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Get yourself a five-star haha

It's really great! The interspersed plots of Genshin Impact and Beng Tie are not obtrusive, praise, praise, praise. There are just too few chapters.

Si Guoyi! The subject matter is quite novel, and the plot is also very interesting. I am even more [admired] when I update it. The plot is not bad. If it is performed stably, it will be popular, but the prerequisite is that there are many chapters. I have seen similar themes like this. If you stick to it, I will give it a try. Thank you to the author! [Sending Hearts]

The plot is very exciting, and the interspersed scenes of Genshin Impact and Beng Tie are not too abrupt, but the character of the protagonist seems a bit single, maybe because there are too few chapters. The function settings of the system are very personalized, and the numbering part of Aha is very fun and fits Aha very well. I hope the author can integrate the specific functions of the system next time. The names of some characters in the article are misspelled, such as Quirrell instead of Kino. I hope the author can change it. In conclusion, this book is generally a good book and suitable for killing time.

OMG, the most interesting hp fan in history Madam, can you write it as Shuangnan, cp Tom, please, please [fear][fear][fear]

[Love] 🥰❤️❤️‍🔥Super beautiful writing, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

This should obviously be the first book by this author. I have only read Chapter 24 now, and I feel that the writing style is unfamiliar. And, well, Jane herself uses people to face the front, not people to face the back. How should I say? Quite like it How to write a story about the death of these people that is inevitable at the end of the writing? Is it going to be a family-friendly plot? Making dumplings, or following the writing method of the original work, but what is the point of following the writing method of the original work? Or maybe the original intention of writing this thing is to leave something to the world. I have seen many authors who write the protagonist to death in the end and then end it hastily with a side story. This is a long novel. , Can also be regarded as a conversation with Jane. I think the best ending is for Jane to go back and take the college entrance examination, and she can also communicate with the HP world until she grows old. Many authors write until the end, and they don't know what kind of story they want to tell, whether it is a legendary adventure, a person's road to immortality, or the traces left by an unknown adventurer in the world. Because I have poured my feelings into it, I can't help but not give him a good ending. But until that day comes, let's do this It's smooth, without the ups and downs like the other one, and it's undoubtedly a good story. I convinced myself. I read it from 8 to 9 o'clock for two hours. Because I am a very careful reader, I read 24 chapters in two hours. Oops, it's almost 11 o'clock now. Well, I don't have time to read.

I like it very much. The author please update it faster! I really like watching the interaction between Riddle and Jane!

How should I put it? It's surprisingly interesting among all the fan fiction. It's very humane and the protagonist's character is very realistic. I haven't seen such a realistic protagonist in a long time. I like it very much. What can I say? You can find this book at Tomato and it's still good for school.

It looks good, and I really like the protagonist and Voldemort [shy]

The subject matter is relatively new (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) Belongs to the category I like to watch (/ω＼) It looks very fun too ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ I personally like it ⊙▽⊙

It feels really good-looking (◕ᴗ◕✿)! ! !

Good quality, rigorous plot

Give five stars to beautiful works

Why is it not popular? This book is so beautiful [love] [love] I couldn't publish this book at all when I was promoting it [I almost cried]

Beautiful, so beautiful

Very pretty haha

Fun, the setting is interesting

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's great, I love it and I want to see it again [shy], I wish you a good sign as soon as possible [sending my heart]

It's very interesting. I'll explain it carefully. You won't lose money if you fall into this trap.

Nice! It's just a bit small, you can save some‧˚₊*̥(∗︎*⁰͈꒨⁰͈)‧˚₊*̥