I Have One Soul and Many Bodies, and They Are All Conscious!

The shaping of the world view and power system is slightly poor, but it has direct five-star praise from the little Loli education and training.

I would like to make some suggestions here. Regarding the description method, when you describe the monster, try to describe it in one stroke. For example, the monster can be described in general characteristics. Adding additional descriptions in places that are not important or other than the selling points of the book will only increase the reading load. Concise language is the best text. For example, just give some unimportant NPCs a label. But then again, you can write in detail about some important characters or places that involve the selling points of the book. Write, if there are very specific descriptions of the scenes that appear, it will only speed up the frequency of turning the book. Let me mention it again, if this monster will have a huge impact on the main plot of the future, and it will be equivalent to a boss or other existence that will always be alive. It is necessary to add more specific descriptions to describe the difficulty of killing, the huge sacrifice, the protagonist's strategizing, or the journey is fun, and the protagonist will be destroyed with a wave of his hand if others can't kill him (this is a cautious way of writing). The book still has a certain foundation. Anyway, keep going.

There are plots where the male protagonist and Lolita are cultivating each other, but there are too few of them (dog head)

When Liu Beiwen read

Pretty good pinch⊙ω⊙

The halo of the main sentence is extremely powerful

As for the current setting, I think of the book about the spirit-swallowing body [laughing evilly]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Are there any female imps? [Eating Melon]

Okay, okay, okay🉑

Although this book is not completely one soul and two bodies, it is still good.