[Behind-the-scenes flow + free-for-all battles + manifestation of the saint in front of people + partial group portraits + cultivating gu + cool writing + counter-routines + difficult-to-guess plot + slightly funny + later passion]
There are thousands of avenues, and all the heavens and realms are attacking each other.
The world where Blue Star is located has also been invaded by other worlds.
At this critical juncture, Ye Yang bound to the traveler chat group, which can release Blue Star people to other worlds, use the resources of other worlds to cultivate powerful combat forces, return to their own world, and resist invasion.
At this point, countless people went to other worlds one after another, some fell into boxes, and some died in foreign lands after suffering, writing poems of blood.
In the end, someone rises against the odds through ruthless means or amazing luck.
This sounded the clarion call for counterattack, and was also the beginning of chaos in the world...
At this point, among all the heavens and worlds...
Someone swallowed the strange fire and became the Emperor Yan.
Some people like to retreat behind the crowd and reach the peak.
Some people become crazy and become demons, feeding on strange things and forgetting about eternity.
Some people use the way of yin and yang to enchant all things and absorb all the yang essence in the world.
There is a figure who is half demon and half Buddha, half crying and half smiling, dragging his broken body on the pilgrimage.
Someone holds an iron fan to welcome wealth from all directions and gather life from all over the world to form his own avenue.
Some people create their own Taoism, suppress the darkness, and span the ages.
There is a big hand who turns the heaven and the earth into chess and plays with the common people in the palm of his hand.
And such great power seems to come from the same force. Some people call them --- time travelers.
(Bottom middle) Green•Advanced (Level 2)/7.0 Points+, mark...
Sense of substitution C, plug-in B, setting B, writing style B, rhythm C, imagination C, character design C, main line D, logic C.
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: The writing is better than the average book, but the book is not attractive and the supporting characters are not impressive at all.
#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(4) Plug-in: cheat settings
(5) Setting: World background, training system...
(6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points.
(6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
See Chapter 24
It's beautiful😄, but it's a pity😔 that I discovered it a little too early
The rare main god creation flow is not poisonous now. However, this track is difficult to write. I wish the author will get better as he writes more.
The more I write, the more poisonous it becomes.
I finally opened an interesting book. Although it is a bit similar to the previous chat group book, new people in the group tend to get bored easily. I just don't know if there will be any cheats.
This book is very novel, and the protagonist is relatively decisive. He won't feel sorry for someone's death. Although there are only ten chapters at the moment, it is very to my liking [laughs evilly]. The only thing I want to say is that the author can change the cover to make it a little cooler.
The author is great, I haven't read the book for a few days, and the name of the protagonist has changed [what] [what] [what]. And Chen Jun, who traveled to the same world as the protagonist, wasn't he killed by Qu Ze? [Shocked][shocked][shocked]
The protagonist is too much controlled by the system, and the protagonist's mentality changes too quickly. There is too much foreshadowing in the previous chapter, which prevents many people from persisting. The most important thing is that the protagonist has too little freedom, not enough preparation for the change of mentality, and insufficient foreshadowing of the plot progress. However, the author's imagination and close-ups of environmental characters are very good, and the writing style is also acceptable. The universe is a chessboard, and all living beings play chess. The overall evaluation is recommended to watch. If you don't like group portraits, the category Infinite Streaming , dark, desperate and apocalyptic genre, not recommended to watch
I think this is pretty good, the characters are well developed. The plot is also very exciting and not too draggy. The most important thing is that the subject matter is novel and eye-catching. The world view is also quite large. But I don't know why there are so few ratings. Come on, the author doesn't have any bad points at the moment.
I read the author from the previous book. I also listened to your advice and started to cultivate myself. Your book is very good at first, please keep writing. I believe it will get better.
It feels good, but these time-travelers died too suddenly. I thought I could survive until the end, but my brother invaded Quanga twice. Although it was to highlight the power of the other world, the invasion was too fast, and the time-travelers had no time to grow.
Simulator: I Have Become a Loophole in Heaven!
After Simulating Hundreds of Millions of Years, My Daughter Turned Out to Be a Peerless Empress!
The Opening Entry Has Ninety Draws in a Row, Can I Still Draw in the Simulation?
Digging Out My Bones, I Won't Go Too Far If I Destroy Your Entire Clan!
After 100,000 Simulations, I’m Invincible Across Past, Present, and Future
(Bottom middle) Green•Advanced (Level 2)/7.0 Points+, mark... Sense of substitution C, plug-in B, setting B, writing style B, rhythm C, imagination C, character design C, main line D, logic C. Extra points: none Personal feelings: The writing is better than the average book, but the book is not attractive and the supporting characters are not impressive at all. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words See Chapter 24
It's beautiful😄, but it's a pity😔 that I discovered it a little too early
The rare main god creation flow is not poisonous now. However, this track is difficult to write. I wish the author will get better as he writes more. The more I write, the more poisonous it becomes.
I finally opened an interesting book. Although it is a bit similar to the previous chat group book, new people in the group tend to get bored easily. I just don't know if there will be any cheats.
This book is very novel, and the protagonist is relatively decisive. He won't feel sorry for someone's death. Although there are only ten chapters at the moment, it is very to my liking [laughs evilly]. The only thing I want to say is that the author can change the cover to make it a little cooler.
The author is great, I haven't read the book for a few days, and the name of the protagonist has changed [what] [what] [what]. And Chen Jun, who traveled to the same world as the protagonist, wasn't he killed by Qu Ze? [Shocked][shocked][shocked]
The protagonist is too much controlled by the system, and the protagonist's mentality changes too quickly. There is too much foreshadowing in the previous chapter, which prevents many people from persisting. The most important thing is that the protagonist has too little freedom, not enough preparation for the change of mentality, and insufficient foreshadowing of the plot progress. However, the author's imagination and close-ups of environmental characters are very good, and the writing style is also acceptable. The universe is a chessboard, and all living beings play chess. The overall evaluation is recommended to watch. If you don't like group portraits, the category Infinite Streaming , dark, desperate and apocalyptic genre, not recommended to watch
I think this is pretty good, the characters are well developed. The plot is also very exciting and not too draggy. The most important thing is that the subject matter is novel and eye-catching. The world view is also quite large. But I don't know why there are so few ratings. Come on, the author doesn't have any bad points at the moment.
I read the author from the previous book. I also listened to your advice and started to cultivate myself. Your book is very good at first, please keep writing. I believe it will get better.
It feels good, but these time-travelers died too suddenly. I thought I could survive until the end, but my brother invaded Quanga twice. Although it was to highlight the power of the other world, the invasion was too fast, and the time-travelers had no time to grow.