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I would like to read a book similar to "Patch". The concept is novel and profound, and the world view is set in a big way! It combines fantasy, thriller, technology, and time-travel elements with strict logic and brain-burning writing.
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Very nice! Good writing. The logic is clear. So far, at least. Highly readable! The protagonist's thinking is relatively mature, not naive! Not a novice! The main plot of slaying demons, the secondary plot of upgrading, and the secondary plot of brotherly friendship are all very clear. The world structure gradually unfolds...
The protagonist has upright views, is brave and resourceful, and the supporting characters are well written. I haven't seen anything particularly poisonous so far (if you think the things that don't conform to common sense are poisonous points, then I have nothing to say. I've watched fantasy and don't care about common sense. I only care about the results, okay). At first I thought there would be a lot of bad guys among my colleagues, but there weren't. This really kept me chasing! To be honest, it's really boring to think about being a demon slayer and then provoke the protagonist to die. Do you want to write about internal fighting or fending off enemies? Anyway, I like to watch the protagonist slay demons and save people, surrounded by people who are helping me. The author's description of the fight flows so smoothly that I can imagine the scene. It was quite interesting to pave the way through daily life in the early stage. I haven't seen a female protagonist yet. If there is one, it would be better to have a single female protagonist, and then she can be a supporter. I am looking forward to the unfolding of the plot later. The system doesn't give too much, which is also a good comment!
5 Stars encouragement The writing style is slightly higher than that of Xiaobaiwen The author wants to write a passionate novel, but always feels that it falls short. As a reader, I don't know what the difference is. It just lacks a sense of immersion. If you treat it as a novice, the writing style is very good. But if you are not a novice, there will be some gaps.
The writing is good, but I want to ask if there is a female protagonist?
It looks okay, but I always feel uncomfortable [face covering]
The plot is compact and exciting
I can see the youthful spirit in it
So far, good
I've seen Chapter 80, it's pretty good. Overall pretty good
The quality is pretty good, and it can be considered a potential new book.
Authors who can do it must believe in themselves, you can do it. Not bad at Tiancan Potato, chasing after Lord Ma.
The writing style is good and the logic is clear. It's either a brainless article or a short article. I'd rather write a short story.
It's very good. After reading more than 80 chapters, there are still no poisonous points. The overall logic is also good. Let's take a look again [laughing]