Comprehensive Comic: the Yellow-Haired Monster in the Service Department

It's not bad, but I don't recommend adding Superman as a supporting character. It's best to just make a cameo. She is more suitable to be a pure love chick than the main character. The god of love blesses 100 people. They are all high-quality women and are more male protagonists than male protagonists. The male protagonist doesn't have a succubus aura, so he has to rely on himself to defeat the enemy. There is so much left in the Superman Lover, so there is a lot of room for manipulation, and there is a lot of room for readers to imagine [take a closer look], so it is easier to say it is thunder poison or something.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Jingji waited for Wei Wumei for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Zi Wentuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years Years ago, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for several thousand years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. Zuiyu smiled slightly. The year he stretched out trembled slightly, and his eyes sparkled with tears. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update...

It started well, with the development of the daily relationship line, but then it dropped straight away and turned into a strategy game. Mashiro started it. The latest two chapters have released the emotional system, level rewards, and game guides.

There are few comics that are written very clearly and logically, but there are some dissonances. For example, Yukino is a bit too waxy, but I quite like it. I feel that Yukino who is more soft and waxy is particularly cute. The writing is also good. The male protagonist has very clear feelings for the female protagonist. He eats what he should eat and takes responsibility for what he should do. However, the lifespan theory that always appears also hopes to leave a definite plan as soon as possible. Don't mention it repeatedly. I hope to read a warm and interesting book. I hope this book can maintain its level, come on, author.

Good reviews. So far, except for the image problem of the male protagonist, everything else is pretty good. After all, how can a realm monster have wheat-colored skin? A monster born in the gap, as the darling of the world, should be top-notch in general in terms of appearance and strength. Just look at Yakumo Murasaki and you will know that her figure and appearance are actually top notch.

I've watched half of it, and it's pretty good so far. There's no greasy flirting, earthy love stories, or inexplicably gratuitous plots. I heard that there were some bad ones before, but the author took the advice and deleted them, but I didn't see them. The impression is quite good. The author took the advice and added another star!

Excellent game, all settings are good, no bitterness, no deep hatred, no poor start or king start. Comprehensive comics should be written more relaxedly, describing how the protagonist can improve himself, such as his strength and career, and then add the interaction with the heroine, and then avoid all kinds of obvious poisonous points. As for this book, I think the first part is very good, but it depends on how the author writes later.

Good! It's just that the female protagonists are joining a bit too fast. If you want to write a long-term story, it's difficult to add so many at once. It's easy to accidentally neglect someone. It's better to describe more about daily life before adding more [Like]

Thumbs up! ! ! Comprehensive comic, multiple female protagonists, carnivorous style, the protagonist is a realm demon (Touhou Fantasy Township), there is a yellow hair system. I have seen the latest chapter so far, there are no poisonous points, highly recommended

I've seen the homepage many times, but never clicked in. Then I happened to listen to a book and heard about it. I don't think it's very interesting if I don't read it. Once I read it, I can't stop [laughing] The plot is too deliberate to highlight that the protagonist is a yellow-haired gangster. It is used to show friendliness to people you don't know, yo! Say hello to so and so? Is it possible to use it to say hello to other people's parents, yo! Are you the parent of so and so? Which normal person would say hello like this? The protagonist most likely was a gangster in his previous life. If the people around me in the world were normal before, they would notice that it was inappropriate for me to speak like this. If your elders say this to you, hey, this is not the case with someone else's children. Just open your mouth and say it to the elders who are unfamiliar with you. Hey, isn't this so-and-so's mother? Hello. If you were an ordinary-looking person, it would be okay to say hello like this. You already know what you look like. It's too deliberate. I can only say it's too deliberate. If you say that the protagonist is a maverick, then this is no longer a maverick, but a fool. How offensive is it for you to say hello to someone who is not familiar with you. Hyakucho Kasumigaoka's insertion into the plot was too awkward, blunt, extremely blunt, and it ruined the characters of Sayuri and Eiriri. Your inspiration won't reach its limit, right?

The plot seems pretty good, so I have a few suggestions: 1. It is recommended to improve the image of the protagonist, preferably like a succubus. 2. Put all the heroines in the same school, so that daily life will be more convenient. 3. It is better for the protagonist to be the male protagonist of the original work, so it will be more enjoyable to watch. 4. Write more about the daily life of the heroine and the protagonist

All I can say is that it suits my taste, so I'll take it all in thoroughly.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I think we can also add Shiraishi from Yamada-kun and the Seven Witches

Not bad, at least you can get it if you want it

Yes, this pure love yellow hair is really gratifying

Personally, I feel pretty good, at least it doesn't have any poisonous points for the time being. Worth recommending [thinking]

It looks pretty good, one of the best among manga series

Immortality is a curse unless you don't eat beef. It's pretty good so far, I hope it's not the kind of multi-female monk novel that's all talk but no practice.

I want to see the teaching and training [shy]

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

The author is happy ε(○´∀｀)зε(´∀｀●)з

The protagonist is a realm demon, not a space demon. His main ability is realm, not space, the realm of life and death, the realm of stillness and movement.

Not bad, but can the author correct the typos?

Where are people? The author has been here for several days. Did something happen?

Just support the author and don't mess up.

Awesome, it would be better if the author could update 800 chapters a day [I understand]

Give a good review first as a reward and ask him to update more. If it is slow, reduce it by one.

I want to see how hard it is for the trainer to catch someone playing with Esther. Give me a hard training! ! ! ! !

It's already pretty good in Tomato. Please support it.