After the System Set Me Up, I Became the Strongest Demon Slayer

The protagonist has upright views, is brave and resourceful, and the supporting characters are well written. I haven't seen anything particularly poisonous so far (if you think the things that don't conform to common sense are poisonous points, then I have nothing to say. I've watched fantasy and don't care about common sense. I only care about the results, okay). At first I thought there would be a lot of bad guys among my colleagues, but there weren't. This really kept me chasing! To be honest, it's really boring to think about being a demon slayer and then provoke the protagonist to die. Do you want to write about internal fighting or fending off enemies? Anyway, I like to watch the protagonist slay demons and save people, surrounded by people who are helping me. The author's description of the fight flows so smoothly that I can imagine the scene. It was quite interesting to pave the way through daily life in the early stage. I haven't seen a female protagonist yet. If there is one, it would be better to have a single female protagonist, and then she can be a supporter. I am looking forward to the unfolding of the plot later. The system doesn't give too much, which is also a good comment!

Very nice! Good writing. The logic is clear. So far, at least. Highly readable! The protagonist's thinking is relatively mature, not naive! Not a novice! The main plot of slaying demons, the secondary plot of upgrading, and the secondary plot of brotherly friendship are all very clear. The world structure gradually unfolds...

5 Stars encouragement The writing style is slightly higher than that of Xiaobaiwen The author wants to write a passionate novel, but always feels that it falls short. As a reader, I don't know what the difference is. It just lacks a sense of immersion. If you treat it as a novice, the writing style is very good. But if you are not a novice, there will be some gaps.

The writing is good, but I want to ask if there is a female protagonist?

It looks okay, but I always feel uncomfortable 🤦

So far, good

The writing style is good and the logic is clear. It's either a brainless article or a short article. I'd rather write a short story.

It's very good. After reading more than 80 chapters, there are still no poisonous points. The overall logic is also good. Let's take a look again 🤭

I've seen Chapter 80, it's pretty good. Overall pretty good

I can see the youthful spirit in it