Stealing Pen: Deduct 1 to Inherit the Zhang Family's Gatekeeping Rights

Just give yourself five stars shamelessly. The first volume of the story is finished! This article is not a purely cool article. There are no unconventional plug-ins. Because such a brother is enough to face the storms in the future. In my eyes, he is a strong person. This kind of strength gives people strength and attracts others, so he will always rise and will always succeed. I am a fan of hot-blooded comics, so I think it is not shameful to be weak in the early stage, and I am also growing up. And because I am a fan of passionate comics, my understanding is that human emotions are always accompanied by great power, so I like to use emotions to understand and shape characters, so if you read this work, you may see a very heterogeneous Zhang family that I created. I also hope that my story and my unofficial history of the Zhang family can bring more reading pleasure to all readers. I hope that his story can give people strength. This story came to me on a whim before going to bed one day. I saved the manuscript for almost two months before releasing it, but I didn't expect it to be exhausted so quickly... I am a fragile updater, and I need God to teach me... No matter what! Thanks to everyone who likes me! !

The writing is very delicate and full of emotions, the plot is not broken for the time being, and my personality is also very charming. I really like Zhang Hengyu's tough yet gentle beauty! The characters other than Brother were not left out. They were not just tools to highlight Brother's charm. They all liked him logically! Brother is the best! I hope the author will not interrupt the update. It doesn't matter if the update is slow. It's okay to ask for leave. Just don't interrupt the update. My bookshelf already has too many discontinued Tomb Raider fanfics——(By the way, I really like this way of using poems as titles)

So far, the writing is very good [like]. All the characters on the stage can stand up and are not empty and flimsy. It is novel and refined among many other violent cheating fandoms such as systems and bloodlines. It can be seen that the author wants to well shape the Zhang family in his mind. (The following contains spoilers) The current Zhang family is twisted and huge. It is commendable that the protagonist can maintain his true nature in such an environment. I like Zhang Yuan and Xiao He very much. The former shows the charm of the protagonist very well. Even the enemies are attracted to the protagonist. I feel that Zhang Yuan will be a great and loyal "evil dog" (he is also a member of the Wang family). The latter is a little fool and a fool, but according to the protagonist, this one also has the potential to be a "loyal dog" [laughing], huh? Why are there so many dog ​​breeds in the Zhang family? I want a cat [laughs]. The timeline is very long, and I feel that if it is written well, it will be a long story. The protagonist will have to wait for a long time to return to that familiar era. I look forward to the reveal of the mystery later and the appearance of original characters such as Lao Jiumen (there will be one, right?), Xiao Ge, etc. [Love].

The rating of less than 7 really buried this good article, so I added a long review. If you like the Zhang family, original works, or supplementary settings, don't miss it. I discovered it when I was two chapters into this article, and was immediately attracted by the writing style. It is really smooth and beautiful. The protagonist Yu Ge is confident and proud, and the whole story shines. I think the biggest features are twofold. First, there are a lot of psychological descriptions and rich emotional expressions. The author is good at driving character behavior through inner thoughts, and then giving feedback, constantly showing the character's personality, and completing the entire logical chain. Watching Brother Yu's inner drama is like watching a mystery drama. Various elements are collected and categorized bit by bit, which is the main driving force of the plot. The plot currently contains many major events and conflicts, but it always feels like watching a child write a diary. This is not derogatory, it just feels serious and serious, but it is also cute. Brother Yu's love for the Zhang family is really too deep. From his perspective, there are no absolute villains, only family members. Positive emotional expressions can be seen everywhere in the article. Even if it is difficult, it is not sad or depressing, but close to "I'm okay!" And "No problem!", Allowing readers to relax and read. The second is the original Zhang family setting. The author is very original to my taste. If the research is not accurate, he will make his own settings, refine the stone to mend the sky, and gnaw at all kinds of blanks and bugs. I admire him. In most articles, except for a few regular customers of the maternal family, everyone else in the Zhang family is a villain. It is rare to find a positive description. It does not describe the inhumane old man, nor the cold-blooded and violent torture. It is the Zhang family who can talk and love, which is particularly fresh. This has to be lamented again, the protagonist setting and background setting play a key role. The son of the patriarch Zhang Ruitong, his story is destined to be different from that of the lower-class orphans, and he is destined to follow the path of top-down transformation. The timeline is a link between the past and the following, and it is in a position where everything is still in time and everything is just right. However, there are many original things, and it all depends on the author's performance. Then write down some of my expectations. Part of Yu Ge's current good condition comes from his own hard work and charm, and part of it relies on the careful and considerate protection of his family members. He has not yet been exposed to the core of the family's conspiracy and the darkness of the disputes in the outside world. He is a protected baby. The built-in plug-ins have advantages and disadvantages. They are great when used well, and the side effects are not small. Then his development can no longer continue so smoothly, and it is time to increase his intensity. Wait for him to grow up, hone his skills, hone his character, wait for his existence to affect the development of the family, and wait for his ambition to become a reality little by little. There are also some clips that correspond to the plot points of the original work. I am very excited. I want to see the ancient city of Surabaya to find the bronze bell. I want to know the follow-up of my father, mother, uncle and Xiao Zhang. I am looking forward to the appearance of Kang Baluo and my brother. I am looking forward to the appearance of Lao Jiumen and the original biography (can you write about it? Anyway, Brother Yu is so good that he will definitely live to the modern era). If Butterfly's original biography has a plot, it will be quite interesting. It's over 800 words, let's wrap it up. I wish our protagonist, Brother Yu, to ride the wind and waves, move forward bravely, and everything he wishes will come true. I wish the author good health, a happy life, and update every day.

It's so beautiful. My charm is beyond the realm of possibility. As a person named Zhang, I have been deeply fascinated by him. Big boost for the author! [Laugh][Sending Hearts]૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა(♡>𖥦<)/♥◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜..°♡ ♡.꒰ ⑅:†· ♡ ·†:⑅ ꒱.♡

Wow wow, it's really beautiful. My wife is really cultured and her writing is also very good! There is no punctuation mark that is not used correctly (although it is not a big problem, many pirated books written by foreign persimmons do not even use the punctuation mark correctly, which makes the writing more difficult). I really hope that there will be more punctuation marks [crying] It is really not enough and I am starving to death [crying] I also hope that our Yuyu will grow up quickly and stop being in such a forced and sad state [crying] [Crying] Madam, please update more, your writing is better than 99% of the Western Persimmon Pirates fans, and the plot is also great! The in-depth interpretation of the Zhang family is also very good. I have never seen the Zhang family with such deep contradictions but full of silent love (although my interpretation may not be in line with what the wife wants, but overall it is great).

Xiaoyu is a budding flower in the mud pond at dusk. It fell into mud and was crushed into dust, but only the fragrance remained the same. The author's character Xiao Yu feels like he will be someone who sacrifices himself for love and feeds everyone back. While chasing the sunset for the remaining light, someone noticed that lovely flower and couldn't help being attracted to it, and gradually slowed down to chase the sunset. Can those who are left behind find this little flower? Will they like this little flower?

Nice! The emotional perspective of this story stands out among other fans. The concept of the first volume is profound enough. It is not like the boring and perfunctory redemption of many fans. The protagonist does not become a savior by committing misery, and the author does not set up a deus ex machina to descend and use external force to break the tragedy. From this point of view, this story is great

How can I put it this way? This book gave me a new understanding of the Zhang family. It is not obtrusive and well connected. The character of the protagonist is also very good. He is not perfect and has the shortcomings of ordinary people. Or weakness, but he also has tenacity that ordinary people don't have, and the ability to love people despite suffering. He is not the Holy Father. He just wants Xiao Zhang to have the same ability to love and be loved like him. In fact, there are many, many more, so I won't go into details. Generally speaking, the protagonist can It makes me feel that someone is really close to me, not so far away, but also more sympathetic. The writing is also very good, the plot is fascinating, there are no surprises, it is warm and a little glassy. It is an immersive fanfic written by a stolen author. The original writing is smooth and smooth. Highly recommended! ! !

Really, the feelings are so delicate. The love between my mother and my brother, as well as the current two male ghosts, Xiaoniao, the feelings are really real and delicate, which makes me feel the same. I would like to call it my favorite fan. It is very interesting, especially the ancient poems, which are really good and can summarize some articles. Damn, Wadasi wants a lot! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Good looking It's a feudal family style where the building is about to collapse😋. Unfortunately, it was discontinued when I was a child... But it's still worth reading.

So far, this article is well written, but! ! ! Author, would you like to see how many chapters you have updated? ! ! How many chapters can I read now! ! ! It's not enough at all. Let's see if it's good! ! !

I have just finished reading the first volume. Every character in the author's works is of flesh and blood, and he is thinking about the problem from another perspective. He is not following the mainstream character and is bad, so he is also bad in my case. Xiaoyu's core is currently super stable, and I look forward to his growth. [Love][love][love]

Looks good, I like it! ! ! ! Very good. I really like Chapter 40 or so, A Yu! ! ! ! ! Our Xiaoyu plays with Xiao Zhangs, so cute! ! Also, the author writes it very well👌🏻! ! ! ! ! The writing is really, really good! ! ! ! ! I like it so much 😍

Oh my gosh, this is the first time I have seen someone discussing (including the original work and fan fiction) the Zhang family as monsters, and the Zhang family as part of the monster's body but also human at the same time. Even the Zhang family who have special abilities that are different from ordinary people will have their own fears and attachments to face. How can people use a symbol to refer to them? (Thank you to the author for letting me taste the miracle. Even when I watched it in the early morning, I felt that the holy light emerged as Hallelujah.

My God, my evaluation is to write more quickly. It is recommended on the Internet. I can update it and attract more people when the time comes. This article is really wonderful. The protagonist is simply a natural leader. The succubus spiritual mentor of the Zhang family. My God, my God. My God, I succumbed to his charm.

He heard his sighs and saw his tears. This is so well written, both father and son.

This is a fanfic, but it's not just a fanfic. Although the author has only made the beginning, he tells a story that belongs to the author based on the original setting. Just as Shan Yue Ji deconstructs the story of Li Zheng in the Tang Dynasty, the author also structures the Zhang family in his own way. Some people will smile at fluffy sweet articles, and some will shed tears at sadistic articles, but no matter what they like are sweet articles and sadistic articles, they will not sneer at the main text. This article does have the potential to be a main article, if it doesn't fall apart later (

If you want to read a psychological growth article, this one will suit you very well. The writing is really good. . The mind-blowing writing makes it easy for people to immerse themselves in and empathize with "The heart is in the same frequency, and the beating blood allows me to share emotions with you, fear, joy, sticky suffocation and almost innocent enthusiasm." Teacher should often read psychological description books or Russian literature (?) I feel that psychological description is very similar but more straightforward. People who read it feel so happy [crazy] [love] I can't help but follow up on the review, it's been five times. I hope the teacher will get out of the environment without internet as soon as possible and update more [crying] [love]

It looks good. Although there are few chapters so far, the character design has been basically established. I look forward to the next development.

Nice! ! Brother Jade has already begun to show his true nature as a succubus, and I'm already in love with him anyway! ! Teacher, I will always wait for you. . 😭

Read the beginning, it's super good, I'll keep it on my bookshelf for now. I'll stock it up and read it later. I'll review it later.

The writing is quite good, and the emotions are handled very delicately, but there are too few of them. Please give it a try first [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's so well written. It's so good. It's really, really good. It's so good. It's so good. It's so good. Oh my gosh, I haven't seen an article that depicts the characters in such a three-dimensional way for a long time. Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, it's so true🐮 Totally in love with brother

It can be seen that the author is very talented and the writing style is very good, and the protagonist's image is very real and vivid. The names of each chapter are very charming. Every time I see the chapter name, I feel like I am opening a blind box. It is super interesting! ! I hope the author will keep updating

It's beautiful. The author's writing style is very delicate. I feel like I have to wait for many chapters to write about my brother growing up. I recommend it.

So well written, Goddess

It's so difficult to deal with internal and external troubles. Sometimes I really wish he could be slower, but I'm also worried that if he's slower he'll be killed.

Great author, you are the god of writing about my brother and the Zhang family! Love you! !

Wow, this is the first time I've seen such a well-written story about tomb robbing. It's my first time! Thanks to the author for clearing up the name of the Zhang family! How could a family that has been passed down for thousands of years be so dumb and stupid? Wow, I have written about tomb robbing for so many years, and I have read all the derivatives about tomb robbing. This is the first time that I have been deeply moved by it. It is so well written that I can't bear to skip the chapter. I have read it for the second time, but there are too few wives [laughing and crying]