Transmigrate into a Book: The Sickly Master Is Forced to Train the Ice-Cold Empress

Then I will give a review. Anyway, I quite like reading it. The author's writing style is very good. The sentence "The gurgling water of Luo River reflects the way of heaven, and the bright light shines on all spirits" is very refreshing. My Immortal Emperor Luo Yue's strength is so good. Chu Qingyin's clothes are clear and her voice is clear. Chu Qingyin's appearance is just right. And this feeling of being forced to be trained is my favorite. I like the feeling of Empress Xiao Luoyue being tortured by the protagonist after pretending. Hahaha, everyone has their own preferences. Those who like it will naturally like it, and those who don't will not be able to watch it. That's it. I thought the author was just writing for fun, but I was wrong! Some places really have deep meanings, the author is amazing👍 Excerpt from the original text: It turns out that under the beautiful red rose, there is a white rose that is being soaked in blood.

We don't pretend, we have something to say: "The author's writing style is unquestionable. It's good. I don't want to brag about it, but the overall structure and thinking of the article are fine." However, there are a few points: 1. The biggest poisonous point of this book is the system. What the readers of this book read is not the system. If you write like this, your original plot can be promoted and some readers who are too extreme can be left behind. I just came over here. There are many types of readers on Tomato, those who write about strong women, those who write about cool things, and those who write about abuse. As for you, the other two first, readers who only write about cool articles will definitely not be able to accept articles like yours. You will have to lose at least several thousand people. This is a bad phenomenon for your traffic. You can change the system, and it will not affect your plot. 2. It can be seen from the character of the protagonist in the article that he is completely pressured by the system to follow the plot. However, have you ever thought that the protagonist revealed in your book is more voluntary, and he also hopes to follow that plot, and does not mean that he is required by the system to do so. It is like doing something that you have low self-esteem, but someone else said that and forced you to do it. Do you still have that initial mood? 3. And after the protagonist's darkening, if the system is changed to equal treatment, it will have no impact on the subsequent plot. So what role does your system at the beginning play? "Will it wipe out some readers of Shuangwen?" Finally - what I want to say is that when you are just starting out, you should be more understanding and humble. From reading your comments, I can roughly tell what is going on in your heart. Your mood is too extreme and can easily be triggered. Maybe it is just a random question raised by a netizen, and you will respond angrily. But this is the most taboo thing about online articles. "At this point, you may think that I am talking nonsense, but that is not the case. On this platform, there is a book about strong women with a score of 9.2. In the past few months, the traffic of that book was normal and rising. However, there were several problems with the article, but many readers did not say it. Because of this, one or two readers spoke out, and the language was a bit irritable. The author became anxious. , With nearly 10,000 words in three chapters, it was full of scolding readers, scolding every reader who is reading. But now I read it again, and the number of readers has dropped from more than 90,000 to more than 10,000 now, and the rating has also dropped from 9.2 To 6.9. The traffic must be gone. The purpose of what I said is to take a warning from you. Your book is good and your writing is good, but your emotions are a bit too extreme. The book is good. I suggest you change the system. Your system at the beginning has already discouraged a large number of people who read Shuangwen.

I think it's quite interesting. In fact, the male protagonist in the early stage is not weak. The strength given by the setting is that the male protagonist is already a half-step golden immortal, invincible in the seven realms. Moreover, the author meant to write about a loser who cannot control this kind of strength. It is normal. Then he slowly grows up and experiences the betrayal of the female protagonist and enters the invincible mode. I think it was probably due to pressure from readers that I gave him Invincible. Moreover, after Invincible, he was pretty good. He was cold and completely integrated with the original character. He was a demon with warmth. I quite like this. Everyone has their own preferences, so I support the author! ! !

I can't comment on it. I started watching it directly when the male protagonist was reincarnated into the demon world. It seems very enjoyable so far, the pace is very fast, and the male protagonist's cultivation level has improved very quickly, like an invincible novel. But it's not yet time for the male protagonist to train the female empress, so it's hard to comment, so continue to observe. Hmm... I didn't expect that the apprentice just became a maid, and there was no process or daily service. Moreover, if the male protagonist still has hope for his apprentice, he should give priority to knowing the truth behind the apprentice's actions. However, the male protagonist ignored it and agreed to forgive his apprentice and become his apprentice again. It looks like the male protagonist is invincible, but he is soft-hearted and a bit intellectual, and there is no training content. ... A little speechless, inexplicable. If you can accept it, the protagonist almost unconditionally trusts the heroine, and it only takes one chapter to go from being estranged to the heroine, and the hero is inexplicably facing a life and death crisis. There is no sweetness, no cultivation, and no training, then you can watch it. The rating truly reflects the quality of the book.

The author quickly gave me a heart-warming [sending heart] This book feels very good, come on [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] In order to avoid me looking for a long time to read, the author must take good care of this book 😄😄😄 The author doesn't need to care about other people's opinions. I think having a single heroine is pretty good. There's nothing wrong with being single-minded. [Sending my heart] Come on, author [Sending my heart]

It's quite good-looking. It comes from the original Little Black Room. It feels a bit like Hehuanzong, hahaha, but it's not the same. The protagonist really has an unrivaled family throne. Hahaha, it's cool.

Mo Li is accepted as a subordinate, I'm so worried

I support the author. I have read so many Tomato novels. This is the first one that makes the male protagonist look like a modern person. Other novels are simply unbelievable. An ordinary person before time travel will kill everyone he sees after time travel without any psychological burden. He writes all kinds of female protagonists like licking dogs. I really can't stand it. I hope the author can finish it.

Yes, more than 40 chapters can be considered as entering the main plot. Such a change is not abrupt, and the connection from the front is also very good. The first forty chapters are also very interesting. Unlike some books that have too much foreshadowing and are not interesting enough to keep people interested, it can be said that it will be a very good book. Also, author, since this is a single woman, is it Xiao 🍉

After getting through the early stage, chapter 45 is the beginning. I recommend reading it.