A Concubine with a Daughter's Wealth Would Not Dare to Take the Words of Gold and Good Words Seriously.

The character design is flawed (no impression points), the plot develops too fast, and several characters pass by at once, most of which are of no use at the moment. We can go into detail about Washington. Except for the protagonist, the images of other people in Washington are too skinny and one-sided, so there is no need for new characters to appear so early. A long plot has passed in 8 chapters, which is too fast for a long story. This is not a movie plot. However, the overall context of the story is clear, the emotional changes of the characters are very subtle, and the description of the characters' appearance is also very detailed. These are relatively obvious advantages, but they are not fully utilized. In summary, for a novice writer, it is great to be able to conceive a good story and have its own obvious advantages and use them effectively. I hope the author will continue to work hard [already planted] [Like]