After being born into this world, Ye Qingyu finally learns, when a multifunctional System arrives, that he is actually a Villain!
What’s more, the people around him all seem to be extraordinary...
Through a glimpse of the future provided by the System, Ye Qingyu sees...
“...Huh? This demonic powerhouse who’s carried a coffin for a thousand years is actually my junior brother?”
“...What? This powerhouse who uses the mountains, rivers, and all creation as a formation is actually my junior sister?”
“...Oh? My sword attendant is actually the future Ice Phoenix?”
[Xuanhuan] [Villain] [Not invincible] [Fast-paced] [The System has a low profile] [A fun read]
I feel that the protagonist, the young master of the Ye family, has no character at all. The other young masters of the Immortal Force are all awesome and coaxing when they appear, but no one cares about the protagonist. Even if he is not friendly with the protagonist, no one comes up to say hello. He is just like an unknown person.
From Chapter 1 to Chapter 3, I couldn't tell whether the protagonist's name was male or female.
There is no 13 grid at all, and the description of the family is like a nouveau riche.
The villain doesn't look like a villain
The plot is too exaggerated, too confusing, and there are a lot of children of luck.
It doesn't feel good to say it's a cool novel at all. If it's not a cool novel, the characters in the plot are portrayed in a very brainless and nonsensical way.
A bit stiff to read
There is really no need to write about the Ye family's sequence dispute. For a big family, the system for the sequence dispute is not perfect at all, and they are still doing it very casually. I can't see what the intention is. What are you trying to do, author?
Good luck author 👍