Wear It Quickly************

The plot is smooth and the writing can also be [heartfelt], but the details could still be improved upon [blowing kisses]. [Understood] First of all, Yingying's image is well created. I can tell that her character is a bit of a heroine. She puts study and career first and love second. This is a great thing to watch [like]. [Inquiry] Secondly, the male protagonists may be more brilliantly described [full], such as those who are a bit yandere. If the yandere character of the male protagonist is written well, maybe it can better reflect Yingying's talent in dog training [laughing] Finally, in terms of emotional drama, there are too few emotional lines in the first world, so I won't mention it. Let me talk about the second world. The Shura Field in the second world is not lacking. After all, two of the three male protagonists often meet Yingying together, but! I haven't written about the heart-racing feeling of Shura Field. In this regard, I think the baby can refer to your last book [Sending Hearts]. Then there is the third male protagonist whose surname is Xie. I feel that the character is dark and paranoid (I feel it! This is how I feel!! If I feel wrong, tell me, don't tell me!!!), But he actually stays in the county town and can only passively wait for Yingying to come to the county town when he has time before we can meet him. No matter how you look at it, it feels unreasonable. He is a high-ranking figure who maimed the evil uncle and killed the evil uncle's son! ! In short, on the whole, it is not a loss to invest. You can read the first few worlds before making a decision. Those who want to avoid lightning by reading book reviews should stop reading this, because I am going crazy. (Slide and kneel down to sprint) (Bring your hands to the brakes) Private Marseille author sauce! ! In fact, I also really want to be the first reviewer of your book (after all, the first one is always memorable, and I want my baby to remember me deeply!!) But! ! In order not to give a perfunctory book review, I read it for a long time before deciding to write it. (I hope my book review can help my baby [shy]) (Crawling in the dark) I like the baby so much. I really like the baby. I can't accept the days without @. Baby, look at me! ! ! !

Okay, it looks good

Very nice! Big cheers for the author! The author would like to work hard to update! The author greatly hopes that you can make the ending between the heroine and those people better!

Very well written by the author, more heartfelt, heartfelt

Bad news: book shortage Good news: found a great book Worse news: It's a new book, and there aren't many chapters.

It's very interesting. I hope the ending includes a dessert, so it has a beginning and an end!

Love doesn't have to last forever, the subtle fragrance floats just right