The Legend of Immortality by a Dragon Tou

The plot before rebirth is really good, a serious supporting role. The reluctance and regret of the little character are vividly written, and the ending is satisfactory and still has regrets. This is the essence of it. It is obvious that the author intends to use golden fingers to counterattack after rebirth to make up for his regrets, but he can't suppress it to the end, and he can't feel happy at the same time. His thinking may be a little biased. In fact, there are only two ways to go: either suppress the protagonist until the end, or delay the writing. Either you will be happy to the end, soar into the sky, there will be some trial and error on the way to growth, but you will grow very quickly and lag other characters/powers. In short, no matter how you write it, there will always be people who like it and people who will hate it. Currently, it is still a good article that is in line with Tomato's line. I hope the author will think carefully about the next plot.

I haven't seen such a mediocre novel in a long time. The writing is quite good. After reading more about those who fight for power, this kind of novel is really good. I personally feel that the score should be around 8.5. Some people may think that Agui's death is too much, but doesn't this just illustrate the protagonist's emotions? I like it very much, and the Destiny's Child in it is also quite good. There are some bad parts, so I won't give it one star.

The early part was really well written, and I almost cried when I saw it. Unfortunately, there was a golden finger at the end, so I gave up. But this book deserves praise.

Immortal product. The ordinary life of a minor player in front of me is very good, with both unwillingness and happiness. It is perfect. I just like this ordinary life of a little person. Then let me say something, is the Spring and Autumn Cicada still cloudy? ! Has someone been replaced? What is the beginning of Rebirth?

Finally, he is no longer a false trapper selling dog meat to others! This is a serious trick!

It's really good. One of the few good novels on Tomato It looked very good in the early stage, but in the later stage, I felt like a different person. It really corresponded to the temptation to sell dog meat. The early stage score was at least eight or nine points, but it was directly reset to zero later, and the favorability was completely gone. It was my fault that I commented too early.

I don't know when, but the older I get, the more I like to read this kind of short story, and the more I value relationships. This novel is really good and unique in the world of immortality. This feeling in the early stage is really great, I hope it can last forever. This novel is far from enjoyable, but the brotherly love makes up for it. How can people be heartless? This novel is very good.

The author has a lot of updates and it's still good to watch This book breaks out of the traditional framework of cultivating immortals in some aspects. Although the core is still the same, I quite like this unpretentious writing style. The protagonist feels that he wants to live in the world of immortality and live a better life with a few brothers. He has the mentality of pursuing a better life. Fine. In a sense, it's very close to life. It can be seen that this is what the author really wanted to write, which is really good. Come on, author It gets a bit boring later on, which is a pity. It would be boring to go towards formula work.

Before rebirth, this is definitely a 5-star good book. Forget about the rest. I suggest that it be the finale when you see the main character die. Don't read what happens after rebirth. It affects your mood. The previous writing is indeed very good. I recommend everyone to read it. It is a very, very rare 5-star time travel novel.

The first 50 chapters are really amazing, the fireworks are slow and peaceful. It highlights a mood and atmosphere very intuitively, and it is up to the readers to understand it themselves. But it is this kind of thing that I read out by myself that is most engraved in my heart. As for the content after chapter 50, I think it's pretty good too. If you feel it's not good, you don't have to read it until you reach chapter 50. But it is a story written by one person. Since he has regrets, they can be made up for. It's a good story both before and after.

Really good, no cliches. Only a small part [eating melon] To be honest, reading 50 chapters is enough. The following is too popular. Goldfinger plus rebirth stream [awkward laugh]

I read the first chapter of this book in one night. I don't know what the next chapters will be like, but I have to say that the first chapter is really well written! ! You can feel that the author's emotions are very delicate. When the love is deep, readers can also feel the psychological activities of the characters in their hands. You can feel that the author is a person who is full of emotions and attaches great importance to love and justice. After reading many chapters, I am quite moved. I feel that human life is like this, and it will bring some inspiration to readers. Of course, it's rare for me to cry while reading a novel. The first chapter is really well written, I recommend reading it! !

It's a good-looking story, and it's a true story line. It doesn't rely entirely on the system, and it doesn't create a harem [laughs]. It's not like other fairy tales. The protagonists fall in love with each other when they see each other. Practice cheating. The ending is that the protagonist is so miserable [crying] the tragedy of the little person

The first volume is very well written, and I felt very emotional after reading it in one sitting. In reality, I am just an ordinary person who is not very motivated and doesn't work very hard. An ordinary family, but my parents love me very much. I also have a partner who is beautiful, gentle and treats me well, just like Ah Yue. The protagonist in the novel is limited by his realm abilities, and Ah Yue suppresses his natural curiosity about the world and lives an ordinary life. The reborn protagonist will have the ability to give more to Ah Yue. I also hope that I can carry this emotion with me, and from now on, I will work harder to make my parents and partner live more comfortable and prosperous lives in the future. A small tip for an inspiration capsule and a thumbs up for the author.

It's well written, the author just has to go at his own pace. Too many people say that they won't be able to survive after the first life. But I think no one is willing to be ordinary, and no one is not eager for opportunities. If it stopped at the first life, it would be a good little character story. But starting a second life is also the struggle of a small person. The ants are still greedy for life, and the cicada is also willing to go to the Spring and Autumn Period. The characters are well drawn. There was nothing to be taken for granted, and we immediately felt like old friends again after rebirth. Without so much rationality, one can be reckless and confused. Come on, author. Writing a novel is not easy. A good work, a work that suits you, is like a night of drinking and drinking between the author and the reader. They don't talk about each other for more than half a sentence, and they catch up and chat until midnight. I don't know anything else, but I am willing to read your novel, I can understand it, and I like it.

This book is definitely a good book! ! ! Highly recommended to anyone who likes plain writing and is a casual reader. Although there are emotional dramas, brotherly love and a bit of a group portrait, I cannot deny that this book really attracted me. I know that this type of book will not be highly rated and is not a popular book, but I am willing to give it a 5 points! I like to watch plain and ordinary stories. The previous life reminded me of Mr. Yu Hua's "To Live". There are many unforgettable scenes, such as Agui's death. Many characters in the story are well portrayed, and then the golden finger of the next life is activated! ! ! Damn it's on fire! ! ! Highly recommended! ! !

The first life is really interesting, with a completely different perspective. There are too few such subjects in the online literary circle now, and the writing is also very good. It's a pity that with Goldfinger, this feeling is gone. There are too many Goldfinger authors on the market and they don't have any special advantages. It just seems like that. The formulaic plot after five stars give a small role in life, and three stars give golden fingers

I rarely leave comments, but after watching it, it was very interesting, especially before I was reborn; it is considered a prequel. I used to think it was Long Aotian's kind of good-looking, but now I feel that everything may not go as planned; it doesn't have that earth-shattering plot, but it just gives people a good-looking feeling, it is very comfortable to watch, and the plot is very natural. Looking forward to the following plot, please come on, author,

The writing is very good and delicate. The characters in the first life are well-depicted. In the second life, there is no barrier between the four of them until they help the brothers to retrieve their past life memories. The descriptions are also very reasonable. Every tender line is well written.

I've been a bookworm for over 10 years! I just finished watching the previous part! It's really a beautiful book! It's been a long time since I've read a book that made me cry! It's been a long time since I've been able to write a review for a book! Are we just a sidekick in society? Trying to keep myself alive [almost crying]

I give it 8.5 Out of 10 points! Excellent Up to the 50th chapter I have read, they are all good and excellent. The characterization is not particularly delicate, but it is definitely not flat; The plot is also of a good standard. Before Chapter 50, the author was completely portraying an ordinary monk who occasionally had a little luck (mostly relying on modern knowledge and other destiny children) If you like this kind of novel where the protagonist has an ordinary life, you can read it as a short novel.

How should I put it? I have read too many cool articles about cultivating immortals through routines, systems, simulators, etc. In the past few years. I have also read too many genius articles, like that of Han Laomo, which is really considered a mortal cultivating immortality. No, he is also a lucky male protagonist. When I suddenly saw this book, my first reaction was that it must not be good. The reality is not good anymore and I still read this. But I couldn't help but want to read it. The author wrote it very well.

I have read more than 10 chapters so far. The perspective is very unique and refreshing, and the writing is solid and smooth. It seems that I have never seen it before in the world of cultivation by using a second-hand way of thinking. Pay more attention to the overall logic and plot settings, as well as the easily embarrassing price and power settings, etc. It has the potential of a first-rate tomato novel.

It's really good, but it's a pity that it doesn't conform to the current mainstream routines, resulting in a low score. The first chapter, about the sidekick's career, is both plain and profound. It really pokes at the heart of an old social beast like me. It even looks a bit like Fulian. Unfortunately, there are not enough small highlights in the middle. After the cheating in the second chapter, it is too routine and even a bit nondescript (especially the part about learning sword skills). I hope it can be written better and better in the future.

The first volume is very suitable for ordinary people. The struggle journey of Kouhai brother can basically be rated as 4.5 Points (out of 5). It is full of human touch and everyone hopes you have a good life. However, it also depicts the regrets and struggles that ordinary people encounter in their lives in a way that is difficult to let go. It will make you cringe until death and have to let go. Damn it. , People feel depressed when they see it; but it's not all regrets. The protagonist has also fought hard and worked hard. Although most of the time it ends in failure or regret, it is not the protagonist's fault. This is the sadness that ordinary people are destined to have in their lives. When the difficulties exceed their capabilities, it becomes a force majeure. The second volume is a cheat set by the author. After rebirth, he uses the golden finger to make up for the regrets of the previous life (the second half is like the author thinking of a new idea and giving an acquired heavenly authority, but it also increases the difficulty. There is no golden finger to cover the "time", and it gives the opportunity to defeat the dog emperor). There is one thing to say, which did not make me very happy. Maybe it is because I have read online articles for more than ten years, and the threshold is too high. Closer to home, this book is not a fast-paced mindless novel, nor is it like a Japanese comic where the hot-blooded protagonist relies on shouting slogans and mindless SB to get through the level. It makes people want to roll their eyes and impulsive. I read the book review and some people said that the second paragraph is mediocre. Well, I don't think so. It's because your expectations are too high. After all, the first volume is indeed touching and has its gems at the front. The second volume seems to be difficult to live in, but it is worth reading [already planted]

I'm reviewing this after reading the first volume. It's very well written. It's ten thousand times better than those underworld-style immortal cultivators with no humanity and full of betrayal and killing. It's full of family and friendship, which makes people feel very warm after reading it. Five-star praise.

Author, you have written all your life feelings into this book. This book is not as cool as other books, but it has a feeling of growth. Come on, author!

It's good to read. The first volume is great. Personally, I feel that the second volume is a little less interesting after opening Goldfinger. When I read this book, I just liked the ordinary feeling of supporting each other. There are cheating novels everywhere. If the author can write the characters well while using the golden finger to improve the protagonist's realm, I believe it will be a fairy tale. I read a book before called "I Survive to Become an Immortal in the World of Immortality". It was wonderful that the brothers supported each other to reach the peak. Although the foundation building is dead, it is reasonable but not exciting enough.

It's a rare good novel, and its logic is basically very reasonable. Except for this very small problem, the rest of it is pretty good. It is one of the few novels that I can see the updated latest chapter. The supporting part is very well written, but the golden finger at the end is a bit strange. Goldfinger is both strong and weak. I feel that the basic details of the novel are not enough. If it were written as a novel, the details would be too little. If written as a short story, it would be very procrastinating. It would be nice if the author could write more carefully and understand that this is the author's first book. I still support the author to speed up the completion of this book. I hope it will be completed at about 300 chapters, and then start a new book. I think it may be much better than before. Some people may be dissatisfied with this only because of the evil in human nature. Relatively speaking, there are not that many, which many people think is unrealistic (but in fact, this is the ordinary happiness of ordinary people). Most people will not necessarily encounter so many bad guys in their lives. The overall logic is very smooth. Speed ​​it up and finish it as soon as possible. It might be better to start a new book.

I think it's very good. The story before foundation building is very smooth and simple. I think it can be written slowly along this path. Don't worry about the author. I don't really want to see Fugui killing everyone, I want to see Fugui prove his way to success, hahahaha! ! ! Damn it, the first volume is so well written, it brought tears to my eyes when I read it, it's so good.