As Soon as I Became a Magical Girl, My Brother Made a Comeback

A very excellent work, with compact content, exciting plot, and vivid characters. Each character is quite unique. The most important thing is the excellent writing style. Every turning point of the plot is well prepared and logically rigorous.

Changes to a hundred, the writing style is excellent → The writing style is excellent, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. It can be said that the background setting and story creation are impeccable, and the original plot is also interlocking. The only pity is that there is almost no description of the female body of the girl in the magical girl novel, and there is almost no description of women's clothing. What a pity, this is the characteristic of the transformation novel! The same routine, the male magical girl retires due to some reasons, which involves an unknown plot knife, the younger sister also becomes a magical girl, the older brother cannot come back, and the price is a permanent female body. Then, a huge world view is outlined through memories and descriptions of bonds with former partners. It's well written, but it's really a pity to stop updating it, tsk tsk.

The pace is fast, the writing is fluent, vigorous, unobtrusive, and does things neatly and neatly. The emotional lines are blurred and unclear. It's been a long time since I read a book that made me happy. I hope the author will keep updating, not asking for more but seeking quality.

How embarrassing, why is no one embarrassed? The author's writing style is very good, the handling of details is very strong, and the plot setting is also very good, which will make you feel happy from time to time. The foreshadowing of the plot is a bit long, but there is no useless plot. It is really satisfying to watch the emotions suppressed in the foreshadowing and then explode later.

Come on, author, seamlessly switch between girlish heart and passion. The character growth line is amazing, with warm daily life and mysterious foreshadowing. The more you read, the more you will get hooked! You will not lose money if you invest in the stock. Magical girl-themed fans rush to invest.

Oh my God, this tension is so strong, so strong, I have pictures in my mind. Also, some places are really a bit curious... Tomato may really need to open a novelty hunting area.

The selection of the subject matter is quite innovative, the characters are currently well created, and the content description is also well combined with the subject matter. I personally think this book is a relatively good product among Red Persimmons. The narrative and content are quite tense.

I have been chasing it, and I dare to read it every day. After so long, I realized that I forgot to review the book. When I first read this book, I was looking for a magical girl-themed book. At that time, I remembered that this book had just been updated. The plot has always been good, and I have not found any bad points for the time being. Keep up the good work

Lord Nightingale must use your invincible power to crush all the knives and teeth [punch attack]

Laumann! In fact, this is a work of mourning, but the plot is obviously different from other styles except for the beginning. The protagonist is a bit biased, and he/she is a pure and emotional chef man/woman, not a lonely king and a cold god. It should be whitewashed in the later stage, which is a little different from other dark or upright Mandalas. [Thinking] Five stars encourage you to keep up the good work, and I wish everyone who truly loves Mandala to understand and depict the different colors of the world.

Can the author tell me if it's he or be? (I can't accept it when I see be) (I'm very sorry, but I feel really uncomfortable when I see be) (I'm very sorry) (please ignore if I'm presumptuous)

The emotions are very delicate, and the protagonist's battle is really exciting. It does not stress the combat power at all, and there is not much water in the place, and high-quality food and grass. The emotions of each character are well written, and the rendering style is also good. Big praise, keep going.

It's good to watch. Magical girl plots are so good to watch.

Yes, you can read it and keep it. Don't write badly just to please readers. Only by writing according to your own ideas can you write good works.

I have been looking for this novel for a long time. It is the best novel of the same type that I have ever read. The author should not stop updating.

It seems pretty good so far, but this kind of subject matter is rarely completed, so I hope the author can stick to it to the end.

I'm asking if I've seen it normally and I've seen it too much, so I want to see this kind of thing

It's very interesting, but I hope the author can update it more frequently.

Don't worry about anything else, just support the newcomers first

Very good book, makes my brain spin

This is so pretty, at least I think so

The writer did a great job, keep up the good work!

Be sure to finish it, it's a good [high-quality book, don't fail to recognize it when reviewing it]

As long as it can be updated, it will be fine. 4. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my appetite.

I haven't read much about Magical Girls, but this book really deserves five stars.

The first time I watched the Magical Girl + Lily series

It's beautiful. You, the author, are the best.

The characters, plot, and dialogue tend to be a mixture of Japanese light and special photography; due to space limitations, the relationship between the characters progresses quickly, and it seems that some Japanese-style nonsensical thinking has been added. The overall content is quite interesting, and I look forward to the subsequent plot development.

A truly good book. I don't know how much better it is than other books like Rotten Persimmon that only write about useless cuteness, attract younger groups, or follow the trend and write about yandere. It can also be seen that the author's writing style is constantly improving. Come on

This book is the best transformation text I have read so far. I highly recommend it!