Travel Across the Heavens and Start Plotting Superhuman Powers

It's not bad, but if you need to travel with energy, the readers will be reduced by half. The author thinks that his writing is too good, and he always corrects a few bad points, and just corrects them when there is nothing [laughs]

Awesome, fighting monsters in Pacific Rim, very cool [cool]

A good narrative, the protagonist has no poisonous points at present, the attitude towards life in the game, and no character is licked. What surprised me most was the appearance of Deadpool and the depiction of the protagonist breaking the fourth wall, which was great. I hope the author will continue writing and not enter the palace.

You can call him naive, but he is really cool. It's just that Pacific Rim is a small hole, and it's best to fill it in (five stars are afraid of invalidating the rating)

No, he eats beef.

Why do I feel that some of the previous ones were written by the author himself, but later they were written by AI?

Personally, I think it's pretty cool. I suggest that if you have enough power, you can travel to the Devouring Starry Sky to find Luo Feng to stop them from making sacrifices first. After defeating the Golden Horned Behemoth, you can go directly to the True God-level Luo Feng, so that you can directly advance by leaps and bounds. He could save many people that Luo Feng wanted to save but couldn't, so that when the time comes, it would not be impossible to directly pile them up into the True God of the Void, or even the True God of Eternity.

The writing is a little lacking, and the protagonist in the early part is not very good at what he does. But in the middle and later stages, the protagonist's character and way of doing things are very satisfying. Although some books are written well and have good plot descriptions, the protagonists feel very aggrieved. This book pleased me on this aspect.

It's okay, but the pace feels a bit fast. Every time I go to a world, I just skip it. After skipping it, I can travel through it at will. In fact, I can increase my strength and travel at the same time, which makes it feel better. The golden fingers like this are relatively open, which is actually a kind of refreshing writing. If the pace is too fast, the subsequent writing will be too dull and stuck. It is best to slow down.

This is a book that suits my taste. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. I also give the author some suggestions. Don't worry about the complaints and bad reviews from those book friends [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]. You can only know how difficult it is to write a book after you have written it. Some bad points are normal and we all understand. I hope the author writes according to his own wishes. The more he writes, the better [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I read the comments before, and I thought it was telling people in the main world that I can travel to other worlds. I didn't expect that it was telling people in that world, so it doesn't matter. That world is just a copy, as long as people in the main world don't know.

It's really great. You can gain power step by step in each world, especially in the Ultraman world. As an Ultraman fan, it's a surprise! And Ultraman itself is very popular, I hope the author can update it more

To be honest, it's pretty good.

Why not try to recruit people to create the movie you want to form a world, and then reap the profits?

Well, if you don't read it with your brain, it's still okay [eating melon]

It's quite fun, there's no heroine tendency, and there's really no messy, straightforward drama. You're all superhuman, so you won't have to talk nonsense with Jin Bi, just a few seconds. He didn't kill indiscriminately. Tony is the only one in Marvel who is suitable to be a friend. Tony should handle the Winter Soldier in the future. Tony's character is not someone who kills indiscriminately. Captain America is indeed selfish. A Tony who is willing to charge into the portal with a nuclear bomb for the sake of the earth is not the kind of character who directly kills the Winter Soldier.

Very Er Er Er Xiao Er Ge

Not bad, the writing is okay

Shuang Wai Wai, don't read the comment section and that's it.

Not bad, author, support you

When are you going to go back to Pacific Rim for revenge? The promised information about the big mecha is just gone [what]

It's okay. The description of the battle scenes is not exciting enough. I hope there are more.

Come on, come on, you can go to the beginning of Dragon Ball and make a wish. , As long as you get other people's genes, you can get other people's superpowers. , You can also go to the Dragon Ball world to get a Saiyan bloodline. Why not get a portable space for the protagonist to store props. , You can get the teleportation inside the teleporter. . There is also the power of telekinesis in the super power that is out of control.

It's a cool article that's very enjoyable to read, but don't take it too seriously [laughing]

It's very urgent. Send me the location and I'll send something to you as a reward for updating a chapter in two days [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

So far it looks very good

It's okay, please keep writing, author Not enough. Write quickly.

What a cool article. The novel is pretty good

The author must keep at it!