A Prince from Another World Becomes a Herrscher, and a Cocogoat Falls Into His Arms from the Start

Conversations have scenes of conversation, and descriptions have passages of description. Writing a novel is not a composition. The dialogue scenes are obviously only three or two sentences, but a lot of psychological or attitudinal explanations are used. It is okay to describe the psychology or attitude of a specific scene, but it does not need to be described in every sentence. The author looks back at the novel himself to see if every sentence he talks to the protagonist has a description of some dialogue scenes. For [the script], it is a description similar to a narration. This is the plot that the novel needs to read, not the psychological description similar to the narration of an opera. There is no problem in using more descriptions of the beauty of female characters in multi-female novels, but to be honest, using a few paragraphs of description is a bit too much, and a similar situation occurs when describing the environment. The above is my impression of this novel. To be honest, the author's writing skills should be good, which can be seen from the writing style, but this is a novel. The background of this book is quite novel. Putting aside the psychological activities and attitude descriptions of the narrator, the plot has good coherence. This is also the key to my review, because I hope the author will make corrections. If the author doesn't like it, you can ignore it.

It's pretty good. As long as it's written well, it doesn't matter whether it's a single woman or a harem. And I hope the author doesn't write it as a game fanfic. It's the kind of story that has a god's eye but only knows the skills in the game.

The author's writing style is like that of a female author. There are a lot of descriptions of characters, clothing, and backgrounds, etc., Which gives people a very boring feeling. As long as a new character appears, there will be almost 2 to 4 pages of a densely packed description of that character. In addition, the plot advances slowly, and the feeling when reading is not so good. Also, the live broadcast feels a bit inexplicable. Let's check it out later, that's about it.

Shamelessly give myself a five star. In addition, I also ask all readers to give me some advice. Don't be merciful if I write something bad, just encourage me as much as you like!!!!!!

Not bad so far

It's a relatively good book. It's very thoughtful. Good luck to the author. I'll update it soon. These two chapters feel a bit anxious.

It's okay, but in terms of combat, it's a long paragraph to describe the appearance in one stroke. It's okay once or twice, but it really affects the perception if it's done too many times.

Nice looking but watery

Please support me. The playback system is too weak and seems a bit abrupt when it appears. The author can consider adjusting the frequency of its appearance.

I don't know where the sense of literary gentleman comes from, and I don't know where the sense of boredom comes from.