Collapse of Iron: the Opening Fire Escape Shows Purity

Such a good book that I immediately opened Naruto. Our long-term players are really very skillful.

Put on headphones and play the Green Bible and then read this novel. This life is really full of life [laughing]

It's very pure at the moment. Oh my god, the invincible Lord Five Spirits. I'm looking forward to the moment when the Living Pillar comes out.

It would be better if the protagonist's character could be replaced by Sasuke's. Strength is not permanent, but handsomeness is lifelong.

It looks good, but there are no heretic demons.

It's pretty good-looking, but this version of Star Iron is more focused on game settings. The same goes for Naruto. But currently, I feel that the acquisition of fragments is a little slow. Then I feel that I can add some fashions, that is, I change different clothes every time I switch to a character. After all, Chao is so handsome.

Your works are also a breath of fresh air in the literary world I'm looking forward to what comes next, all in all: A+! ! ! !

The writing is very good, I really like the theme of Naruto + Bentie! It is recommended to slow down the pace during key plot moments, and to make up for the regrets in the plot. Don't follow the main plot rigidly, but add the role and influence of the protagonist during the period. Create something new in the plot [laughs]

You can watch it, it's similar to other fics, it follows the plot + Naruto elements. -1 Star for not persecuting Lao Yang [laughing evilly] Overall it can be seen

It's okay, no procrastination, no slang, the plot is okay, not too blunt, I suggest adding more emotional scenes😈😈

The writing style is good and the words are rich. I marked Nagato as a red mark when I saw it [face covering] [OK] Double fire started, Ba Ti backhand connected with the shell, and then the fire and thunder filled the injury

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Author, you must hold on, persistence is the key to victory! I also want to see a small combo that scares Chaoying to 3000 points.

Speaking of which, is there only one extra room on the train?

Very good book, it made me feel hurt at the beginning😋

So good, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah

It's nice, but the author is too short.

You are so short, author

Still fun in the underworld

Very good, no matter from the perspective of plot, writing style or emotion, the water should be watered down, surpassing a large part of it.

Good-looking and functional

Very beautiful, Xingbao is very cute

Beautiful, no need to say more

When can I eat meat and replenish my stars?

I suggest the author not to give up. It's not easy to have a good-looking Naruto.

It's still good. I feel like the male protagonist can be strengthened appropriately, or the templates can be used with each other.

It's an interesting setting, but it's still a little less exciting. After all, the protagonist is not that invincible. Will he completely turn into Otsutsuki later on?

It's pretty good. I personally think the process is very smooth.

I suggest you update the panel of Wandering Obito in the future. I think that thing is quite handsome. It should have a strong effect on the protagonist.

Incredibly pretty!