Be Immortal and Bravely Venture into the World of Ghost Stories

It's okay. There are no bad points in the logic of the plot, and the protagonist is decisive in killing. But the protagonist is in crisis two or three times a day, and he really can't handle it. Normal people are in so many dangers every day. Apart from this, everything else is fine. Moreover, the author will also provide pictures for some characters. He is a good author who can illustrate pictures.

The author writes well, but there are too few updates and too few chapters. It will take at least 100 chapters to become popular. Unexpectedly, I read it wrongly, and the author turned out to be so powerful! I don't know what I think, but you should write cool articles. For the first book, you should be a little more happy first. You can finish it in two to three hundred chapters, and you can also accumulate popularity for the follow-up.

The story is good, but the interactions between the characters are a bit rigid and lack liveliness. This is an AI book, but the story is okay, but the characters are very rigid and have no spirituality, as if actors with no acting skills insist on performing, and they are all expressed in the same way.

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(Moreover, what we are experiencing is only a second-level man-made disaster. If we encounter a higher-level man-made disaster, the consequences will be unimaginable and may even plunge the entire country into a crisis of destruction). This is a screen in the book to prove that the protagonist is a good person. As we all know, the protagonist of this book is a good person who loves his country and his people. He is not from this world, and has been framed by people in this world. He cannot hide him. He is a good person who loves a country in another world. Although he kills a lot, he cannot hide the fact that he is a good person. Although his predecessor killed more than 100 people and awakened his power, he is not him after all.

It's very interesting. As an old bookworm, this is still a relatively new subject. I am very optimistic about you as the author. Come on! ! !

It looks good, and the subject matter feels quite novel. It enhances its strength by devouring grotesques and man-made disasters. The foreshadowing is also buried. Why did the protagonist travel to this parallel world? And what will happen when you save Father Rococo at level 4? Now that I've seen the Crow Man part, it's pretty cool. The protagonist gains more abilities and strength through killing enemies, and progresses step by step. Thank you to the author for writing! Very well written

I've read Chapter 45 so far, and I feel it's pretty good.

It feels pretty good-looking

IQ is higher than that of primary school students [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Time travel is not only about wearing clothes, but also about soul time traveling. [Face covering][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

God, God, it's so cool

Very nice. You can read on

Not bad, you can take a look

Haokan, please leave a comment for the author

It's nice and long-lasting, I want to watch it [I understand]

It's okay, not dragging

Good-looking, good-looking, I feel like I have seen [what] somewhere It should be more like the book "Why is there so much trouble here in the apocalypse of weird things"?

Everything is fine, madam, too short

I think this book is pretty good

Get a good look. How can there be so few people?

Putting aside the poisonous points, this is a good book

Everything else is very good. The only pity is that the relationship between superpowers and superpowers has not been properly handled. As the superpowers become more abundant, the problem will become more and more serious.

This book is good, but the ending is too fast.

It's really nice, but I don't know why the score is so low.

Not bad, good looking, five-star praise

It's okay. The themes, plot, and characters are relatively weak, and there's a lot of room for improvement. Giving four stars means that the author is also a newbie with his writing style. I'd like to give him more encouragement.

Not bad, very pretty, but not enough

It's pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. I really like this type of book. Do you have any recommendations?

One: Very cool, two: practice writing, write like a running account, three cool writing + practice writing