After the Concave Character Design, the Protagonists Looked at Me with Unclear Eyes

Wow~ The author really created a human-machine flavor~ Say it! How many ai can you eat in one meal? ~[Make faces] Small suggestions, small suggestions, there are a lot of them... (Nothing else, this is fine. If you like it, just read it. If you don't, don't read it. After all, you write it and I read it~) The second half is better, if the main plot line is clearer (that is, what is the protagonist doing, who is the target, what is the purpose at this stage, what is the ultimate goal, there must be something outstanding in the past, present, and future) The branch characters should be more fleshed out (for example, what kind of history does the person who went offline early have? The psychological description of the protagonist can be a little more, and the appearance description is appropriate... If you watch too much, you will always feel that it is either an excerpt or AI. You can write about the relationship between the characters. After watching too many "wonderful" plots, you will always feel tired, um... You understand the balance between work and rest) It is best to write about the background of the world (such as the division of upper and lower boundaries, regional boundaries, backgrounds of all walks of life, outstanding figures, forces, and cutting-edge combat power, controllable and uncontrollable, etc.) At least... It's okay to let people clarify the current situation of the protagonist, or slow down the progress (such as inserting appropriate daily routines), try to lengthen the plot development (such as spreading out the exciting parts of the plot, stretching it out), make the divisions clearer (such as the specific situation of each person or force, and their proportion in the plot, etc.), Appropriately insert the character background and introduction (such as inserting the character's psychology in the battle to reveal the opponent's identity, etc.)... Well... That's it, don't dislike me for being verbose ~ QAQ

It's interesting. For a pure egoist, no matter how bad the process is, as long as you gain strength. And the process, crushing the faith of the so-called genius, is quite enjoyable. Pure and refreshing article

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, this is so good looking, my God, Unsystematic is so good looking!! The protagonist is ruthless, has good looks, scheming, and acting skills. Every move is captivating. He seems to be passive but actually controls the overall situation. Unless the opponent is destined to die, he will not lose his character. I love this even more. It is so good-looking. This is so touching and good-looking. It must be 5 stars⭐. It's so good that I specially wrote my first positive review for this.

It's not bad. As long as you don't delve into the logic, it still seems very enjoyable. It's a no-brainer. Ps: There is an inexplicable feeling of "hissing"

The author understands our xp, it's so fun to read

The subject matter is novel and the character settings are very distinctive. Although I haven't read many chapters, the plot is still very fascinating. It breaks some plots of time-traveling villains and sons of destiny becoming brothers, but some content about the protagonist's training can be added appropriately. It's a very unique idea. I hope the author can keep going. Come on [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Author, you think the book is really good. I don't read much, so I don't know what to say. In short, I love it so much. I like it very much. Come on, the author. I believe you can become a tomato book. It's such a beautiful book. I recommend it to my friends to read it. I like it so much. Don't stop updating it. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

It's been many years since I've seen Haitang's writing on Tomato.

Wc! ! ! It's so beautiful. I'm going to lick it! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh such great rice! Teacher, I want to follow you all my life! ! ! (Lick lick lick lick)

It's very beautiful, but it's a pity that the author ran away.

Very pretty and inspiring! [Adoration][Admiration] But there are so few, not enough to see! ! [Cry][cry]

It's beautiful and I like the setting. Cheers to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

So pretty! ! ! I just can't see enough, please update [sending my heart]

I'll go, this is so cool, right?

Very beautiful, great, I like it very much\(//∇//)\

It's pretty but a bit lacking.

It's exciting and refreshing

I fell in love directly 😍

They really stepped on my sweet spot!

So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Oh my god, it's so exciting, so cool

It's really well written, I like it so much💕, write more, it's not enough [Adoration] [I'm about to cry]

The protagonist acted very well and deceived everyone Moreover, the protagonist's sense of immersion is also very strong, and it is worth recommending.

Super pretty! I like it very much.

I like this plot so much, it's great to watch [adoration][adoration][blowing kiss]

I think it's beautiful, please give it a try

Not only is it a heartthrob, but the plot development is also really exciting. The children of destiny are unintentionally plotted and manipulated by the protagonist.

Very beautiful, ah ah

It's really beautiful [sending heartfelt wishes]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking