HP: Another Black and Malfoy Pair

Very nice! The previous relationship between the heroine and Draco was super smooth, and the problem was solved very quickly. I love seeing this kind of thing where there is no misunderstanding! Unlike some books, one thing lasts for dozens of chapters. And the setting is also very in line with my preferences. Like the author's point of view, Regulus finally has someone who cares about him, but he doesn't like Sirius. I hope it will always be sweet in the future. The author will continue to write like this. [I'm full] More updates! Love watching!

A super nice article! First of all, Ellie is the daughter of Regulus [Admiration] and our Eastern snake demon🐍. It can be said that I like both parents very much! Secondly, Ellie herself is also a cute, optimistic, cheerful and lively Slytherin. It's my favorite college! And she doesn't have a condescending attitude, she is friendly and happy with her friends! Then the CP is also very arrogant Draco [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]! It combines so many things that people like! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Moreover, Deng Duoduo and Regulus cooperated to know the existence of Horcruxes in advance, making it easier to deal with Voldemort! It is a super nice article that is easy and attractive [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]! ! ! In the end, the big update has already tied it! Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! ! ! Want to see more! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Thank you all for your support and likes. I will not write about abuse in this book! Because the original intention of writing was to give everyone a good ending [to send my heart], the child was really abused and stupid. Every time I watched the movie clips, I felt uncomfortable. I still dare not rewatch the later ones, so I can only write a happy ending by myself. Regarding the creation of the heroine in this article, what I want is for her to be a well-loved child with a happy family. It would be better if she is more cheerful and lively. I want her to be happy, so I will not abuse her. The male protagonist Draco will also slowly change himself because of Ellie's existence. This change may not mean completely changing his ideas, but that he learns to do some "face work" and learn to disguise himself. Maybe he will really change later? I'm not sure either... Sometimes when I write, it's like the characters in the story have their own ideas. I originally wanted them to learn, but in the end, they just played [face covering]. All in all, thank you again for your likes. If you have any questions, you are welcome to comment. I will read it when I have time!

Small lightning protection: 1. If you like the three little ones and Sirius, you don't need to enter. The author's creation is biased towards the type where they have mistakes. If you don't agree with the author's point of view, it will be uncomfortable to read the article. 2. There is a plot where the heroine is frustrated. The heroine is not a typical Slytherin. There may be very few people who like to watch aristocrats' shrewd calculations. The heroine's personality is more lively and sunny, like koi fish. She is not a big heroine, but it is a cool novel. 3. There are basically no people who like to integrate into Chinese cultivators. 4. Focus on the characters that are popular and familiar to everyone. It seems that only Malfoy, Rey, Dundore, and Seid are described (other characters are not described very much. The female characters seem not to be described very positively, but they are not very negative. In my impression, most of them can be classified as pure-blood ladies. There are not many descriptions of Zhang Qiu. Hermione is not very popular in some parts. Emily's words seem to be original characters) The writing is not awkward to read, the story flows smoothly, and there is basically no discomfort. All in all, a pretty good HP

The content of this book is the same as the introduction the author wrote to us before! No lie, things like defeating Voldemort are indeed solved by adults. Then, the ambiguity between Ellie and Draco is also well written. Of course, Ellie also participated in solving the Voldemort matter.

Overall, it's a very good story. The heroine is the child of Rael and the Oriental snake demon. She is very powerful. Cp Draco, the relationship is very sweet and smooth. Under the influence of the heroine, Draco's attitude towards blood will change, but there will be no preaching or quarrels, it will be a subtle change. The heroine is not the type who always accommodates Draco. On the contrary, Draco will make changes for the heroine, which is good. There is no bloody plot, the ending is happy, there are no casualties, and the main characters are still alive and well. In the extra chapter, they try to give better help and changes to the original world line, and Rael of the original world line is temporarily rescued. Demining points: 1. Hermione's CP is Krum, not Ron 2. Rey is a bit of a brother-controller, and there are too many scenes in the part where Sirius escapes from prison. He doesn't care about Rey and Ellie at all, and only thinks about the Potter family. It's a bit frustrating. It makes people angry. Fortunately, after this part is over, Sirius doesn't appear often. 3. The heroine's way of dealing with things is more oriental. Although she is from the Snake House, she is relatively friendly and does not hit the smiling person. Ron has provoked the heroine several times, but the heroine did not care too much. Her attitude has passed.

Super pretty! The plot is reasonable, and the author has very good control over some details of the original work. It can be seen that he has read the original work many times. The characters are not OOC, so it is basically impossible to fault it, and it has surprised many people. Our sister has a great personality, is confident and friendly, and has always worked hard towards her ideals. She is a rare heroine with healthy and loving parents. The writing is smooth and I read it easily. In short, it is very well written. [Like]

The writing is good, not OOC. The heroine has a good character. I don't like Draco who is a villain, so it suits me very well, and it's not OOC. The small flaw is that the author likes to type the ellipsis into three periods. The trio was annoying at first, with the exception of Hermione who kept misunderstanding the heroines. This is the first time I read a Draco fanfic in which the female protagonist is slow to awaken and is slower to be attracted than the male protagonist. I enjoyed this bite. I always feel that the heroine is not completely attracted when she is with Draco. In the early stage, the two of them were very ordinary, and there was a little bit of fighting. However, it may be because the heroine is young. Later, the fighting was easier, and it was relatively dull. L The relationship between the two is very stable, and they will speak out if they have anything to say. The heroine will also praise the hero, and the hero is also a loyal dog. The heroine has a very good character and has a very charming personality. She does not regard love as the focus of her life and has her own career. I really like this kind of heroine. The article is logically written and very good. Everything comes full circle and is very complete. Spoilers: In it, I thought Flora was a villain, but she turned out to be a good person. . . There is GGAD in it

I really love the personal setting of this book. I was very sad about Rael's death. The combination between him and the snake demon in this book really touched my heart. Ellie is really cute, and the love between her and the young master is super sweet! My aunt has never stopped laughing since she didn't confess her love! It looks so good! ! !

God, such a beautiful book, me! Actually! Yes! Without! Have! Comment! Argument! Wow, sorry about Ellie and the author. It's really super beautiful, I love it to death [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses], the love between the original heroine Ellie Black and Draco Malfoy. Ellie's mother is a snake demon from the Eastern China. In order to find a way to become a human after the founding of the country, she came to England and met Ellie's father, the brave Regulus, and saved him, turning him into a human through the Animagus. The love between parents is super delicious, and the love between Ellie and Draco is also super sweet.

[There is demining] Sweet article! Purely sweet article! No abuse! No fifth grade breakup drama! The heroine and Draco were sweet from beginning to end, and the extras were not abusive (quietly, some of the extras were abusive [crying]), but the fourth grade ended quickly after Voldemort was solved [laughing and crying] The points to defuse are: the heroine has a great temper and is a very sunny and gentle Slytherin [laughing and crying], so she basically didn't reply much when being yelled at by a trio. Moreover, she is a virgin heroine (a compliment) and enthusiastically helped many people (including the trio). After more feedback from readers in the later period, the author did not write much about the trio. The heroine's father, Regulus, is quite a brother-in-law. Sirius will not come home after he is released from prison. When he sees the heroine, he pretends that he has not seen her as a relative. He only cares about Harry (it will get better later). There are many sub-CPs in this book, and I can still remember five pairs that had a lot of scenes, including ggad and Kehe, so those who like Luohe, be careful! If you are mentally prepared for the above, you can click in and take a look [Thinking] It's really great to just read the main CP. There are really too few Draco fanfictions like this that are pure and sweet.

Like it very much! ! To be strict, I like it very much so far, hahaha, but I don't think it will disappoint me in the future. The character and identity of the heroine are great. My selfish intention is whether Xiaolong can be strengthened in the future👉👈 I want the young master to be stronger [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Emma felt pretty good after reading it. The golden finger is not very open, but it feels very warm. It is a two-way love. I wonder if the author is interested in writing a novel with 16-year-old Tom Riddle as the male protagonist. It is a pity that this top beauty has no nose.

Although the relationship line in this book is average, because it is too easy to get together and there are no twists and turns, I really appreciate the silky kick box lunch. Having the support of the heroine's parents helped a lot in advancing the main plot, and there was no need to wait for the idiot San Xiao to guess (Mouri Kogoro in the HP world eliminated a wrong answer every time). I also like the fact that Draco and Sect's characters change smoothly, without any hard training or anything like that. It also integrates well with the Eastern immortal cultivation system. Many of the female protagonists are Chinese Taoist priests or other power systems that feel hard to integrate, and the combat power feels very messy (I hope Sri Lankan teachers can learn to make alchemy, haha, it's interesting, and I can use Chinese medicine to treat it). It's better to assume that the heroine is a mixed-race baby than a purely Chinese one (sure enough, two crooked nuts are more compatible), so just think of her as a cute black-haired crooked kid. Loved the way Buckbeak was handled, Draco was less arrogant and Hermione stepped in to protect him. In addition, this book does not slander Dundor and Lucius (many books do slander them, I don't really like this, after all, Lucius must be family in the end). The part about turning into a ferret was retained (Draco's version of ferret is just so cute), and the change was also very good.

The plot is reasonable and sweet, and it makes up for a lot of regrets. I have watched a lot of time-travelers in the past, and I used my knowledge of the plot, but I was very confused about how to stop and change the plot. However, this one does not have a time-traveler, but it reasonably completes the natural changes to the regrets of the plot. It is very interesting.

I like it so much😍, but it's not finished yet. Come on, I'm in my forties. [Crying] I've read a lot of books recently that I haven't finished yet. Come on, the author [blowing kiss]

My dear platinum young master, the heroine's character is pretty good, there won't be any plot where she apologizes on Draco's behalf.

I like it very much. The relationship between the heroine and Draco is very close and loving. I like the character of the heroine very much. Because of the heroine, Cedric, Sirius and other characters have survived. Highly recommended

This novel is really good! ! ! ! ! First of all, I am sure that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is sweet (¬◡¬)✧I think the emotional narration is perfect. There are also other sub-CPs in it which are also very nice! ! ! ! The second thing is its overall plot, which is perfect^O^ There are some plot changes in this novel that make me feel even more perfect! For example, I think it's great to use the living map to find Peter! I think the heroine's ideas and the inventions she invented make the story more complete. I also like the heroine's character. The logic of the novel is clear and the plot is online!!!! It settles a lot of regrets and the final ending is the best •̀ᴗ-The extra story tells the love story of the heroine's parents, it's so interesting and interesting! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! Like it (✪▽✪) It's worth watching friends!!!! In short, what I write now is different from my own feelings when I read it. I can't describe it. You just have to see it yourself to find out. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! Like like like like (*´ω｀*) [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Why does such a sweet article have such a low rating? The heroine is a little lucky star. Fighting against Voldemort is a grown-up matter. Regulus and his wife formed an alliance with Lao Deng and are on the front line. The heroine can always give them clues by chance. Draco is so cute in this book. I rarely read Draco's male protagonist, but this one is not exclusive. The heroine is a sweet girl who wants to be strong and competitive, a very, very cute girl.

Nice! Four stars is because it was not enough to watch. I didn't even realize the ending when I saw the finale. It ended a bit hastily. But overall it's still a very good sweet article [laughs] The writing is fresh and the characters are very delicate.

Super pretty! It's the kind of book that gets better and better the more you read it. The heroine has a very good design and is very three-dimensional. She has the shrewdness, calculation, and ambition of Slytherin, but also the qualities of kindness, wisdom, and helpfulness. The emotional line with Draco is pure and sweet, the characters are not OOC, and everyone has a happy ending.

This is the fastest death of Voldemort in HP I have ever seen. The heroine and the hero get along very sweetly, and there is no need to worry about abuse. The love between parents is also wonderful, the love between man and snake.

This book is much better than other HP novels I have read before. The heroine has very positive views and is not like the heroines in other books who deliberately make friends with the trio. The interaction with Draco also reflects his original character, and the plot written by the author is very realistic (very real and authentic)

It's really good to read, but it's not enough. Can the author Baobao write more articles? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I can't get enough, I'll update it soon [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] I seem to know who is so bad. It couldn't be Peter Pettigrew who appeared early [crazy][crazy]

I'll read another book about the heroine's parents. I've always liked Regulus. This parents line is so awesome.

Great! Ellie is like a little Hogwarts koi! The emotional line with Draco is also very easy to connect, and it comes naturally. Not too cruel, very nice cookies!

It's a very logical development. I'm very lucky to have the heroine, which can avoid some tragic endings that would have happened. The title is also very interesting. Black and Malfoy, snakes and dragons are also very suitable [laughs]

It's so beautiful. Why is the rating so low? [Sending my heart]