Immortality: a Mortal's Story of Becoming an Immortal

The first story of Fellow Daoist is very well written and exciting, with the world view, prop levels, and sense of crisis all in place. The ancestor needs to make adjustments in the future. 1. The layman's technique is too strong. 2. The Qi training period for the third level and the eighth level are similar? 3. For the six spiritual roots, you should slowly climb up layer by layer, so as to be solid. It is recommended to depict the conspiracies of several countries several times. If your cultivation level is different, you can arrange more magic weapons, talismans, talismans, and elixirs. Personal suggestion [top post], the first story is really wonderful. Tragic encounter - sister miserable - encounter the conspiracy of the immortal cultivator - sister goes to the immortal gate reverse - gets the gourd reverse - enters the escort agency reverse - accidentally rescues the princess reverse - master's tenderness - layman master reverse - a spy thinks it's a crisis to quit - immortal cultivator attacks reverse - master dies reverse - talisman reverse thinks he can survive the crisis - all-death reverse - escapes - strong enemy chases him and dies again - Chen family disciples rescue him - thinking the Chen family is safe. The first story is wonderful!

The writing is pretty good, much better than the fairy tales I read before.

Okay, okay, can you add some emotional scenes? Update quickly [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Not many people are watching! This book is very in line with my taste. The author's writing style is good. I hope the author will write well and don't be disappointed. The writing is very good! Regardless of the plot or the characterization, this book is very interesting. How come so few people have read it?

It's okay to write a good book slowly and carefully, mainly because of the logic. There are a lot of treasure-delivery brigades in novels about cultivating immortals, and there are less cliché plots like the ones above. If you write too fast and there are no human accidents, it will be a refreshing essay to cultivate immortality. I've had enough reading "Shuang Wen Xiu Xian" for a while. A little personal advice.

The plot has ups and downs and attracts people. The novel is well written. Come on.

It's great. It's a book with three correct views. It's like cultivating an immortal. It's a hundred times better than those popular leftover articles. I hope the author will stick to it. In addition, please make sure there are more exciting plots and less sad ones. After all, reading articles about cultivating immortals is to relax your mind.

I have seen more than 30 pieces, and I feel pretty good so far. I don't know what will happen in the future. It is a rare high-quality novel on Tomato, 👍👍

A rare good book, I hope it will become a classic.

Looks interesting

So far it looks okay

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The writing is okay. Because my cultural level is too low, I don't have more comments. I think it's okay.

This book is better than many novels about cultivating immortals. The plot is reasonable and the plot is good. In fact, today's novels just need to write good plots. There's no need to make any weird settings to attract attention.

It's a bit similar to "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". I really like the protagonist's cautiousness, not brainlessness, and growth type.

After reading a few chapters, I feel very satisfied. The author's writing is smooth and some language details are very well written. Come on, author.

I've read too many cool novels, but this kind of fairy tale novel written in great detail is quite interesting. The details of the characters are well drawn, especially the details about cultivating immortality.

It's a slow-heating type, not the kind that will blow you up right away. I like it! I hope the author can carefully elaborate on the plot in the future and try not to miss any holes! The important thing is not to be a eunuch I've reached chapter 78, and the author has not let me down. The character of Qiaodie has been created very successfully, but it's time to go offline. After all, in Xianxia novels, the death of a female character who has an entanglement with the protagonist is not really dead [laughs][laughs], so I can only say that it is temporarily offline [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

You can see it, it's very real and very immersive! To be honest, I have read a lot of books on the Tomato recommendation list, and in terms of the description of Xianxia writing, this one is pretty good.

Not bad, not bad, the subject matter is novel, it's like witnessing a miracle happening. The author keeps working hard💪Looking forward to the follow-up...

I only heard a few paragraphs: It is a very good book: five stars... I hope the author can work hard: if he can write this book, it will become a masterpiece on cultivating immortals [Like] Fellow book fans, please give me five stars [OK]

It's interesting, the ideas are clear; the characters are reasonable and eloquent; the description of the realm is very good.

A nice book

The content is good and worth reading

It looks pretty good so far

Not bad ah ah

Good

I like the protagonist who is affectionate and righteous, but I wish there were fewer women.

I just watched it and I think it's okay. I'll keep checking to see if there will be any surprises later.

It's okay. It's okay to kill time. I can continue reading. The story, writing style, thinking logic, and characters are all better than ordinary fairy tales.