HP White Peacock

Really like it. Tomato all starts with the old routine of rescuing a young Riddle in an orphanage. After reading a lot about Little Tom's struggle to get rich, I finally found a story about the protagonist and Voldemort, who has become the Dark Lord! ! There are so many Voldemort fics, but this is the only one that really matches my xp. I really like it, the story is written smoothly and logically, and there are all kinds of fantastic magic scenes in the article. The most important thing is that Voldemort is not OOC. I really liked it and wrote a book review. I hope the author can keep writing. ~(≧▽≦)/~

How can it be so fragrant? It is a rare book that very intuitively expresses the charm of Riddle as the Dark Lord. He will attract countless people to follow just standing there, and Lucius is too fragrant. The proud and noble beauty stands high in front of others, excellent and admirable. Mu, but he knelt in front of his master and accepted everything tremblingly. Even if he was so scared that his eyes turned red, he would only tremble and beg for mercy with a trembling voice. (The lord is still very doting most of the time, even if he is bad and likes to bully the platinum beauty, it is just a slight reprimand. PS, he really enjoys it)

It truly and objectively reproduces the state of a time-traveler who is coerced by family honor and father's desires and has to succumb. What will happen to the contradictory, proud, and outstanding little peacock? Will it continue to be carried forward, or will it have its own direction amid the undercurrent? Looking forward to it. Okay, I started to express my feelings: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Madam, don't be tired, don't be idle, write ^0^

It's really good to read, the content is interesting and attractive, the rhythm is just right, and the words are exquisite. I really like this article [love] [love] I hope it won't stop updating. Please, the author has worked hard to update the article, please update [blowing kiss] It's really hard to find a CP Voldemort x Lucius article on Tomato. The plot is also relatively new. I look forward to the follow-up plot direction and the interaction between the two protagonists [Blow kiss]

The writing is so good, every time the protagonist faces Voldemort, I feel like I am there, sweating nervously 😌 The protagonist traveled through time and became Lucius, who was about to be in seventh grade. At the beginning, he was in a dark room. In front of him was a werewolf lying on the ground dripping with blood. He lowered his head and saw hands stained with warm blood and a knife. One second it was an examination room, and the next second there was a mess all over the floor. Lucius lived up to expectations and completed Voldemort's mission and became a preparatory Death Eater, even though the body had been replaced. A new book, this one is not OOC at all. Voldemort's character is very well grasped. The four black marauders are partial to the Snake Yard. However, the marauders don't appear much and can be ignored. There are basically two updates a day.

Now the rating is so good that I can't keep it down. I want to give it full marks! I really realized how addictive a good writing style can be, describing the sexual tension between both parties during punishment to the extreme. The plot is excellent, the logic is excellent, and it is not OOC so far. I love the pull of Lucius who is always pursuing personal dignity even though he is in a lower position, but he has to be completely disguised under the Dark Lord. It is not easy for me to find such a good-looking book. Don't block it. Tomato, your old cliches are all known to netizens. Don't block it. .

It is clearly organized and describes the inheritance and cultivation of pure-blood families in the magical world, paving the way for successors, the considerations of those in power, the sense of oppression the Dark Lord should have, and the methods he should use to win over people. To be honest, it may be a problem with the writing skills. I have read many of them before. It's a Machiavellian article, but the way the people inside it try to win over people seems really uncomfortable. It makes people feel humiliated and makes people want to stab them. It's not like trying to win over people, which is like making enemies. It's normal here to coax and deceive, and use resources to plan for the future. This makes people want to follow.

Not bad, good, five-star praise! I originally didn't want to read it when I saw that the setting was a story with two male protagonists, but recently I read too many stories from the female protagonist's point of view and male stories, and suddenly I felt a little bored, so I clicked in and read it. The result was that the author took it all in. [Read carefully] The author's writing style is so good. I was attracted by this book even though I was not interested at first. I started to look forward to the growth of the male protagonist and the entanglement between him and Voldemort [sneaky laugh] [eat melon] [send heart] [send heart] It's over, I thought of one thing, could this be be? [I'm about to cry] The introduction really didn't say whether it was he or be [shocked] No, the author is so awesome

Noble, but kneeling; fearful, but strong; obedient, but forbearing. This ultimate contradictory beauty is more intoxicating than the richest spirits, making people want to taste it - want to have a drink or drink heavily. I want to crush his reserved appearance, see him lose control, see him sink, see him doomed. I even want to pamper his proud soul and watch him become sober in his degradation, become pure in the mud, and shine brightly in his brokenness. 1 Dark Lord-Voldemort-Tom Riddle I don't know what love is, but I know you are important I fell in love with you, but I don't know when I fell in love with you Absolutely amazing, Lucius, the triple agent, so beautiful

It's so beautiful [shy] I just finished reading it in one sitting. It's not enough. The author should update it more [crying] The characters and plot are not OOC at all, and who knows the excitement of the emotional line? I've really been looking for something like this [blowing kiss] Finally watched the ending episode, it's really super sweet! The warm daily life is very beautiful, and I feel relieved to see the couple living so well [sending my heart] (I can't survive, there is a counterattack plot in the extra episode, please pay attention😭)

A hidden gem in the ocean! ! Very pretty! Currently, he is the cruel Dark Lord x Lucius, a miserable young man with good intentions but who can't help himself. It should be strong. Before I clicked on it, I thought it was a cookie or something like that, but I didn't expect that it was a drama that was more realistic. I'm curious about the development of the emotional line, there should be forced love and crematorium ~ but I feel that this direction is difficult, what should I do, sad. Jpg [crying]

The author's writing style is amazingly good! I really like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, the plot is amazing! ! ! I really like Xiaoye's character, he has a distinctive personality, passion and comfort! Yebao is also a very smart child, capable of bending and stretching, able to distinguish between priorities, and remain calm in the face of danger. However, the author also left a fragile side to Yeye, which is very consistent with his identity as a time traveler in the third year of high school and is not out of the ordinary (after all, little Yeye is just a child after all! But still I hope the author can strengthen Ye Bao! (I want him to be happy, have the ability to protect his family and the things he wants to protect, and have someone he can trust and rely on. My poor Ye Bao is still a child ꒦ິ^꒦ິ) Summary: I really like this book! Passionate recommendation!

It's really beautiful and very logical. I hope Gu Ye (Lucius) can have his own career and make the Malfoy family bigger and stronger. I also hope that Gu Ye can ease the relationship with Abu. This is the best book I have read about these Luciuses. I hope the author will make more updates. The author updates two chapters every day because he saw my comments? 😃😃I hope the author is telling the truth. He has changed his appearance in the past few days, and it is not because he will not update in a few days🤓🤓 The author really improved the relationship between Lucius and Abu [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The author is really great (›´ω`‹). Now he not only has a fixed update time, but also updates two chapters a day. The author really listens to his advice [laugh][laugh][laugh]

When the deepest darkness embraces the most magnificent platinum, and when absolute authority entwines vague loyalty, this masterpiece ignites a trembling blue flame in the depths of the soul. Fu and Lu - this pair of kings and courtiers who entangled and danced together in the dark night. Every inch of their relationship has been carved by the author with refined writing skills into a Gothic epic about power, desire and soul ownership. Here, please allow me to offer my most ardent appeal to the author with the piety of a Death Eater: Please let the storm of the soul come more violently behind the bed curtains of the dark night! Let the Mark of the Dark Lord leave a deeper chapter on your platinum skin! Let the ancient scepter become the only rhythm that pulls the souls of the surrendered! Let every collision of magic set off a more turbulent craze of desire! More! Deeper! No worries! And, we need Voldemort's wife-chasing crematorium, yes, we need it!

It's really super pretty! I didn't plan to write a review at first (I'm a bit lazy), but I couldn't help but write it. In the early stage, Tom was dominant and a little coercive, but not abusive at all. Moreover, Lucius was obedient on the surface but rebellious on the inside. The interaction between the two was full and really touching. In the day-to-day interactions, Tom would always protect Lucius. Lucius also developed feelings for Tom during this process (the part where Tom recognized his feelings was really interesting!). Tom didn't understand love, but in the end he gave up his life for Lucius. The ending was very happy. The two grew up together. This time it was Lucius who took charge of Tom. Tom also understood what love is. I recommend everyone to watch it.

Hahaha, the Dark Lord and Lucius are super good-looking, but they are a bit short. However, I can already see the difference between the two of them. It is entirely Voldemort's idea. I don't know if he will succeed in pursuing his wife later, but now Lucius does not dare to refuse. He even takes the initiative to go to Voldemort for some things. It's so cool to watch.

Don't miss it, kids! ! The author's writing style is very delicate and well-detailed. The emotional lines are also natural and evenly matched. He is highly intelligent and thoughtful. There are no inexplicable and incomprehensible plots. Everything is explained clearly. The male protagonist's thinking and inferences are very clear and calm. It is very exciting to watch. Lauder is very good at flirting! The male protagonist is so cute when he turns into a ferret, hahahaha, and his daily life at school is also very interesting. There is not only a depressing atmosphere in the whole story, but also very warm and funny scenes. The corner of my mouth never dropped after watching it. Personally, I think Lord is not OOC, he is strong and dangerous, but he has a fatal attraction and can't help but want to get closer. I like it so much and it suits my taste.

It's a little sadistic, it's written in a slightly revealing way, it's like a fairy tale, it feels more sadistic, there are GGAD, Sirius and Lupine, BL, BG, and GL couples. Because I read two books about Lucius and Voldemort at the same time, I feel that the previous plots are very similar. Well, it's just a very subtle feeling, but um... If you read further, you can see that the differences are quite interesting. Maybe it's because the original book has very little description of Lucius's schooling, so the feeling is similar. Both books are good. The most important thing about the Fulu pair is the difference in status. Calling them master is really perverted.

The protagonist is really a very brave person. He faced difficulties many times at the age of 17 but was able to deal with them perfectly. He fell into darkness but did not lose his heart. From his perspective, he saw the unique Slytherin. The fights with his companions, the gifts and care given were all precious [crying] However, students from peaceful times traveled to such a dangerous era and had to be loyal to the Dark Lord. It is really heartbreaking to be tortured.

First of all, the author's writing is very delicate and beautiful. The struggle between the two male protagonists and between different factions, Lucius's soul and cognition from the normal world and the cruel magical world and the Dark Lord, the reality that he has to admit and his own upbringing are all shown. In this book, no one can be simply summarized in terms of good and evil. There are people who do not want to but actually become Death Eaters and commit crimes. There are people who are willing to sacrifice other people who deserve to be alive for so-called "justice". There are people who bully others and perform the most innocent "evil" in order to attract attention. In this book, HE seems to be a difficult story to achieve, due to the disagreement of ideas and deep-seated fears. However, Riddle's personal charm is most vivid in this book, and some of the protagonist's ideas are still naive. When the two can work side by side, and are attracted and liked by Riddle, it is not impossible for another type of HE. After all, if Riddle wants to be influenced, it is basically impossible if he is not OOC. I really like the pull between the two of them in the early stage. The lower one is noble but has to surrender and be defiled. The upper one is in control and favored. (Although this is not yet love, it can only be said to be a temporary good impression.) I can make this pull so delicate and exciting. It's really refreshing [send heart] [love] [love]

I have passed this book many times, because I have never read any articles about engaging in cpc with Voldemort, and I am also a person who is relatively insufferable. I don't dare to think about what kind of person can be with Voldemort, and I don't dare to think about how he will develop. I feel that there are dead ends left and right, but I really want to know how the story of Lucius and Voldemort can develop, so I finally mustered up the courage to click on it. With such a good idea Qixin continued to read it, and found that it was quite interesting after reading it halfway. Although I felt that it might be tricky at the end, the author is also good at writing, and the plot is relatively clever and awesome. Now that I have read it halfway, I am still in a state of suspense. I don't know what else the author can write. I don't know how things will go and what the final result will be... But it is really interesting and interesting. I haven't experienced this kind of suspense for a long time, because some of the novels I read before were able to see the ending at a glance from the beginning. In short, it is really awesome to be able to write such a novel, it is beautiful and beautiful. Hey, I've almost seen the finale. I've been looking forward to how the two of them can interact with each other for a long time. Their relationship is rekindled, which is really possible, but I still prefer them. The two of them overcame each other during the battle... But this ending is not bad at all. A dumpling-making happy ending at least makes me less regretful.

Oh my god, at first I thought that the male protagonist and Voldemort had too different personal concepts and couldn't get along. But when I realized it later, the two of them were already strangely harmonious, but the male protagonist had been making little moves behind Voldemort's back. It was definitely going to happen. Betrayal, the result was no surprise, but it quickly turned a corner and ended up being he. Although it was a bit abrupt, it became more and more reasonable as I read it. Who knows, especially because there happened to be a description that made me laugh, which made me quickly get rid of the panic about be, and it was logical and happy. Ending, I have to say, the author is really good at [shy][shy][shy]

It is a super sweet book, and the author's writing style is absolutely speechless. [Sending Hearts] The protagonist Gu Yezhi travels to the magical world and becomes Lucius. He kills wolves at the beginning. It is so exciting. He and Tom are pushed to the limit. They continue to test and fall in love with each other unknowingly, without even realizing it. Gu Yezhi is so smart that I fell into it, pretending to be a little white flower. In the end, Tom found out that it was Xiao Gu who betrayed him. He must have felt pain in his heart. His favorite "thing" betrayed him. Voldemort would say that Xiao Gu belongs to the world and the world belongs to him, but Tom would say that he loves his wife very much. I also enjoyed watching the movie. Although everyone was quite embarrassed when they saw Tom and Gu Jiangjiangjiang [face covering], I really liked it! ! ! In the end, everyone lived freely and peacefully in their own timelines, making up for the regrets of the original work. 2026.02.23.17:05

I'm really addicted. I love this kind of novel. This kind of plot, the feeling of being oppressed and being punished with a slap in the face for doing something wrong. I really want to read more novels like this.

This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever seen written. The focus of his description is not on the protagonist of the original work, and the protagonist has not even appeared yet. But his worldview structure is very complete. The unique charm of the magical world is restored almost 1:1. Even if you have forgotten the original content or have not read Harry Potter, you can still watch it. And because it is a completely different timeline from the main storyline of Harry Potter, there is no need to worry about similarities in content. *^_^**^_^*The description is delicate, the emotions are sincere, and the tension is full. Worth reading.

Very well written and well written. But after reading this, I only had one thought in my mind: Gu Yezhi's normal life and personal dignity were completely destroyed. This abnormal love relationship is indeed too abnormal. The two people are not equal from the beginning to the end. Voldemort almost trampled his dignity to the ground several times. Earlier, it was written about Gu Yezhi's inner struggle and pain. I thought there would be a major turning point in truly falling in love with Voldemort, but as soon as Veritaserum came out, I fell in love without knowing it. . . Gu Yezhi's love came from the throbbing in several romantic scenes. It would be useless to say that he fell in love with me subtly. It's impossible to tell when Voldemort fell in love with Gu Yezhi. I just felt that he was interested in sex and domesticated the protagonist as a pet. Including the "he" at the end, I don't think it can change the relationship between two people. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, and everyone has different xp. Those who like this type of reading will probably like this book. After all, it is really well written.

The writing is very delicate and describes the pain that the protagonist experienced after traveling through time. And it's really cool. I hope that my position is always for myself and my family. But I think the protagonist is still too pitiful. Anything that is not good for him should be eradicated directly. Is there any similar book you can recommend to me?

Delicious, love to eat, Voldemort likes some letters on his body [Adoration] I don't know how the thank you line will develop later [Eating Melon]

It's really good-looking. The characters really touched my heart. The image of Voldemort is well created. He's dangerous and cold, with a sense of admonishment, and a sense of forced love.

The writing is very good and the plot is not cliched. But is it BE? It feels like their current relationship is completely one-sided. But so far, it is still scary. Fear is definitely greater than emotion, and Tom has begun to split his soul.