Travel Through Ancient Times to Build a Redstone Kingdom in My World

(Next to middle level) Green·Advanced (Level 2)/7.0 Points Sense of substitution C, plug-in B, setting C, writing style C, rhythm B, imagination C, character design C, main line C, logic C. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Overall, it's okay, just mediocre, and both the MC and historical themes are not pleasing to the eye. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition (1) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (2) Recommendation grade evaluation process: ① Score according to the following (3), (4), and (5), and use (6) to make corrections. ② Calculate the total score according to (1). ③Refer to the level of the work, use additional deduction points to make corrections, and finally arrive at the evaluation. (3-1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C (3-2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C (4-1) Difficulty bonus: Rhythm A, Imagination A, Main Line B (4-2) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A (5-1) Theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S (5-2) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S (6) Creative bonus... 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: World background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (9) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points (6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points; (7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points. (8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (11) Inferior (female channel mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. 4. Evaluation template (1) Operation process: ① Take a screenshot, ② Recognize the picture, ③ Select the recognized location, ④ Copy to the clipboard, ⑤ Paste the comment. (2) Evaluation template (Bottom two) White + Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points Sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings, writing, rhythm, imagination, characters, main line, logic. Additional deductions: Personal feelings: (3) Remarks ①The character limit for Tomato comments is 150 ②Copy (2) evaluation template, template characters 62/150 ——Evaluation of "Seventh Edition Revised", 1,700 words+

I personally feel that the development is very fast, the protagonist's thoughts are in line with the character, and the writing is not bad. For this type of novel, my only request is that the author does not drag out the plot in the later stages. It takes a lot to write a good novel. Among the three novels of the same type that I have read, this one is not popular, but I don't like the other two very much. For this one, as long as the author does not drag out the plot, I will continue to reward it every day.

I must be the first to give full marks to my book!

The writing is good, with an ideal concept, like a script, with no emotions and a weak sense of substitution. Some issues were not explained clearly in the later stage, such as the reaction of the old dynasty royal family to join the revolutionary army, the ending of the demon clan, etc.

This book is really well written and beautiful. Why has no one read it?

Okay, okay, what I saw at first was nothing but what I saw later was so exciting! What excites me the most is that the three of them were followed by an elder. It felt wrong to give the signal to pursue. It pulled my memory into the memory of that passionate battle that put me in their shoes. I felt it was super burning.

The main thing is that the protagonist uses the power of MC to lead the civilian revolution, and then becomes the king of the Red Stone Empire.

Very good, can be used for hanging The author is a MC electricity generation player. Although there are not many electricity generation described in the article, there is a kind of simplicity and beauty, and there is a numerical beauty that goes straight to everything. The electricity generation players don't need much. In one sentence, we have an invincible logistics system, and TM's supplies are unlimited! The setting is also relatively novel. Locals can change jobs as villagers and become (fake) players. The setting is not overpowering the protagonist. Just one word, cool, you wrote it well. I appreciate the author. There are not many poisonous points in the plot. The only shortcoming is that the subject matter is destined to be unpopular. It is an unpopular subject, MC➕Communist Society, difficult to become popular, ε=(´ο｀*))) Alas, it is a great article that was delayed.

Personal feeling is good

It's so red, so red that it's almost red.

Hahaha! This book is a bit popular!

Come on come on come on come on

Very well written, keep it up

Gu De Gu De Wai Rui Gu De

Not bad, try to keep doing it

It's very interesting, good luck to the author! !

Ahhhhhh, I just spent a few hours listening to it and then reading it, ahhhhhh, author, author, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Awesome👍 Much better than other Minecraft novels (๑•.•๑)

Is this book coming to an end?

It's over, it's not bad [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The story is very short, but I enjoyed reading it. Although some things were not explained, and the pace was a bit fast later on.

This is the first time I have seen such a popular novel

The revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard.

The writing is quite good, but did you, the author, consider a problem? That's population expansion!