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The starting point is not novel but interesting enough, the cheating is not ruthless, and the writing is excellent. The problem is that there are too many characters but not deep enough. The characters are group portraits but not three-dimensional enough. The rhythm of the writing is a bit cumbersome, but the volume is large and the work is full. As I said, why do so many things for Aiden?

To be honest, there are a lot of good ones in Warhammer. They just discovered it early. I hope there won't be any eunuchs in the future.

Nice! Little Eleven and Old Lion have a good relationship! Can Angron be saved?

It's so beautiful [like] I feel that the subject matter is very new. I have never seen this type of Warhammer article before, but the author is a bit slow in updating. I hope to update it three times a day, twice as much on holidays [smile][smile][smile]

This is by far the best Warhammer novel I've seen on Tomato. The current seven-point rating does not reflect the brilliance of this book at all. My request to the author is also very simple, do not interrupt and update in a timely manner. Lots of code words! ! !

The Emperor during the Great Crusade was not so easy to talk to, and neither was Lao Ma.

The protagonist is short, when will he grow taller [laughing][laughing]

A great Warhammer 30k fanfic. The protagonist is the original member of the Eleventh Legion, and he is not a time traveler. I really think this is very good. (*σ´∀`)σ

The writing is quite good, but I feel a bit bored following more chapters these days. I feel like the Federation and the Eleventh Legion can be stepped on by one person, especially after Watson sat on the toilet in Cadia, one episode after another, especially the recent Alpharius and Haki Cat, but it may be that I have read too many cool articles during this period, haha, but I can understand it. The normal plot foreshadowing is still very exciting in general! [Laugh]

The writing is very good, the content is very good, the plot is very good, the author is very good Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. Add more more more more more more more more more more Good review template 1. This restaurant has a very good environment, very clean and tidy, and the food is not only beautiful in appearance, The important thing is that it tastes great, both in color and taste. The method retains the original taste of the ingredients. Fresh and refreshing. There are also many choices of dishes and the prices are not high, making it suitable for bringing the family together. Go.

The plot is fluent, the writing is very good, and the author also has a serious understanding of the Warhammer setting. It is definitely different from the current Tomato authors who write Yunxiaogei. It is actually really good-looking.

Good luck, excellent Warhammer fan

Write less about the cleanliness of brothers and sisters

Personally, I feel that the starting setting of this Warhammer is very good.

Yours is the second one I read after the one about Hermes the Imperial Guard.

Overall, it's pretty good, but I feel that the hook for the protagonist is too high at once, and I feel like I don't know what can pose a threat to the protagonist later on.

Very interesting novel

I rarely see people writing on this subject that I think are very good.

Author, in which chapter the protagonist becomes a big guy, tell me [cry][cry][cry][cry]

So far so good

I love this Warhammer text

Very good book

Good looking Got Incredible

Good-looking, very immersive

Yes, I like the little primarch

When will you go to the Dark Eldar world to get the elixir motherboard?

So far it's pretty good

There seems to be no problem so far, and the writing is pretty good.

This book is a rare idea for humanity, not just the Emperor and the Empire

It's very beautiful. I hope I can continue to follow up.