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I hope this book can have more knives, and have the kind of ups and downs of the knife-centered plot. It seems pretty good so far, let's see when the 100th chapter is reached. In short, the characterization is very good, the emotional lines are very vivid, and the sense of substitution is strong. However, the knife is not strong enough. Can the author do it? Your knife skills are too bad, what I want to see is a river of blood!

The plot description is quite good, but the pace is fast. It is best to simulate it with a cooling-off period. If the content and details are according to the original work, the protagonist should be the water god who bites himself to death, because the person who is executed must be the water god and can only be the water god. (Personal opinion)

Your book is too long and the update is too slow. I don't know how long it will take before I can see its brilliance, so hurry up. I hope I won't run out of time to read it in the futureヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

It looks good, but I would like to give the author a suggestion. It is best not to write simulations too frequently. It should be almost the same as the chapters in reality or about half of the chapters in simulation. After all, I can't wait to see Funina come to reality and reunite with the protagonist.

Not bad, it still looks good so far [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The pace is too fast, I want to see Fu Fu come to her real daily life [Sending my heart]

Author, is it a single heroine? [What]