Konoha Spring

Great, IQ is normal. Positional issue. The force is pretty good. I hope there are multiple female protagonists. Is there any difference between having power and being rich now? I don't believe anyone can't use it

That's right, I think you can take a look at "This navy likes to kill by mistake" is also an uprising in the fandom, but he is more upright and bright, and he is more righteous! I prefer that the times create heroes! Like spring rain moistening things, one thing slowly permeates its own justice to all people. That is truly being held high by the people! I think you might want to write a great, bright, and righteous protagonist, but maybe your entry point is wrong. An ordinary person masters the Sharingan just after time travel, and then has super high fighting qualities. From a reader's perspective, I feel that this is unrealistic. It may take some overstepping, especially when you form a team just after time travel. It feels like all the characters in your work are NPCs and have not come to life because the protagonist has traveled through time. So I feel that what I am watching is not a world, but a stand-alone game.

I want to show my loyalty to Uchiha Kaka! Sincerity! Otherwise, six sticks in one second will crush your Konoha soul [Punch]

It's a very interesting and semi-fun brainwave novel. The author's writing is passable and the plot is reasonable. Five-star praise. The main character is called Dou Huan. If you are familiar with it, you will know which type of meme it is. However, the main character is not funny, but has a charming personality. This kind of kinetic energy of swords, lights, swords and shadows, and the quiet energy of admiring flowers and moonlight is more to my liking.

It is not recommended to read comments. There are always self-righteous comments that affect your mood, especially those who criticize Obito. They always try to use realistic moral values ​​to evaluate the world of Naruto (thinking shackles). This kind of conceptual conflict affects your mood.

The rating shouldn't be so low. I've watched a lot of Naruto-themed movies on Tomatoes. This is the first time I've watched this kind of movie. Friends who can be united can make a lot of friends. It's really fun to use the will of fire to defeat people who often say the will of fire. The brainwashing tool of the Will of Fire, the romance of men.

Why are you resurrecting Minato Namikaze when you are ready to become Hokage? Are you making yourself uncomfortable? Just resurrect Uzumaki. Kindness is a taboo in the ninja world. Morals must change at any time.

It looks good, I love watching it, come more often, I have learned a lot in the past five years [Chigua] [Chigua] The battle scene lowered the score, and I can push flat but have to drag it [vomit], it is so difficult to hit Orochimaru with Kaleidoscope

I'm obviously not used to holding hands, so why did I take the initiative to hook them up? You have too many things on your mind, I won't expose them He is obviously gentler, maybe he can give you more Don't think that I will automatically become your friend, it's obvious that I will He is obviously gentler, maybe he can give you more No need to make a choice, I will automatically become a friend

"This work uses a unique narrative perspective to weave a richly layered story line. The arcs of the characters gradually unfold in the torrent of the times and the inner game. The intertwined scene construction of virtual and real not only retains the tension and beauty of genre literature, but also implies a poetic inquiry into the essence of existence. While enjoying the pleasure of reading, the reader can inadvertently touch the humanistic temperature at the core of the story." (🦐Review, not for reference)

I like the subject matter very much. I hope it can be strengthened in the later stage. It was really uncomfortable to watch at the beginning. I had already written the fourth generation and was still fighting, so I went to a meeting 😂 I have already discovered that there is a kaleidoscope. Facing such a weak patriarch, it is the best choice to directly coerce him into fighting. Talking to him so much gave him the opportunity to hesitate. The fourth generation does not need to die.

It's well written, has a lot of interesting content, and won't make you feel bored. And the writing angle is quite innovative. No More Lone Wolf is a novel that combines many aspects and is worth reading.

It's not bad. There are no big surprises. Except for controlling the name of the businessman too quickly and not laying a good foundation, I don't focus on writing about that aspect. It doesn't matter. But I skipped a lot. I don't know how the skipped parts are written.

Loyalty, I offer my loyalty to the Fifth Hokage 😠

Who did you offend? Now it's actually 5.7 Points. Such an interesting Hokage. Seoul Spring

Not bad, pretty good

It's the same as the coup in the Korean movie

Six sticks per second is not the limit, it must be visible to adults [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The front is a little boring, but it becomes more interesting after the revolution officially starts. It is interspersed with some classic jokes and is edible.

Overall it's good, especially when the protagonist becomes Hokage.

It's okay. It deserves five praises. The score should be above eight. Now it's a little lower. Overall, it's really okay.

It's a very interesting novel, but it has been maliciously criticized.

The ninja version of the Korean movie Seoul Spring

I haven't seen this kind of thing before, it feels like a Machiavellian plot, not only powerful.

The integration of themes is very innovative and just right, without excessively affecting the main line. However, in addition to strength, the power of politics cannot be ignored.

It's good to watch, and one of the more sincere Naruto fics. The ninja world is not only about killing and conspiracy, but also about political intrigue.

It's okay so far, but depending on how you write it, Shisui and Weasel will most likely have to struggle again😃

It's nice, but a little lacking.

Good, good, good, good

Is the author a girl? The writing is quite good.