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The first plane actually felt like it was well written, and I could barely read it. The second plane felt like a different author. It was very well written, but the desire to read it was very strong. I hope the author can also have he in the smaller plane.

Although it is a fast time travel, and although only the first world has been written so far, it is much better than most of Tomato's fast time travel stories, including the time travel stories. There are no overly pretentious words, and there are no random piles of words that look advanced but are actually redundant. The characters are fully developed. It meets the basic requirements of a fast-travel novel, and is even more fleshed-out than some non-quick-travel novels. The characters are stable, the plot is appropriately detailed, the rhythm is tight, there are no unnecessary shots, and there is no showy writing, but the emotions between the lines are enough to make people relate and empathize. Moreover, the length of the communication with the system is just right, so that it will not be customer-focused and will not be ignored. I hope it can continue to maintain this level in the future and look forward to the stories of the next world.

Okay, the main character is well portrayed, but the first world is a little bit weird. What can I say? The eldest son is really good in the later period. I don't understand Gu Ershao and the Su family. Neither of them feels like the protagonist, especially Gu Er. Even after kissing him, I don't feel how much he likes her. The protagonist and Gu Yichen are okay.

It's nice to watch, the first world was a little rushed, but the second world has a much better storyline and more detailed characterization. I don't know why the rating is a bit low, but it should increase in the future. Please keep writing better.

Very good, the saturation of the characters is very high, Xiaoye is the kind of gentle, generous, cheerful, playful, optimistic and clean character. The writing and plot are very good. There is no industrial saccharine and bloody knives, only the kind of light tenderness and the quiet slowness of the years. It is a very good Shura field, and Mary will not be caught in a bloody way. Su, it's not because of the protagonist's appearance that I fell in love at first sight, but because the protagonist was attracted by his own personality charm and fell in love with her in the end. The protagonists are really good, sweet and a little sad, just like photos from the old days, sweet and warm with a little sadness. The author strongly believes that you will be popular! It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality article, book friends, it's absolutely great! Dada is really good-looking, but they are all very good babies. Everyone is nice, and the writing is also good. I want to cry. Can I stop being in the next world? I really can't bear the two worlds of being [crying]

It's really beautiful. I cried from the middle to the end of the first world [almost crying]. Although they are all small worlds of BE, could the author be kinder to Xiaoye and not just to complete the task and not care about himself? I felt really distressed watching it [crying]

It's good to watch. The second one is good to watch. The appearance rate of the white lotus character in the first one is too high. It looks annoying. I don't really like the white lotus villain fighting with the protagonist. It's just disgusting. I personally think the second one is much better looking! It's just that age passes too quickly. I thought I could start writing from the age of 15, but I didn't expect that it would go directly to the stage of 18 [laughing and crying]. I think fifteen is a very, very juvenile age. You can also act coquettishly and pull off the world without feeling out of place. However, as a The author's writing is also very nice [laughs] I hope that the later dimensions will be like the second book, with not so many villains with the image of "White Lotus Villain". I feel that it has no effect except disgusting the protagonist. Yes, the most enjoyable thing is when the protagonist is not wronged, and the protagonist controls [Cool] It's good to watch. The zombies should be over soon. It's not too cruel yet. It's okay. I don't like to read the apocalyptic genre, but the author's writing is really good! ! !

In this era where cannon fodder can travel quickly, this book also stipulates the logic with a setting similar to that of a "passive heartthrob". Zhuochuan is neither an accessory in love nor a social animal with the kind of messed up life he has now. Ye Zhuochuan: The main character has redefined the halo of the protagonist with his cannon fodder character who works diligently to follow the plot. He does not refuse the favor of others, is not responsible for emotional entanglements (straight men are really slow to treat emotions), and dies in a low-key manner at the end of the character's existence. There is no quick-travel version of Goldfinger. From the beginning, he is just like an NPC with no outstanding abilities. He is not very self-aware of his good appearance, which makes him the "center of the storm" in every world. The most ironic thing is that the more he wants to be a cannon fodder and a nameless passerby who can safely be the villain/protagonist, the more the plot lines are attached to him, which perfectly explains the true meaning of the title of the second half of the book~ This kind of figure that often gives many people a white moonlight after death, although it is really not novel, it really makes people love and love it.

I only saw the end of the third dimension but I really couldn't hold it in anymore! ! Author, you are really good at writing sweet, sour and pure love! ! ! The emotional line and plot are both very well written. I haven't read such a fast-paced novel in a long time! Author, will you continue to write dual male protagonists? I really want to follow you! ! ! ! ! Then I want to say don't read the comment section when reading the article. I'm really angry! I think there is nothing wrong with the author's plot and character design. Even if there are small flaws, they will be picked out by netizens who don't know what they are thinking and amplified to vent their grievances. I am really angry! ! I want to become the author's big 🐶 and bite the bullets of these bad guys... 😡😡 All in all, your writing is really, really good. I really like reading it! ! ! 😭😭😭If I can see the author write a new two-male novel in my lifetime, I will continue to follow it! ! ! I really like the character design of Nan Qiao in the third chapter. TT author, why are you so cruel? I read it so well at night that I almost died. How could you write it so well? . . . I cried while reading the ending of every world. The author is so cruel, My Little Couple 55555. . . 😭😭😭But the writing is really, really good and I recommend everyone to read it😭😭😭I feel so uncomfortable that the author needs to write a new article to coax it out. . . (By the way, I would also like to say that those who don't like Small World BE are not allowed to give low scores to the author simply because it is BE! If you dare to give low scores and scold the author casually, I will beat you!) Part 3: I woke up and I have to praise: I really like the type of fast traveler who just uses his health and life as consumables because he has cheats! I have always found this delicious feeling with a slight sense of alienation and self-destruction! It's rare to see a book that matches my xp so well. I'm really happy! 😋😋😋 Maybe some people can't understand why the protagonist's condition is so serious and he doesn't cherish his body, but wouldn't it be cool to take a closer look at the protagonist's perspective? ! Don't worry, I'm a nun from the underworld, I'll be happy first😋😋😋

Super, super, super, super, super, super good-looking! It's really awesome! Every story is great! And the ending is also very good. Although it is a be, it is really emotional! Every character is very emotional and the writing is very delicate! I almost cried at the ending of each small world [crying] It's really sad [crying] and I also like Chuanchuan very much [crying] I just can't do more for you, but if you are tired, I won't rush for it [salute] Dada is really awesome! ! ! [Cry]

It's so beautiful, Chuan Chuan is really cute. [][][] The love story is not abrupt at all, it's very natural. Chuan Chuan is not a weak type, he is still very strong. 88 Little System is also cute and not particularly stupid. Everyone is very nice. You can watch it with confidence, there is no sub-CP, no weak feelings, no torture, no stupid people, 1V1, enter the small world naturally, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

I've just finished reading the first chapter, it's really good! Xiaochuan is lively and cute [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. Gu Yichen really dotes on Xiaochuan, which I think is very sweet. But later on when Ogawa left his face, I almost cried [crying]. The writing is very good, highly recommended! ! !

It's as good as watching it, it's as good as watching it, I like this kind of sweet yet sadistic thing. It makes me feel so itchy that I can't stand it. I just take up the knife and turn it into a little girl to repair my front teeth.

Kawakawa has a very good personality, and has an optimistic sense of humor. He is really a very good person. When I came out ww, I found that the copywriting was marked "Small World be". Damn it. I kind of hope that Kawakawa can die happily in the small world. TvT

It's very beautiful. I know that every world is a death escape, but I still can't help but want to watch it. Oh, it's so attractive, and the death escape is so deathly escape. I cry to death. Even though I know it's okay, I still can't help it. [Cry][cry][cry]

I wanted to give 3.5 Stars to the first world, but after watching it, I felt that the overall pace was slow and very loose. Some plots felt superfluous and verbose. There was no tension in the climax at the end, and there was no feeling of sadness even after being shot and killed. This page is longer than the average Kuai Chuan novel, but the emotional line is not very delicate. The interactions between the several slices of Gong and Shou are not blushing and heart-pounding. For example, in the middle, the real young master kisses Shou. To be honest, I can't stop smoking [crying]. The characters of several Gong are not very three-dimensional. The most memorable thing about the whole story is Shou's love to eat [face covering]. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the second world! Well, I found that the style of this novel doesn't match my style [face covering] After reading a few chapters of the second world, I couldn't get into the first world. However, the second world was well received in the comment section. I was originally full of expectations, but after reading it, I felt so disappointed [crying] The overall feeling of this novel to me is that it is bland, whether it is the plot line or the emotional line, in short, I read it without passion, but I don't mean to say that the writing is bad, it's just that I have no fate with this novel [Blow kiss]

I am currently the only fast travel novel that I have read and found that there are very few chapters. I really, really like it! I really like this kind of writing that has a high degree of freedom in plotting, and I also like Kawakawa's character, who is cute and cute but also a bit naturally flirtatious. I really like the setting of Showa and Kawakawa. Except for the first world where I was a bit disgusted with the Bai Lian Shou, the other worlds are very attractive and I can't help but watch it. The world of cultivating immortals broke my understanding of the world of cultivating immortals in the quick travel text, and instead became one of my favorite worlds (Shizun Gong is very good). The author not only writes a smooth and logical plot, but the writing style is also super good. Coupled with the death escape literature, the buffs are greatly increased, and it has quickly become the top fast-traveling novel in my heart since I downloaded Yangshizi. It is also the only fast-traveling novel that I have not fully enjoyed after reading it. In short, it is very special. It's not good. (Can anyone recommend me similar plot freedom and character settings? Otherwise, I will burst into tears. This book is really about to pass through Wenbai Moonlight.) Boss, why are you so good at writing? I am so sad that I couldn't bear to finish the last world. I only opened this audiobook when I was working... I have to praise the dubbing of this book, especially Kawakawa's! Super nice! Whether it's the tone or the fit to the character, it really fits the imaginary voice. It's as if there is a natural tone of voice when someone does something (I don't know how to put it, but it means it fits very well). So most of the time I spend reading is listening to books (if there are books with similar good dubbing, please recommend them to me from the bosses who pass by. May the God of Wealth protect you forever)

Damn, cannon fodder doesn't feel like a girl, neither coy nor pretentious Through worlds one by one, the cannon fodder slowly discovers his own feelings (although there are other reasons), but this happens to be the gradual progression of feelings (it feels like he discovered that others like him, but did not continue to develop despite certain concerns, and it happened to be the point of the plot where the cannon fodder is used) One of the best books so far. I can't find anything similar to this one. Regardless of the hidden plot, this one is very consistent with the normal point of view, step by step, unlike other ones that just come up straight away. It's worth tasting, keep going!

😌It can be considered as mediocre as I have seen in the fast-traveling articles. Maybe it's because Kawakawa is also a bit bland? But I quite like this, eh, even though I should have cried, I still cried. In the first world, it can be seen that the writing is not very smooth yet, but after that, I probably got better at clarifying it. I just finished reading it in one go, but I didn't expect that I didn't collect all the pieces until the end, but that's okay. 😌As written in the book, they still have almost unlimited time to accompany each other to slowly complete this matter. Ah, it looks so good but feels ordinary. I haven't felt this way for a long time.

Very nice! I feel like this is my favorite heartthrob book I have ever read on Tomato. The protagonist is not too soft and cute, he is very cute and likable. Every world has a good ending, just this death escape! Te Wudi likes this kind of small world with an ending, and the people who like the protagonist are not scumbags. They are all very, very good to the protagonist. That's great. I order everyone to like the protagonist! Who wouldn't love such a wonderful baby! The only flaw is that the last part of the book is a bit boring. I usually find other books boring and just stop reading them. But the setting is really interesting, and I really want to know what happened in the village, so I insisted on reading it () the whole story is very interesting! I like the world of zombies the most, and I was really touched when I saw the ending... Although I know that the protagonist understands that he must die, and the mission requires it, so he devotes himself to science, I still felt tears in my eyes after watching it. Very good little baby, I would recommend everyone to watch it!

It's very beautiful. The emotions of the two babies are very delicate. Wow, our Chuan Chuan is so cute and cute, and the main god is really gentle. Please stay together. [Crying] [Crying] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's good-looking, but not romantic. Like a career novel, sometimes I feel that the protagonist is just doing the task and cannot feel the pain of a normal person leaving the world. The protagonist has seen two worlds so far, which means that one protagonist and one world have two fragments. I hope there is more sweetness in the love. Otherwise, it is no different from family affection.

Good looking! Good looking! Good looking! Say important things three times [blowing kiss] From my personal point of view, I really like the small world of the end of the world and the cultivation of immortality. The other small worlds are also very beautifully written. The whole article can be read smoothly, which makes me feel that it is not a loss to invest in it. Ye Zhuochuan, the most adorable creature with the best natural tone, this article is very different from other system quick travel articles, Yan Zhaohe The past events of 018 made me feel that the characters have their own story lines, and are not restricted to a fixed range, and are very equal. I am very happy to see such an article that pokes my XP. The author writes very well, keep up the good work, everyone can also try to take a look, I think it is very interesting [Top post][Top post][Top post]

Wuwuwu is really beautiful. Every world gives me the feeling that it is very beautiful. It makes people want to keep watching, and then when I look at it, I realize, eh, how come I finished it all of a sudden. Ogawa is also a very gentle and kind person, which can be seen from the things he does in every world. The offline writing is also very natural [love] Our small system is also very, very good^-^ The extra chapters of each world also made my heart warm. Although there are only a few chapters in each world, there is a feeling of "family reunion". Everyone saw that Xiaochuan also had no regrets. Everyone feels like they got what they wanted. Everyone, Xiaochuan and Yanzhao must always be happy!

It is a relatively gentle book. My interest started with multiple slices, a rare pattern in fast-traveling articles. I thought that there was meat to eat in every world, and the fast pace of the story was always fast, but later I found out that it was taking my time little by little. I thought there were still several small worlds when I saw it later, but I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it, this is the end [crazy] But at least I have returned, but there are still so few [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] Interesting article, I suggest you listen to the real person recording [learned] to feel, but there are two sentences with wrong voices, really only two sentences haha. Finally, I hope Chuanchuan and Yan Zhao will live long [sending my heart] The author is in good health [sending my heart]

I feel that every teacher in the world writes well ꒪ˊ꒳ˋ꒪. Kawakawa always gives people a warm feeling. I have read many similar ones and this one is the best. The author will update it soon.

It's really beautiful. Our Xiaochuan is a brave and sincere little sun. He is a good baby! ! ! It's rare to see such heartwarming articles on Tomato. I feel warm when I see my body. The plot is also very smooth, and you can really see the gentle and powerful heart of the protagonist, who is the most passionate and clear soul that belongs to young people. Is the author a big day 10 better? [Cry][cry][cry]

I like you, I like you, I like you [sending heart] Look! Hauke! Haowen! After seeing so many double men, this is the first time that they suit my taste so well! ! Come on, author. Come on. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very interesting. Except for the one about Ah Piao, which I didn't read (I'm a bit timid), I like the others [send heart][send heart][send heart], the writing is very delicate. Kawakawa Kazaki is simply a match made in heaven [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Highly recommended [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating😳Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘 It is God, it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I cried From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😊 is the alarm clock of vegetative people 😭 so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😚 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist. I am so good that my tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.