama, and it was OOC. But things got much better in the later stages. First, the writing style was significantly improved, and then the characterization became much more detailed. I wanted to cry when I read the extra episode, even though I knew it was a fake death😿😿😿The early part can be said to be an incomparably cool story, it's so fun to watch. It is really rare to see a story about Slytherin and being trusted by Dumbledore throughout the whole process😸And it feels like the HP fanfic of the main character Slytherin seems to be basically taking advantage of everyone😿😿But in this book Mia is warm to everyone! Overall, I enjoyed reading this book! Hey, the author's other book is also good. I don't know why the rating is not high. Maybe it's because most of them only read the first part😿😿😿

Very nice HP fanfic! The ending of he really made me cry to death 😭😭 In the end, the "suspended death" heroine, Dumbledore, Harry and Sect appeared, which was really exciting and exciting! The heroine setting is also very good! The perfect ending of the story really fulfills the regretful ending of the original work😭😭 And the heroine's CP is also very good🥰😍

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It's good-looking and very logical. The heroine has a great personality. She doesn't have the compassionate mentality of a time traveler at all (this mentality makes me feel that they are not in the same dimension). She is just very immersive. The heroine's feelings for everyone are based on getting along with each other, not because of watching the original book or the movie (if you only have feelings because of watching the original work, then this kind of feeling will never be equal). I love the author so much [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's really, really, really good to watch. This is the first HP movie I've finished reading. I really think it's well written. Mia is here to save the world. Mia's charisma is really strong. I sometimes think that Mia should be surrounded by love from all over the world. So when there are many men who like Mia, I wonder if the author should open a harem for Mia? This way there will be a lot of love for Mia. So I really like Sif, the Godfathers, and the episodes where Lily and James raise their children. I really want Mia and Harry to be surrounded by love. I think they should be very happy at this age and should not be used as servants in the Dursley family. Although everyone has difficulties with this matter, after all, Dunduoduo did not provide child support at the time, and it was very hard for the Dursleys to raise three children. But Mia and Harry, two such cute little noses, should be surrounded by lots and lots of love. If Lily knew that Harry was treated like this at the Dursleys, she wouldn't be happy either. Because I really like this book, I couldn't help but give me my first long review since I read the book. I'm not very good at writing reviews, so I can only say everything I think about it. Maybe some of the expressions are not very good. To be honest, after reading this book, I really felt a sense of inexplicable melancholy. It was like reading their entire life experiences. I knew them, but they didn't know me. But I also wish Mia to live happily in that world, long live the Harry Potter world!

The main character is well described. Highly recommended. I really like Mia. Can the author write a side story for each cp? This feeling of uncertainty about CP is really bad!!!! Write a side story!!!!!!!!

It's very interesting. If you look at the comment section in certain places, you will laugh to death, and everyone is very funny.

Grass! It's really beautiful, and the author is so considerate! It actually made every cp have a grand wedding, and it also filled the gap in my heart that belongs to cp Zhan Li. Every cp gave birth to a daughter, which was great, except for Harry of course. Orthopedics is so perfect, and the author of Orthopedics Rise 🥰 has been great for a long time. He wrote everyone so cute, Fork Padfoot is amazing, Lily is my mother, the author is so good at filling in the pits! The church, the godfathers, parents, Fred, and Albus are all still alive. It's great. Everyone has a perfect ending ❤️❤️❤️ Very good👍Fortunately, I clicked on this book, otherwise I would die if I missed such a beautiful hp

This is a very belated review. Dada is really well written. I have been following this book since the beginning and have posted many paragraphs of reviews. I have also witnessed that the author's writing style has changed from immature to mature. He also writes emotional lines very well. Mia is a little angel, a little angel like her mother Lily, who can shine by herself. In fact, I love every CP, but the ones that I find the best are Theodore and Mia (my Sago CPs), and the Blue Eucalyptus and the Sophora japonica. Their emotional lines are really the pair that I find the most fascinating!!!!!!!!!!! The author writes so well!!!! Sometimes I will re-write it. The author is great and he will write more articles [Chigua]. I'm very much looking forward to watching it

感觉感情线写的还可以，完全是玛丽苏来的。但是哈利的很多高光都被米娅抢了，看着就有点生气，毕竟我觉得这些也是哈利成长的重要原因吧，如果不经历就和詹姆没区别了呀。后面食死徒因为喝了药剂所以魔力很弱这个剧情发展感觉也很一般。原著里的结局看似不解气但是我觉得很有深意，因为伏地魔最惧怕死亡而他像一个凡人一样死去本身就是对他选择的否认，而忏悔的代价很大，死亡对于伏地魔来说会不会是另一种形式的凌迟呢[思考]，不过反观这里就有点普通了，完全报复型的，但是非要这样写的话也可以接受。ooc的地方也比较多。最雷我的一点可能是后面番外给每个男主都生了小孩吧[石化]，几个线都想看一下但是看到给上一个生了又给下一个生有一种不洁的感觉[哭][哭][哭]，所以后面的番外就没有看了，总之还有很大进步空间吧，四星算在米娅的美好品质上了