Pirate: I Am Daozu and I Am Tianlong

The perfect posture that a time traveler should have: Adaptable and fast, everyone's desire is completely released, without saying much. The psychological activities of the human-machine characters are not accurate and full of strategizing. Every step taken by the protagonist brings huge benefits and is reasonable at the same time.

It's a good pirate fanfic, but I can't accept dark stories, especially plots where relatives kill each other. I really can't stand the scene between Robin and her daughter. That's it, I wish the author a prosperous life, I'll leave now, see you later!

I haven't read many Pirates fanfics, but this one is definitely one of the most enjoyable ones I've ever read. First of all, the character of the protagonist is very enjoyable to watch. He is self-interested and willful, but within the scope of ordinary people's imagination. The storyline develops logically, and the protagonist's character is consistent. Tomato is a rare and refreshing article.

The invincible Shuangwen, and started as a Tianlong. This is the dream of many people! A great start. It is simply to conquer all kinds of beauties, or in other words, to train all kinds of beauties to look like you like😍. Suitable for people who are shivering👀

A very good book, One Piece, which interprets the evil of human nature to the extreme [laughing]

25 Good books. There are 71 books to be read in the future. Fantasy 156 books. Technology (Fantasy) 38 books. 26 Books of mythology. City (high martial arts/superpowers/immortal cultivation) 153 copies. 62 Books of different worlds. Thriller/Rules 27. 35 Books daily. Ancient times/Republic of China/Modern times (imaginary) 54 books. 61 Live broadcasts. 94 Volumes of female deity. Zongwu 19 copies. Villain 92. Weird 48 books. Weird 39 books. There are 33 volumes of alien (animal) transformations. Urban 58 copies. 31 Movies/TV series. There are 44 comprehensive comics. 68 Anime books. 34 Books in the entertainment industry. 31 Adventure/wilderness/survival books. 32 Copies of Acting/National Destiny. 31 Game fanfics. 18 Games (production/esports/fusion). 45 (Serious) books. 43 Copies have been removed from the shelves. It's a pity (it was discontinued for various reasons and it was a good book that was finished) 67 books. There are 37 female videos. 23 Local Sese texts (I can just bear this kind of thing myself) ૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა

I think One Piece is pretty good. The protagonist is both good and evil. It's precisely because the protagonist is more moral than other Celestial Dragons. In some ways, the protagonist is not a son of man. He is not afraid of gangsters' brute strength, but is afraid of gangsters' culture. This person likes to play dirty [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering][face-covering][covering face], and he especially likes to kill people's hearts. I think it looks pretty good. It fully satisfies my mentality of being soft-hearted and violent at other times. Even Cao Cao's attributes are too strong, why do he always harm other women? [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The invincible style is pretty cool. Invincible backstage and invincible in force. You can do whatever you want, good or evil. You are not pretentious with women at all. You can do whatever you want. However, the pace of the plot is a bit slow. The host team for the audiobook version is also good, the characters are well performed, and the dubbing and soundtrack are included, making it worth listening to. The shortcomings of the novel are also that the sudden trip to the world of Death is a bit inexplicable. The map jump is too sudden and there is no foreshadowing.

It's not bad, but I'm really not picky. Pig's trotters can't even be eaten by an aunt🤣🤣🤣

It's good-looking. It's a darker type [laughing]. It's much better than most of the dark articles on Tomato that try to sell people's goods over others. If you have similar recommendations, I'll let you know. Thank you.

Great writing An abstract youth comic was rewritten into a cruel and dark world strategy competition. The story progress is very natural and the logic is good. Some heart-wrenching scenes are well arranged. However, the following chapters, especially the beginning of Wano, feel a bit long-winded. They are not as capable as they were at the beginning but are very full.

Five-star praise, okay, the most like the Celestial Dragons

I finished reading it in one go. The author's writing is very good. Please update it more. It's not enough. [Sending heartfelt thanks]

What the author wrote is quite consistent with the image of Tianlong people in my mind [laughing evilly]

The author is very capable, and the fan fiction is absolutely excellent. He is more mature than many One Piece authors and writes smooth plots. The character created by the protagonist is plump and intelligent. The shortcoming that I personally can't stand right now is the recent plot. Make so many enemies, If you want to be king, you have to build up your strength. Now I want to test Im, what strength does the protagonist have? To force so many people into hostility, you can advance slowly. Now there is a room full of enemies, There are only two people under the protagonist, Akainu [mental illness] and Zefa [elderly] A useless person, You have crippled your own side, do you have the men to hold on to the basics?

A well-written book on alternative astronomy, with its own understanding and opinions. The hole you dug can be recovered by yourself. The plot is full of ups and downs, and it's not a mindless piece of writing. The author's skills are also acceptable. Come on The One Piece world photos are okay, but later on in the Bleach time, I felt that the more I wrote, the more I dragged it out, and it was almost like writing. I haven't watched it for a while. I was so excited that I could skip to the end. After One Piece, I felt like I had no motivation to continue watching. Bye now

Don't tell me, the writing is pretty good, the protagonist is not brainless and intelligent, and there are no other big problems.

It's a good book. The main character is ambitious. He's neither a good guy nor that evil. He's kind to his own people but cruel to his enemies. He's decisive in killing. His abilities are growing quickly. He's also happy to take in girls. He's not the kind of self-castrating protagonist. As expected, Tianlong Ren is fun.

No matter how low the rating is, I am happy to read this book. I have criticized many novels, but I quite like this novel.

Top, the group portraits are well created, and the protagonist is just right. It can be seen that the author has a higher level of cognition, and is more annoyed by the pretentious preaching of elementary school students. This is not the case at all. When I first read a review, I was shocked by the part that said it was to provoke Robin and her daughter. After reading it, I found that it was actually handled very well. It is not so much a playful joke, but rather a contempt, tearing open the reality and exposing it. There's not too much preaching, the protagonist doesn't care, but there won't be that kind of embarrassing plot for the woman the protagonist conquers, it's more of a kind of protection. The only pity is that after accepting Otohime, the mermaid princess won't be able to accept it. It's a pity to be a daughter [crying]. Most of them want to see the female characters in the new timeline. Now there are more old characters when they were young. I feel like I can't write about that.

Full marks to Cao Thief. It will be a pleasure to read this book. However, the protagonist is so evil. As long as it maintains a normal person's point of view, this book will not get a 0 score. But I'm not a normal person, so I give it full marks. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] I can't stand it anymore. The Pirates plot is still watchable. The Death plot tortures the two female characters. I can't stand it anymore. I should report it and stay in the palace for a while. It's a bit abnormal.

It's a good pirate fanfic in the same batch. It doesn't have too many logical loopholes or poisonous points. Most of the plot is okay, but Alivia and Otohime personally don't like it, and Shirahoshi's Neptune ability should still be inherited from the mermaid royal family.

The author is quite in-depth. He will definitely devour other worlds in the future. However, there are aborigines who still follow him wholeheartedly because they are disgusted and disappointed with the old world, and the protagonist brings change and hope. What the supporting character said was very philosophical. From the moment the protagonist brought about changes, the hometown they wanted to protect was destined to be destroyed. After seeing the new power and ideas, people could no longer tolerate the darkness of the old rules. Even expelling the protagonist could not change the outcome of the rebels becoming the remnants of the old era. In the end, these remnants of the old era chose to die in glory, and the followers said, "It is because of your noble bones that the road to becoming a god is so exciting!"

Very good, the position of the Tianlong people is not skewed, not the Holy Mother!

Break the conventional counterattack fantasy and unlock new rules in the pirate world In today's world where pirate-themed works are emerging one after another, this novel takes "time travel and becomes a Celestial Dragon" as the starting point, instantly catching the readers' attention and opening up a refreshing story path. It can be called a passionate feast that subverts imagination. In just a few words, the novel's introduction clearly demonstrates the core points. "Once across the Celestial Dragons, enjoy the prosperous life of pirates" directly points out the identity change of the protagonist who defies fate and changes his fate, satisfying the readers' strong desire for a counterattack in life. In the world of pirates, the Celestial Dragons represent the supreme power and status. Once the protagonist travels through time and becomes one of them, this setting brings with it a sense of drama and conflict, making people eager to know how he will make a difference in this familiar yet unfamiliar world. "Taste the strongest wine, slave to the strongest person, and taste the most beautiful person" even more vividly portrays the protagonist's wildness and wantonness. This is not only a straightforward expression of desire, but also a bold breakthrough in traditional pirate stories. Different from the common step-by-step growth path of grassroots pirates, the protagonist stands at the pinnacle of power from the beginning, starting the adventure with a strong and domineering attitude. This contrast brings a very impactful reading experience. The two sentences of the protagonist Ross are the finishing touch. "I used to be a cow and horse, but now I am a Celestial Dragon, so I will speak for the Celestial Dragons." This not only explains the change in mentality brought about by the protagonist's identity change, but also hints that he will influence the world of pirates from a new perspective and stance. And "This world is too small, only one Celestial Dragon is enough." Behind the arrogant words is the protagonist's strong self-confidence and ambition. People can't help but wonder how he will achieve this seemingly absurd goal, and what kind of fierce sparks will he collide with other pirates, navy and other forces. In general, the introduction of this novel successfully creates an atmosphere full of temptation and suspense, breaks the narrative framework of traditional pirate stories, and presents readers with a wonderful world worth looking forward to with its unique setting, ultimate refreshing feeling, and strong dramatic conflict. Whether you are a loyal fan of pirate themes or a reader looking for exciting and exciting stories, you can find your own reading pleasure in this work.

I have read more than 500 chapters and overall it is okay, but the author has some problems with his understanding of the world view of Death. First of all, the Soul King does not have the power of Hollows. His birth was originally done by the Will of the World to prevent the world from ending up with only one Supreme Hollow that swallowed up all the Great Hollows. The so-called power of annihilation was the means given to the Soul King by the Will of the World to eliminate the countless Hollows at that time. Even the Hue Circle was formed by the gathering of sand of Hollows left by the countless Hollows killed by the Spirit King. One can imagine how many Great Hollows the Spirit King killed in the first place. After Xu was weakened, the world was still in a state of chaos. As long as the Soul King did not continue to interfere, Xu would eventually become stronger and stronger and the world would end. So the Soul King used his omniscience and omnipotence to find a way to separate the souls of the three realms, and sacrificed himself to become a stable wedge supporting the three realms. As for the Great Monk, he is not a conspirator who murders the Soul King. He is a follower of the Soul King and takes the Soul King's will as the guideline for his actions. The Soul King is not dead and has always had normal consciousness. He just sleeps out of boredom most of the time. There is a scene in the comics where the Great Monk respectfully pays homage to the Soul King and receives the Soul King's instructions. As for the political system of Soul Society, it is not really dominated by the Forty-Six Chambers. There is also a council of five nobles above it, but this council does not meet often. It is mentioned twice in the story. Once, after Shiba Isshin disappeared, the Tsunayashiro family proposed to remove the Shiba family. As a result, the proposal was passed and only four nobles were left. The second time was after defeating Yhwach, Tsunayashiro Tokinada initiated a parliament to re-incorporate the Shiba family into the five nobles. As for the Shiba family, they had moved to Rukongai a long time ago because they couldn't stand the stinky style of other nobles. It was not Shiba Kukaku's generation who moved away at all. This is why the Tsunayashiro family hated the Shiba family and removed the Shiba family from the great nobility, because the Tsunayashiro family was the chief culprit. Also, Shiba Petrel didn't die that late. Shiba Iwaharu was at least in his thirties when he appeared. Shiba Petrel was only a few years old when Shiba Petrel died, so Shiba Petrel died before Shiba Isshin disappeared. There is another detail. Shiba Isshin could not see the spirit body before Kurosaki Ichigo became a Shinigami. All his spiritual pressure was used to seal Xubai. Finally, there is the problem of Bengyu. The essence of Bengyu is not the fragment of the Spirit King, but a crystal made by technological means that can touch the origin of the world. This crystal also has a certain degree of self-will. Bengyu swallows the fragment of the Spirit King just to satisfy it. The entire story of the Death God World can be seen as a drama directed and performed by the Soul King. He saw the stable pattern of the cycle of the three realms, so he volunteered to become a wedge to stabilize the three realms, but he did not want to be a personal stick all the time, so he separated the power of annihilation that could endanger the cycle of souls in the world and prompted the birth of Yhwach as a replacement. As for the fierce battle between Yhwach and Soul Society, it is difficult to say that it is not the Soul King's revenge on the Soul Society nobles. After all, it is said in the comics that the flow of souls after the Soul King was devoured is the remnant of the Soul King's hatred for Soul Society, and those souls are also flowing specifically towards Soul Society.

Now that I have read the latest chapter, I would like to talk about my overall feelings about this book. This book currently spans two worlds, the main world of pirates and later the God of Death. The author's shaping of the plot and characters is extremely successful. The plot is consistent without stressing the combat power. The protagonist's combat power is very coherent from the beginning to becoming the ceiling of combat power and then to transcending the world. The protagonist's behind-the-scenes actions of controlling everything also add color to this book. It is undoubtedly the best in the novel to the point of being close to a fairy. This is understandable. But for me personally, the most criticized part of this book is the death of Zaihou and Inoue Orihime in the Death Chapter, that is, they can be kept as pets and lose their freedom, and can die because of the overwhelming trend, but only being tortured to death by the protagonist is unacceptable to me. Maybe for the protagonist, Zaihou's prejudice and character offend the protagonist and end up being tortured to death. If it only ends here , I think this can be explained, after all, people in high positions cannot be humiliated, but later Orihime Inoue felt a thorn in her heart. After being coerced by the trend set off by the protagonist, an ordinary helpless girl was forced to participate in this big show. She was tortured to death without any offensive behavior, and died without any dignity or dignity. In order to tease Kurosaki Ichigo, this point of discomfort is over. She can die because of the situation, or she can be kept as a pet to play with, but humiliating her to death just for teasing is unacceptable to me. His little points are indifferent to me. For example, in the Pirates chapter, he designed a strategy to push Sengoku Garp and others to the opposite side, and then combined the enemy's forces to weaken his own strength. , This point seems a little bit poisonous, but it doesn't matter. After all, it can be explained that it is an internal struggle for power and profit, and the unstable factors can be eliminated. This point is harmless, and then it is one of the means of improving the protagonist's combat power. The golden finger of the defeat system is also difficult to use in the pirate chapter. There is no way to do this. After all, the combat power has been raised to its peak. Overall, it is a bit poisonous, but it is fun enough. Without the above factors, I would feel that this is a cool and fine novel that is infinitely close to being a fairy. After all, the writing techniques and descriptions are indeed quite good. I will continue to watch it now, but it's harmful and uncomfortable. It's just my personal opinion. Just refer to it.

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The writing is great, impeccable in terms of logic, language, fun, and enjoyment. It is the best pirate novel I have ever written, bar none. What I admire most about the author is that he perfectly restored the regrets and helplessness of us ordinary people in the world of pirates. There are countless beauties, including the long-legged and round wife, Stella, Sora, Otohime, Luju, Tianyue Toki and Tenyue, Olvia, Didi, etc., As well as the 365 God-chosen girls every day and year, such as Nami. With supreme status, the protagonist eventually becomes the sole ruler of multiple worlds. With unparalleled strength, the protagonist eats the fruit of the phantom beast, Mianjinmi. A world of its own and a population of 1 billion. The multiverse merges the worlds of One Piece, Bleach, Naruto, Dragon Ball and more. You never have to worry about being replaced like in the human world, because you have absolute physical strength. It combines the three worlds of the hell world, the ordinary human world, and the heaven world, and ordinary people can reincarnate. To sum up, from the perspective of passers-by, this Pirates fanfic is indeed good-looking and perfect, and it can be regarded as a masterpiece. Recommend.

Please update soon, although I don't understand why the rating is so low. Don't be carried away, the author will update soon.