Xia Qiu, who once traveled through time, thought he would live an ordinary and ordinary daily life in this world, but he did not expect that one day, a girl in a ship uniform suddenly appeared in front of him and claimed that she was his ship girl.
In this way, the daily life with the ship girl suddenly kicked off.
Enterprise: Commander, welcome back to Hong Kong!
Belfast: A mature maid will always wait patiently, Belfast, and will devote the rest of her life to you.
Akagi: Commander, you can't leave Akagi's side now.
Reader comments
I hope you don't have to hand it over, and that the two worlds can be merged directly. After the fusion, hand over [what] can't you clearly see who the big and small kings are?
How should I put it? It's a cliché that you can basically know at a glance. There are problems with the character design, but there is no way. This is basically a common problem in Azur Lane fan fiction. I haven't seen a few that can control it well. For other things, I think this protagonist is much better than other stallion commanders, but it is still weak. In fact, I think the best protagonist setting should be no protagonist, just use "Commander", no name is needed, and the character is more disdainful and easy to write.
But there is still a saying that Bilan official is not good at shaping the characters, which makes the novel more difficult to write than other novels. The only way out for this kind of novel is to make nonsense and funny daily unit dramas, similar to comics. This can greatly improve the problem of insufficient character design. Also, don't get nervous when writing about ship girls.
This really shows that the ship girl is cheap and the commander is low. Write more about daily dates. Even if you write about hitting the bases, the best situation is not to write about the commander's inner activities, because it is difficult for someone to write well the conversation between the two.
The last point is
Regarding my family's war weariness, my evaluation is four words: it feels good. I mainly want to focus on two points to illustrate my humble opinion on the flawless old lady: First, I really like Warpex. Although Warspite's stand-up painting shows Warspite's sassy side as a knight, Commander, I really like her. In this favorability plot, Warspite actually defeated his competitors and became the commander for me, the commander. I was so touched. His skin was all for my kawaii little Warspite. It's really awesome. It feels so good! ! ! It's going to start raining stars. The red cheeks, the eyes looking at the commander, and the white calves exposed between the little body and Christmas, looking at me happily, that pure and flawless little swallow only wants to show off in front of me, and only acts coquettishly in front of me. It's so cute, ah, Master, I like you so much, ah, I'm so tired of war. Second, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. Why doesn't he have a wedding dress when he is obviously a senior figure?
Third, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress.
Fourth, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress.
Five, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. War-weary
The more you look at it, the cuter it gets. You don't need to be constrained by the war-weariness of this opportunity, and boldly discover the real cuteness of this handsome and hard-working girl. My war weariness ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Long live Warspite! ! !
Long live the old lady! ! !
Long live my wife! ! ! !
The book is okay, but can I understand the settings of the ship maids more clearly before I write about it? The most classic ones are the classic rumors that the royal ship maids can't cook, and that Ron will tear up the commander. The characters of the ship maids are not decided by those who just jump over the party and make a fuss. Most of the royal maids can cook, Bei Fa Geng is the best among them. The perfect maid is not just talk, but a real decathlon. Befa is the strongest in housework in the royal family, and Befa is the best in cooking in the royal family. She is proficient in various skills and is also a financial expert. I will not accept that my wife Befa is belittled for no reason [angry][angry][angry][angry]
Let's just briefly touch on the reality of national interests, and don't poison us with any plot that someone wants to use the ship girl to study.
Write more and post more.
I read it in one sitting, pretty good. There are no such nonsense, the matter of clothes is also explained in Chapter 19. The most comfortable Bilan novel I have read recently.
Good looking. Love to watch. More
And those who play with Zhanwei are all good people.
It's not too much to give you four hours of sleep twenty-four hours a day [laughing] More soon
Finally there is a new book by Bilan
Author, don't stop! Update soon! I can't live without you!
The author of "Come on" writes very well, why don't you update it? Or have you changed channels? Moreover, the author's portrait and data are empty. What's going on? My number is gone, I'll change it to a smaller number and talk about it.
Very well written, thank you to the author!
The author number is gone, so this book should be the same, which is a pity.
Not bad, come on, author!
I hope the author can survive
The author should note that the life span of ordinary people and ship girls should not be judged by life span.
At this moment, the author has not updated for a long time, and the probability is gone. I gave it five stars because he writes about "ship girls"
Bilan finally has a new book! Hope it doesn't stop…
Let's give it four stars first. It depends on how you handle state relations. If handled well, it won't be uncomfortable to watch. Then mend this heart.
Support Azur Lane
You may like it
Personal feeling is good
It's pretty cool. Why is the score so low?
Please, please give me one more, commanders will do anything!
Good, good, good, good, good, there is a future
It's quite interesting, I finished reading it in one sitting😋👍👍👍
Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, really good-looking
The blue sky will never fall, I will accompany you until you grow old
As long as there are no problems with the writing, five stars will be given.
It's a pretty well-written Bilanwen, with a moderate sweetness, but I'll just have to deal with it later.
I hope you don't have to hand it over, and that the two worlds can be merged directly. After the fusion, hand over [what] can't you clearly see who the big and small kings are?
How should I put it? It's a cliché that you can basically know at a glance. There are problems with the character design, but there is no way. This is basically a common problem in Azur Lane fan fiction. I haven't seen a few that can control it well. For other things, I think this protagonist is much better than other stallion commanders, but it is still weak. In fact, I think the best protagonist setting should be no protagonist, just use "Commander", no name is needed, and the character is more disdainful and easy to write. But there is still a saying that Bilan official is not good at shaping the characters, which makes the novel more difficult to write than other novels. The only way out for this kind of novel is to make nonsense and funny daily unit dramas, similar to comics. This can greatly improve the problem of insufficient character design. Also, don't get nervous when writing about ship girls. This really shows that the ship girl is cheap and the commander is low. Write more about daily dates. Even if you write about hitting the bases, the best situation is not to write about the commander's inner activities, because it is difficult for someone to write well the conversation between the two. The last point is Regarding my family's war weariness, my evaluation is four words: it feels good. I mainly want to focus on two points to illustrate my humble opinion on the flawless old lady: First, I really like Warpex. Although Warspite's stand-up painting shows Warspite's sassy side as a knight, Commander, I really like her. In this favorability plot, Warspite actually defeated his competitors and became the commander for me, the commander. I was so touched. His skin was all for my kawaii little Warspite. It's really awesome. It feels so good! ! ! It's going to start raining stars. The red cheeks, the eyes looking at the commander, and the white calves exposed between the little body and Christmas, looking at me happily, that pure and flawless little swallow only wants to show off in front of me, and only acts coquettishly in front of me. It's so cute, ah, Master, I like you so much, ah, I'm so tired of war. Second, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. Why doesn't he have a wedding dress when he is obviously a senior figure? Third, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. Fourth, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. Five, I really don't like my wife not wearing a wedding dress. War-weary The more you look at it, the cuter it gets. You don't need to be constrained by the war-weariness of this opportunity, and boldly discover the real cuteness of this handsome and hard-working girl. My war weariness ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Long live Warspite! ! ! Long live the old lady! ! ! Long live my wife! ! ! !
The book is okay, but can I understand the settings of the ship maids more clearly before I write about it? The most classic ones are the classic rumors that the royal ship maids can't cook, and that Ron will tear up the commander. The characters of the ship maids are not decided by those who just jump over the party and make a fuss. Most of the royal maids can cook, Bei Fa Geng is the best among them. The perfect maid is not just talk, but a real decathlon. Befa is the strongest in housework in the royal family, and Befa is the best in cooking in the royal family. She is proficient in various skills and is also a financial expert. I will not accept that my wife Befa is belittled for no reason [angry][angry][angry][angry]
Let's just briefly touch on the reality of national interests, and don't poison us with any plot that someone wants to use the ship girl to study. Write more and post more.
I read it in one sitting, pretty good. There are no such nonsense, the matter of clothes is also explained in Chapter 19. The most comfortable Bilan novel I have read recently.
Good looking. Love to watch. More And those who play with Zhanwei are all good people.
It's not too much to give you four hours of sleep twenty-four hours a day [laughing] More soon
Finally there is a new book by Bilan
Author, don't stop! Update soon! I can't live without you!
The author of "Come on" writes very well, why don't you update it? Or have you changed channels? Moreover, the author's portrait and data are empty. What's going on? My number is gone, I'll change it to a smaller number and talk about it.
Very well written, thank you to the author!
The author number is gone, so this book should be the same, which is a pity.
Not bad, come on, author!
I hope the author can survive
The author should note that the life span of ordinary people and ship girls should not be judged by life span.
At this moment, the author has not updated for a long time, and the probability is gone. I gave it five stars because he writes about "ship girls"
Bilan finally has a new book! Hope it doesn't stop…
Let's give it four stars first. It depends on how you handle state relations. If handled well, it won't be uncomfortable to watch. Then mend this heart.
Support Azur Lane
You may like it
Personal feeling is good
It's pretty cool. Why is the score so low?
Please, please give me one more, commanders will do anything!
Good, good, good, good, good, there is a future
It's quite interesting, I finished reading it in one sitting😋👍👍👍
Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, really good-looking
The blue sky will never fall, I will accompany you until you grow old As long as there are no problems with the writing, five stars will be given.
It's a pretty well-written Bilanwen, with a moderate sweetness, but I'll just have to deal with it later.
Good, good, come on
Sweet makes me cry, so beautiful